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Posted: 14 years ago
Dakshna comes out from their feelings and looks at each other's eyes. Daksh a little bit KP but allows her to go.. Naina corrects her saree and abt to leave.. he holds her hand and tells romantically: jaldi vaapas ana.
Naina gives a shyful smile. she leaves..
Daksh feels better.. he takes a sigh of thrill and says himslef.: Daksh, Naina shows a +ve attitude.. !!!
He with happiness comes and sits on the bed and lies on the pillow.. takes another pillow and hugs.. : lagta hai kal door rahne se kamse kam kuch to fayada huva hai.. smiles himself..
he gets up and takes the night dress from wardrbe.
Meanwhile downstairs...
naina takes the milk glass and abt to rush in their room.. but Kaki came for some chat nd she should stay.. then Kaka.. after that baba... naina could not go to room.. she is staying there but her mind is near Daksh. she tries to show smile but looks at the staris often.
In room.. daksh thinks.. lagta hai.. woh phool gayi.. yeh kaki ko bhina.. abhi bulana tha..
he gets up and walks here and there.. impatiently.. at last he becomes KP.. them tries to relax.. at last decided to go down and see why she is late.. but if anybody sees.. what will they think? at last his eyes fall on the empty water jug. he decides to take water..
in the downstaris.. he comes down.. naina looks at him.. he stops.. eye to eye conversation - yeha kya kar rahi ho..
N: dekho na daksh.. mein kaise avoongi...??!!!
While their i2i conversation is progressing, Aku sees Daksh
A: Dada aapko kuch chahiye?
D: ha.. P… paani..!! [he stretches the hand with jar]
Aku is coming with another jug of water for her room:
A: ap yeh le leejiye..
Daksh takes the jar and goes.. Again dakshna
N: tum jaavo mein abhi ati hoo.. Dekho na.. mein kaise faz gayi
Daksh comes in the room and waits her impatiently.. naina is finding reason to go from the chat group. but she cannot. she is also impartient to talk with him.. doesn't know how lonely she felt in the previous day adn night.
at last she set free from them and Naina hurrily comes to the room... intezar karake karke bechara dash so gaya hai.. naina feels a bit disapponed. she goes to the sofa and sleeps..
meanwhile ayi is trying to recall all the things and Daksh still gives his deposite.. like baba said, whether still Naina helps them or not. she starts to thin abt rohini's behavior.
Next morning.. Naina is drying her hair after her bath and she sees Daksh through mirror.. she comes near him.. Daksh opens eys and looks at her... he pulls her towards him.. Naina falls on him..
N: arre kya kar rahe ho.. time bohot ho gaya... jana nahi hai kya..?
D: bhool gaye.. aaj sunday hai.. Muje abhi udna nahi hai. Naina gets up and says: par muje kitchen mein bohot zyada kaam hai.
Naina continues drying her hair. Daksh closes eyes and still on bed. Then gets up. "Mera neend bhi gayi."
N: voh to accha hai.. suna hai lazy log der se sote hai… She pulls him from bed and drag and pushes him to wash room: jaldi se fresh hokar aa javo.. daksh reluctantly and lazily obeys.. Naina smiles… she puts the towel on the chair and starts her make-up. From wash room daksh calls.. naina towel kaham hai… zara towel lo na.. he opens the door slightly and peeps from bathroom. Then only she understood towel is in her hand. She takes it from the chair and stretches the same into washroom. He holds her hand and pulls her inside the washroom. Naina wonders.
N: Daksh!! yeh kya kar rahe ho.. keeping her inside daksh closes the door.
D comes near her with nuaghty look, Naina looks at him : he abt the hugs her.. Daksh no.. pls.. she push him back
Daksh's hand stuck on the pipe of shower and it gets on .
Both of then get wet under shower.. Naina.. hugs Daksh..
D looks at naina..
N: oh. tune kya kiya daksh.. mein poori tarah wet ho gayi...
D: meine kya kiya? tum muje push kiya aur shower accidently on huva tha na..
telling this, he looks at her from bottom to top.. her saree is stick on the body... Naina tille bit shy..
Daksh comes forward... both lost... the water drops from both's hair.. there is a water drop abt to jump to Naina's lips frome her nose. Daksh come forward and Naina backwards and she stuck on the bathroom wall.. Daksh comes closer to her nose... Naina's heart beat come faster. Daksh coems closer.. Naina closes her eys..

