samud os:ADHURI SI EK DAASTAN(vm updated) - Page 5

Originally posted by: arshi4evr16

Unres-

Buddy, really can't beleive you wrote an OS for the first time !! 😲

Your OS made me cry like anything bonu !! 😭

You depicted their feelings, love, hurt, pain so beautifully !!👍🏼

Short n sweet !! 😳

Loved it loads bonu !! 🤗

Please please keep writing ! 😳

I would love to read ur's !! 😳

My deep respect !! 😳

Love you bonu !! 🤗

P.s: very sorry for this late reply !!

I was busy with b'day preparations dear !!

Originally posted by: Saru...

Tu e pehlibaar likha bonu. U wrote it like exp writer loved it .can feel the pain samud went through . Got tears in my eyes at the end. Hope it doesn't happen like this in the serial. Amazing piece. Pls continue writing ur truly amazing. Love u take care

Originally posted by: -bornalee-

its ok manju

thanx for d review:)

will try to write more😆

love u too🤗

Originally posted by: arshi4evr16

No trying vying.. 😔

DO write one in your free time !! 😛

You'll be a great writer soon !! 👍🏼

Love you ! 🤗

Originally posted by: -bornalee-

thank u soo much for d review jaanu di🤗

yeah there is a possibility😭but i dnt want this to happen😭

Welcome dear. Will check the VM later n comment.
Bonu who wud want this to happen? SaMud r meant to b wife n hubby bas!! N if it happens na we will bheja fry all SC sites n make the CVs kill that Pramad pronto!!

Originally posted by: -bornalee-

ohkk madam😃

Very emotional os.it touched my heart.touchy vm too.it captured their feelings 2 d fullest.But i cant understand y kumud feels that Saras was just using her while saras loves her 2 d core?What made them split after consummation?plz reveal it

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Very emotional os.it touched my heart.touchy vm too.it captured their feelings 2 d fullest.But i cant understand y kumud feels that Saras was just using her while saras loves her 2 d core?What made them split after consummation?plz reveal it

Oh banu i never knew u r a os writer..as a 1st os u have written nicely..keep continuing.

Originally posted by: nabiii

Oh banu i never knew u r a os writer..as a 1st os u have written nicely..keep continuing.