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Posted: 13 years ago
Why did u freeze the scene aish?????????????????/😛 LOL😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey guys ... pehle ka, bahot pehle ka ek FF hai mera, Dakshna ke ek weekend getaway ka ... uska contn ... chota sa part ... pehle wale ka link also i'l put jus in case ...


previous part ka link :



WEEKEND GETAWAY (contd )...

She looks around the room once, giving in to a mild attack of nostalgia. Everything is spic and span, no trace of the flowers trampled, no clothes strewn around. Housekeeping had removed all traces of their stay while they were out for lunch... she closes her eyes a moment, smiling... the dregs of romance were still there for her...she didn't have to look for tumbled sheets or the perfume of the crushed petals to remember...behind her lids she can see it all again, feel him, his arms around her, his lips on hers, and ... she turns to the window, a blush warming her cheeks.

His arms come around her then, and she leans into him, drawing his hands tighter together.

D : (drops a kiss on her cheek) kya soch rahi thi tum...

N : (wistful, looking out the window) Daksh ham kab nikal rahe hai yaha se...?

D : (nuzzling her shoulder) thodi der me... kyu... (smile in his voice) jane ka mann nahi kar raha...

N : nahi wo... (she turns in his arms) Daksh ye do dino me...iss impersonal si room se... kitni yade jud gayi hai...

D : (brushing a thumb across her cheekbone) yadein...

She smiles, looks at her bracelet and the smile softens.

N : (still looking at the bracelet, softly) ha...bahot sweet hai...

He raises her chin so he can look into her eyes...he keeps looking, and smiles when another blush adorns her face.

D : (places arms on her shoulders) vaise...Mrs. Patwardhan, bahot smart hai aap...(tweaks her nose) apne hamare saval ka jawab nahi diya...aur counter question kar diya hmm...

N : (slightly confused, thinking) tumhare sawal ka... (her vision darts to the bed; snaps back to him) ha woh...main...

again the bed gets a sideways glance, and he picks it up.

D : oho. (amused tone) Tho aap ye soch rahi thi... (slowly backing her towards the bed)

N : (flustered, blushing beet red) kya... (he scoops her up in his arms) Daksh...kya kar rahe ho tum...

D : (puts her down on the bed) kya kar raha hu... (leans in, smiling) thoda aur sweet karne ki koshish kar raha hu...yadon ko...

N : (smiles, then remembers)Par Daksh... hame... jana haina...

D : ha... (strokes hr hair) thodi der bad...

N : Daksh tum-(he places a finger on her lips, stopping her)

D : shh. Bahot bolti ho tum kabhi. Bad me, Matlab bad me. Chek out nahi kiya hai abhi so koi problem nahi hogi...

She opens her mouth again, and this time he cuts her off with a kiss.

They come up for air.

N : Daksh...

D : (brows raised) ab kya...

Rather than telling him, she smiles a secret smile, grabs him by the collar, and shows him the rest...





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Posted: 13 years ago
neetu di, sitakshi , mysti ... thnku guys🤗 ... i kno heartach tho muje bhi hai yar...par kya kar sakte hai ham... i've put up anthr one 4 u guys ...pad lena ...

Aish
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh.. aish.. it is super duper yaar.. iss Daksh bohot badmashi nikal gaye.. anyways.. wooow!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Daksh has become wayyy to naughty in our FFs!!!!!!!!!!😛😆😆 well done guys! keep going! @aish,
Superb FF dear...thanks🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
@ Neetu, Lucky, Aish
Guys u rock 👏 👏 👏... Thanks a ton for all the lovely FF🤗.🤗.🤗...and all the smiles😃😃😃😃😃... loved all your FF.😳😳😳😳... loved them all till infinity🤗.🤗🤗.🤗...


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Posted: 13 years ago

OK...so Now I am planning to end my dakshna HM series very shortly.😕.here we go..😛......

Contd from last FF.....(Heres the link for last FF)


Next day morning...

Dakshna are having coffee in balcony...

Naina; daksh...tumne apne laptop main kal ke pictures copy nahi kiya ab tak?
Daksh.; ab tak matlab? not fair naina..mjuhe time kaha diya tumne.hum wapas aaye ..frsh huye aur uske baad tho tumne...mera matalb humne.😆.
Naina; bas bas wahi rukh javo..ab tho karskate hain..karona mujhe dekhna hain...pls😛
Daksh; gets up; ab tum aisa cute sa chehra banakar pls kahoge tho😉...ok yahi raho abhi laata hoon gets up and gives his coffee mug to her...ye pakdo...aur mera coffee khatam mat karna..😆
Naina; tension mat lo..tumhara coffee hamare pass safe hain..
Daksh; bilkul mere dil aur jaan ki tarah jo tumhare pass hain.❤️..
Naina; wah kya line hain..daksh..👏
Daksh; thank u swt hr8.😛. goes in gets camerea and laptop sits besides her.aur copy kar ta hain...