They hear Aku's voice.. Naina.. naina... Dakshn stunned,... Naina abt to answer but Daksh puts his hand on her lips.
N think.. what i was abt to do...? then they hear.. Aku's voice lighten and they could understand she has left.

Daksh abt to continue fom where they stopped.. naina is afraid.. "nahi daksh.. lagta hai dawaza khuula hai.. aur koyi aa jate to. aur pata nahi akruthi kyu bula rahi hai.. muje jaana hai"
he becomes KP.. murmers yeha se kuch nahi hoga..

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Posted: 14 years ago
Neetu super duper yaar 😊 wonderful😉 ... loved it👏... y always there has to be kaki, aku kabab main haddi😡 Bechara Daksh Can't have a peaceful moment with his wife alone 😆 Hope he takes her out somewhere where only two can enjoy each others company 😉 Keep going dear 😊 whats next 😍
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Posted: 14 years ago

Yeha kuch nahi hoga.. Naina looks at him.. Pata nahi.. Kyu mere saath aisa hota hai.. Koi na koyi sahi vaft pe aate hai.. He opens the door nd tells.. Tum jaana chahti ho na.. To javo.. [full to KP] . Naina holds the handle and closes the door. Comes near him. She looks a bit appealing.. Puts her hands around his neck. Husky voice "kya huva..? Mera Kute Pink KP kyu Karela Padwarthn ban gaya??"
D: Iss ghar mein ane ke baad apni khud ki biwi ke sath vaft bitane ke baat to chod.. Teek se bat bhi nahi kar pata.. Naina gives a looks with lot of love to him and leans on her toe and gives a warm kiss on his cheek and hugs him. Daksh becomes lost and hugs her warmly. After sometimes she tells.. "sab kuch teek ho jayega Daksh…" he feels better... he gives sweet kiss on her cheek and lips.. They come out from each other's arm. "ab mein teek hoo.. tum javo.. jakar kapde badalo.. beemar pad jayega..".
N: nahi.. tum pehle jaavo.. darwaza khula hai, lagta hai..
d: teek hai.. [he gives the towel to her]
meanwhile in kitchen..
Aku: Ayi.. aap Naina ko dekha? kab se doond rahi hoom.. kamre mein bhi nahi hai..
Kaki: nahi.. shayad voh terrace mein hogi.. kapde sukhane ke liye gayi hogi..
Ayi notices these and thinks how sweetly they live...?
After sometimes both Daksh and Naina come to dinning table. daksh looks very happy.. naina also. Kaki already prepared the break fast and all sit togther and have it.

In the other side, Rohini maharani and Sanket is havign food. Ayi is serving it. Ayi looks tired. after comeplteing Sanket;s food he gets up and goes.. after that Rohini keeps complaingi the food.. namak kam hai.. here baba aur sab feel bad.. but not telling anything. Sanket comes back for saying good bye to ayi.. and he notices her health is too weak.. and he scolds Rohini in comapling the food she prepared in this condition also. and asks ROhini to do all the work at home and let ayi to take rest. Ronini feels... it is necessary to make Sanket against Ayi. othewise, none of her plan will be done. She plans.. remeber two days back, daksh naina ko permission de diya to expose ROhini rite [in my FF]? Naina plans something. from the day when Ayi lies on sofa onwards Naina knows Sanket does not know the real picture so she plans to do something. She fixes cameras in Kitchen and Hall. Ayi is treated as a servant in the day and night. Rohini maharanhi does not give break fast for ayi also. when Ayi comes to attend Adharv she tells "not to touch m son".. ayi feels bad and she starts to show a reluctance. In the evening kitchen, Ayi is asked to prepare the food for baby. she preapres and goes for calling Rohini. she asks to take Adharv... and she boil it and off the gas. Sanket comes in the eveing. She asks Sanket to take the food prepared for Adharv. Sanket takes it and rohini asks "dand kar diya na ayi??"
A: haa..
she touches the food and tells is it too hot.. "ayi aap aisa kyu karti haio.. mere bache ka jaan.. " usual hangama.. Sanket stunned.. ayi tries to tell something but Sanket tells "jab rohini ne kaha to muje yakeen nahi huva tha.. par.. aap. aisa kuch karenge. i can't beleive this..." Rohin i smirk... ayi looksbroken.. "she yells.."
on the other side all could understand what happened. Naina pretends cool and says to Kaki..
N: Kaki.. aapka ssas-bahu serial suru honewala haina.. ayiye hum dekthe hai..
all look wonderly at Naina.. Naina turns on the TV and tells.. ayi aap ka serial mein hain.. kuch reality nahi hai.. mein aapko ku real saas-bahu drama dikhate hai.. usme aapki serial jaisa saas bhu ko nahi balki bahu saas ko torture karti hai..
she puts a CD in the player and shows the live show happened in the Padwathen house. Sanket gets shocked in seeing how his wife treats his mother and instead she tells Ayi is behaving like arrogant.. she asks Ayi to not touch her chikd and tells hime that ayi is not taking care of her son. she boiled the food of Adharv and accuses that Ayi did it.. her real colr is revealed.
Naina gets up with gr8 anger and says Rohini: mein pehle bhi kayi baar keh diya tha.. muje aapka sachaayi reveal karne mein pressurise mat karna.. par aaj.. aaj.. aap sara hade paar kar diya..
ayi is shocked hearing this... with regret with gratitude she looks at Naina.. she has no words to say.. Kaka comes forward and tells.. at last baba asks "vibha.. ab tumhe pata cha gaya hoga na... mere kehne ka matlab?"
Daksh: haa ayi.. aapka yeh problem tha...ap ek side ke baat sunkar fisala le lete hai... kisi ko nahi sunna nahi chahthi... agar uss din mere aur naina ka baat sun liya ho to koyi problem nahi hoti dhi.. jab sonakshi keh diya to aap use promise de diya... bina samachke sachayi kya hai.. kamse kam aap baba ke baatem sun lya to...

