samud os:ADHURI SI EK DAASTAN(vm updated)

Maya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

thsi was so good! so sweet and emotional!

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-bornalee-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: mymy_taarey
thsi was so good! so sweet and emotional!

thanx,m glad tat u liked it😃

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Ayushi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Sorry for late 😭 lasttime maaf krde..next time pakka cimment will cm soon. 😛
👏 Bonu i dont beleive it ur first time..its awesm yara..
Liked it from the core of my heart.😳
Very well written..Each nd every emotions were realy beautifuly u potraited..👏Great job sonu bonu..love it..plz keep writing.😊.Feeling so bad for saras..loved sunny feelings for his besties... 😭
Love u 🤗

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kittenlover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Wow..Bonu u r writing for the first tyme!!!... Its flawless...What a lovely one...😛 A new style... I loved it...😊

I am looking forward... :)

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-bornalee-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: kittenlover
Wow..Bonu u r writing for the first tyme!!!... Its flawless...What a lovely one...😛 A new style... I loved it...😊
I am looking forward... :)

thanx kitto🤗

m glad tat u liked it😳

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-bornalee-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: Ayushii_Angel
Sorry for late 😭 lasttime maaf krde..next time pakka cimment will cm soon. 😛
👏 Bonu i dont beleive it ur first time..its awesm yara..
Liked it from the core of my heart.😳
Very well written..Each nd every emotions were realy beautifuly u potraited..👏Great job sonu bonu..love it..plz keep writing.😊.Feeling so bad for saras..loved sunny feelings for his besties... 😭
Love u 🤗

its okk dnt be sorry..🤗 🤗

thanx yara..i love tat song so much..wenever i listen to it samud come to my mind😔

thanx for commenting..n m glad tat u liked it😳

love ya🤗

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..Zainab..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Omg I freaking loved ur os so muchhh!

Like I have no words it was tooo good!

U have left me speechless like I wanna say so much more but dont even knw how to

First really sorry for such a late reply!

I'm like out of my country right now waiting for someone so I was like I need to read her os it has been on the back of my mind fr so long nd here I am finally!

Girl ur a fabulous writer! Like so amazing!

Are u like serious that this is ur first well all I know it better not be ur last!

I want more! U portrayed nd conveyed every emotion so perfectly!

Seriously the way u have depicted kumuds feeling was so freakin amazing! I like read ur os three times nd I am going to be thinking bout it for a long time now!

Omg felt really bad for Saras!

Just please keep writin more ur really wonderful writer!

Sorry agin for the late comment! Do read my SS too! Nd I will be looking forward to ur future work!

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jyothi

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