Naina; hogaye!! chalo dekhte hain..
Daksh; closes the laptop; itni assani se tho nahi milenge...kuch paane ke liye kuch dena padta hain😉
Naina; very smart..lekin line galat hain
Daksh; sahi hain..ab tum sochlo kya dena hain...
Naina; dakhs..tum na ek number ki badmaash ..😊
Daksh; tumse kam badmaashi karta hoon agar maine tumhari badmaashiyon ka list nikalna shuru kiya tho...😆😆
Naina ; daksh ..pls dikhavona..
Daksh; main nahi pigalnewaala.aaj tho bilkul nahi...samjhi. thinks for a while...haan ek idea hain mere pass...
Naina; kya?😲
Daksh; yaad hain ek pe ek deal...ek photo ke liye ek kiss...kaho manzoor hain...
Naina; haan.lekin saare photos dekhne ke baad ek hi baar doo tho?😛
Daksh; main risk nahi le sakta...aur aise mamlo main tho main bhut strict hoo.😉.
Naina . haan haan ...jaanti hoon vakkel saab. hmmm ok...deal..ab tho dikhavo.. 😊
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Daksh; ek aur idea hain..saare kisses pehle dedo..tab jaake saare photos ek hi baar dikhadunga..kuch 50-60 honge...( winks at her)😉
Naina; main bhi risk nahi le sakthi..ek pe ek hi acha hain.😛.
Daksh; Jaise tumhari marzi..ab chalo aajvo...

..opens up lap top

CONTD...

Edited by lucky.m - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
CONTD...

Dakshna photos dekh rahe hain lap top main...

Daksh; laughing.😛.naina yaha par tho tumne aankhen band kar liya.😆..
Naina; tum bata sakte the..jaanbhooch kar tumne photo nikala taaki tum mujhe tease kar sako😳..( pinches him)
Daksh ; ouch!.(rubbing his cheek)..Hamara deal picnh karne ka nahi hain...brings his cheek closer to her...😛
Naina smiles and gives him kiss on cheek.😳..Daksh; ab next...

Iss tarah dono lage huye hain deal poora karne main.😍..lil fights..lots of smiles..

Naina; Salman ka pose...(starts laughing)...
Daksh; tumne rokh diya tha..warna..
Naina; warna..kya bina shrt ke ghoomte na poore park main..bada aaya salman khan...( continues to laugh)..😆
Daksh; haso haso...sach ye ki tum darr gayi kahi mujhe bina shirt ke dekhkar..ladkiyan fida na hojaaye..
Naina; aisa kuch bhi nahi hain...
Daksh; kyu? kal raat tumne hi ne tho kaha ki..is low husky tone;whispers in ear main hot hoon😳( drops a kiss in ear
Naina lil blush..😳.
Daksh .( thinking for a while)..kya naam tha uska haan..sheetal..woh tho bas aise hi. fida hogayi
Naina; lagta hain bahut yaad aarahi hain uski( lil gussa)😡
Daksh; haan bahut jyada yaad aa rahi hain..kitni sweet thi na..aur..😆
Naina;ab bas bhi karo... bahut hogaya...😡
Daksh; jab tum jalti ho tho uar cute lagti ho.😉.
.Naina gives a killer look
Daksh; hai hai..aur tumhari aankhen...jab tum aise dekhti ho tho.😆..Naina gives a lil smile looking at his lost expression😊

Daksh; aur tumhara smile..😆.thoda tho reham karo..smile se hi maarne ka irada hain kya swthr8😉
Naina starts hitting him;😆
Daksh; aur kya maarti ho..ek dum..😆
Naina; daksh...
Daksh; aur jab tum mera naam aise pyar se leti ho tho😆...(laughs looking at her)...
Naina; offo pls daksh..bandh karo na..tang mat karo😕
Daksh;continues to laugh...

Contd...

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow.. kya baat.. hai.. kya ff likh liya.. 👏 very very beautiful.. i loooved it.. 😳
Edited by ntsindia - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow lucky!! wow!!👏 so so good!!!😃 loved both of them!... now we see the real daksh patwardhan and what he is capable of!😆 u have made him such a big flirt!😛😆 cant wait for the next one...😃

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