Ayi realises her fault.. but does not tell anything and goes to Ganaapti pappa...

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Posted: 14 years ago
Yaar neetu,

U solved the whole problem with a simple CD😛..awww..hats off dear👍🏼..kaash CV's ke dimmag main ye baat aati tho hum sab aaram se rehte..😡

Dakshna romance😳..too cute.😍.I am vry happy ki naina didnt run away as soon as daksh opened the door.😆.real SSBN main tho aisa hi hota..but in ur FF...oh..so sweet of her🤗..and dakshu..how romantic😳..loved it...👏👏
Edited by lucky.m - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh Neetu u made is so simple and easy 😊 sab problem ek jhatake main solve 😉 very nice 👏 Loved the Dakshna romance 😳 Kash Kash we get this soon in SSBN too... 😍 😍 😍 😍
Thank u dear 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lucky and Rupali..

Thanks a lot dears... 😊

yah i really want this boooring track should be ended soon and send Dakshna to have romance after that. in current situation, Dakshna romance will be seen only after solving the problems... yah.. i am pretty sure in SSBN this will not be happen to expose all at once - eventhough it is so easy and all others except Sanket and Ayi are sure abt Rohini's this dirty game. 🤢So I thought at least in my FF all be solved soon. 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
guys.. i wanted to continue my FF.. but.. time.. i wil do it later.. till then i expect some from you..
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Posted: 14 years ago

ohk... dis s 4 lucky nd neetu di 🤗🤗...am sry reply itnaaa late aa raha hai last ke itne sare ffs ka wo bhi ek sath, bt i wsnt here 4 so long due 2 a myriad reasons , some f dem being technical probs (ok i kno smebdy s laughin cos dey kno xactly wat😆) aur xms 2 say d least😛 ... no excuse 4 missin out on ur sweet, sweet, sweet ffs ... thnku thnku thnku both🤗🤗🤗🤗...





loads f smil😊s nd thnkus (srys 2😳),
aish
Edited by sweetaish - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey evryone🤗... lagta hai barso se kuch post nai kiya yaha ... so i hv sometihn simpl abhi, hop u guys lik t 😳...


coffee @ midnite

Bedtime.

She comes after changing into her Pjs, finds him at his table, poring over a file, with this sober expression on his face. She's towelling her hair dry, watching him all the time. He pauses over some point, frowns, leans in a bit closer to read it properly. Amused, she puts the towel away, and comes to stand behind him, careful not to make a sound, peers over his shoulder. He pushes the glasses up his nose, and sits back, turns the page.

N : (puts her arms around him) kya concentration hai, vakil saheb...

D : (presses a kiss onto her hand) tumhari bhi...(puts in a pen for a marker, closes the file)

N : kis par...?

D : mere papers par :p ... (turns to smile at her) tum na, bahot bolti ho. Aur kabhi saya bhi tumhara itna bat karta hai mujse, ki aur kuch kehne sunane ke liye bachta hi nahi hai...

