samud os:ADHURI SI EK DAASTAN(vm updated) - Page 3

Originally posted by: PrOjeCtA

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Omg!!dat was a wonderful os!!! 👏
This is ma first os or ny wrk dat i.am readin on SaMud!nd i just loved it to the core!!!
First of ol i wanna compliment "U" as u r one of d highly talented writer!!🤗
i was totally engrossed in readin dis os.i so so loved it!

oye meri itni taarif maat kar😳writnig k maamle mei m kaccha😆
nd in midle dose poems!!ahhh!! THEY WERE JUST PERFECT FR UR STRY!!! 😃

ikr!!i love dis song😳
bt d ending made me feel bad fr kumud... 😭
nd her last hug to dt pic was so so so heart touchin di!!! 😳

i too cried while writing d last part😭
bt poor saras..evn he felt fr her till nw bt destiny had planned smethng else.. 😭
sho sho sho.shaad!!!
bt chuck it as dey wer nthng in frnt of ur writing skills!!! 🥱

thanx a ton fr d pm..
nd do keep writin lyk dis nd keep on makin us spellbound wid ur wrks!!bt dnt frget to pm me di!!!

glad tat u liked it sweetie😃

thnx for d review🤗

😊

Originally posted by: hunnybunch

Reserved will read and comment 😃

I'm so happy that you wrote an OS 😃
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Oh you made me cry Bonu 😭
Kyun le aayi thi woh pramod 😡

At least we could have happy and trouble free SaMud in our wishful thinking hai na 😭
But you wrote beautiful, I'm so happy you did it!
Now go ahead and write more, I'm waiting 😛

Originally posted by: poorvika

Wow superb yaar loved it... well written:-)

Originally posted by: lakhy

bonu...wonderful yaar...🤗

rula diya...muje..😭

i dont want this day in my samud's life...

ab tum ek weekend special bhi likdo...na...ek mast wali..

muje yeh rona dona...nahi chahiye

Originally posted by: -bornalee-

thnx di for ur review🤗

happy endings k liye aap ho na😉😆

uss pramad k liye kisine mujhe bahut daata😛😆

Originally posted by: Tabzy

Are u sure tis isur first os??🤔...it doesn't seem sooo...

It's beautifulll...luvd every bit of ittt...wanted to read more...😔