N : (pouts) Matlab mere shadow tumhare file par.

D : (laughs) jasoosi aise nahi karte. Me kuch lessons du...

N : tum kiski jasoosi karte ho...?

D : (thinks) actuali jasoosi kam aur chori zyada hai ma'm. Par lessons tho ham de sakte hai...

N : (pinches his nose) haan, haan pata hai. Mera dil tho kabka chura liya tumne, aur kya kya churate ho...?

D : (gets up, takes her in his arms; fondly) tumhe... chori chupe dekhta hu jab tum dekhti nahi ho...

N : chori chupe kyu...

D : (head-butt) adat lag gayi isliye...

N : kab se...?

D : bahot pehle se hai...muje pata bhi nahi tha ki muje tumse pyar ho gaya tha...tab se... jab tumhe pata nahi hota, tum apni hi duniya me rehti ho...baki sabke beech me ho, to bhi...alag si, cute si... bahot pyari lagti ho tabhi...

N : (blushes) daksh...

D : (still busy admiring her) hmm...?

N : Raat bahot ho chuki hai, baki ka kam kal nahi kar sakte...

D : (thoda lost) nahi...

N : kya...? kyu...

D : (snaps out) Naina tum so jao, thoda sa aur hai karke aa jata hu me...

N : par daksh... bahot late ho raha hai...

D : (strokes her face gently) tumhe neend aa rahi hogi bahot...

She nods...

D : tum so jao, me thodi der me aa jaunga...(she opens her mouth to protest, he cuts her off, smiling) nahi, bilkul argue mat karo. Me khatm karke hi aunga...

Seeing as he is no mood to compromise, she gives up, finally. He smiles some more, drops a kiss on her forehead. "Good night, sweetheart..."

She smiles, kisses him on the cheek, lets go. He goes back to his files.

Few minutes later...

N : (from the doorway, sounding like she's under a mountain) Daksh...

D : (whirls around) kya hua .. ? Naina...? (she's trying to balance two cups of coffee, and a couple of files too)

N : ab wahi baithe rahoge... (almost tipping a mug over, trying 2 balanc it all) ya meri madad karoge tum...

He goes to her, takes a mug and the files from her.

N : thank you.

She sets the mug on his tables, gets the stuff from him and goes to the couch. He stands ther, looks at the mug on his table, and at her on the couch.

D : kya hai ye sab...

She tucks her feet, opens a file, and looks at him, smiling.

N : (obviously wala expresn) coffee... Tumhe chasma rakhke bhi nahi dikhta hai kp...(she sips hers, settles into the couch)

D : naina, maine tumse kaha tha-

N : tumne kaha tha argue mat karo...(impish smile) nahi karungi. Tum apna kam karo, me apna karti hu.

D : (exasperated) Naina...

N : (smug) me argue nahi karungi. (pretends to study the file)

He shakes his head smiling, sits down at the table...

Thodi der bad, he looks at her, doubtful.

D : Naina...

N : (yawns) ha daksh...

D : so jao na tum... pls...?

N : daksh tum (yawns again) jaldi khatm karo, meri taraf mat dekho distract ho jaoge(smiles).

D : meri ek bhi bat nahi manogi na...

N : (shakes her head no, smiling )jaldi khatm karo na KP... coffee aur le au...?

D : nahi rehne do...

She smiles at him, leans back into the cushions, puts up her feet and goes back to almost-nodding-off on her file...

Minutes pass and she's dozed off wahi pe, file in hand.

He lets the papers be, walks upto the couch quietly. Sits on the edge, careful not to wake her. takes the file from her hand, puts it away. Puts out a hand to brush the stray hair away from her face, gently, and sits there a minute, a half smile on his lips. He gets up, deciding to carry her to the bed- she pulls his hand back down, opens her eyes and smiles at him.

N : (softly) ho gaya kaam...?

D : (nods) chale ab...

She smiles, holds out her hand. He helps her up, turns the lights off and takes her to bed.

N : (cuddles up; softly) adhi raat ko uth kar tho nahi jaoge na...

D : (soft laugh) tumhe pata nahi chalega tho...? (pulls up the blanket)

N : (burrows closer in2 him) dekh lenge...

D : (kisses her hair) good night...

N : (sleepily) good morning bhi ho gaya hoga...so jao na ab...

D : ok...

N : daksh...

D : hmm...?

N : I love you...

D : love you too...

He tucks the blanket around her, and drifts off to sleep...


... contd ...

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey guys🤗its me agn ... coffe @ midinte ka baki ...



fm...nd madhoshi ...😛



Dakshna apne flat me.

Morning. Birds chirping, sunlight filtering in...

Dakshu's lying face down, reaches out for her...and comes up with thin air. He shifts a little, almost falls off the edge...and then realises he's on the couch, and not the bed...

Naina's cooking, the clock getting an occasional glance. She picks up her phone, fm lagati hai...

The first song dat's on :

Aaj madhosh hua jaye re

Mera mann, mera mann...

A soft smile on her lips, she goes back to her cooking.

He pulls the cushion off the headrest, looks at it, then at the blanket tucked around him...looks around some...finds his papers, couple of files neatly stacked at the foot of the couch, specs on top...and smiles, remembering.

She's still cooking, the song is still on, and she's humming along.

Aaj madhosh hua jaye re

Mera mann, mera mann, mera mann..

Shararat karne ko lalchaye re,

Mera mann, mera mann...

And then his arms come around her; she smiles some more.

D : (drops a kiss on her cheek) perfect gana hai...

N : (laughs) good morning.

D : (softly, in her ear) good morning...(ek aur fleeting kiss) uthaya kyu nahi mujhe...

N : kal raat ko itni der se soye the, isliye...

D : hmm...(lifts the lid off a dish, keeping an arm around her) pohe...? (smiles)

N : ha, pohe. acha ye batao aaj Sunday hai, adhi raat ko uthke kam karne ki kya zarurat thi tumhe...

D : agar me adhi raat ko nahi uthta, (draws her closer, softly)...aur kaam khatm nahi karta, (puts her hair to one side, skimming his fingertips along her shoulder) tho ...

N : (closes her eyes, leaning into him) tho...

D : (nuzzling her) tho aaj tumhe...

Naina waits, eyes closed.

D : (drops a kiss there ) tho aaj tumhe bahar le jane ka program cancel ho jata. (lets her go, smiling)

N : Daksh tum- (she hits him, then remembers, checks the pohe, which are still on the stove) khana jal jata abhi...tum bhi na. Subhe subhe badmashi shuru.

D : (cutsie smile) coffee ...?

She points towards the jug. He pours some out.

N : vaise acha hai couch par so gaye tum. (takes the pohe off the stove) uthne ka naam nahi le rahe the waha se...(he frowns into the coffee) table pe hi so gaye hote tho...(shakes her head)

D : (baby face) tum tho aise keh rahi ho jaise mene table pe sone ki adat laga rakhi hai...

N : (laughs)daksh...tum kitne cute ho...(peck on his cheek) ab jao nahake aao, me khana laga deti hu tab tak...

Meanwhile, baki ka gana...

bheegaa bheegaa nashilaa din hai,

kaise kaho pyaase rah paaye...

She turns to the counter for something; he gets hold of her hand, one sharp tug and she's in his arms...

N : (flustered) daksh...

D : (gives her a once-over, smiling) hmm...?

N : (blushing) chodo na...

D : (shakes his head no) tumhe pata hai naina, tum bhi bahot(drops a kiss on her cheek)... cute lag rahi ho aaj...

N : (lowers her eyes) chodo ab, sab jal jayega nahi tho...

D : (searching her eyes) aise kaise chod du...

She stares back, lost as usual...

the milk boils over, bringing her back to the earth.She rushes over, turns it off. He hands her a dishrag.

She looks at him, frowning and he gives her an impish smile.

D : sorry...

She starts cleaning the mini mess.

D : wo...naina...ab tumne gana aisa lagaya tha ki...(he leaves the rest of it when she looks at him again) ... (baby face agn) sorry kaha na maine...

She cant hold out any longer, and smiles. "ab jao tum. Aur badmashi mat karo, warna aajke sare plans cancel ho jayenge."

D : (laughs) pata hai. Cancel ho hi jata sab...

She gives him a warning glance, he smiles some more...

N : (shoves him towards the door) ab jao warna baki ka kaam tumse karvaungi me...

D : acha baba jata hu, jata hu...

He goes off den; she shakes her head, gets back to work, smiling...

sry i wsnt here 4 so long ... xms hai, nd loads more ... hope u guys likd it😊 ...

smil😊s,

aish

Edited by sweetaish - 14 years ago

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