Dakshna FF(Fan fiction) - Page 81

Oh..i was thinking now days none of us interested in posting FF also. So I was planning to write to exscape from the current booorrring track. but now saw lucky's super duper FF.. wow Lucky..!!!

anyway, here is an FF for current track.. just to get a relief from the current track.

Padwarthan Niwas - Night.

[Since Baba has back pain, they already decided to each of them will sleep in hall.. Now it is Daksh's turn. Baba is in Dakshna's room, Kaka-Kakai in their room, Naina is with Akruthi and Daksh in hall. I am not sure whether the things at Ayi's room is removed or not. however in my FF, it is still there and ayi has to sleep in hall.]

In hall... Ayi is suffering from pain and trying to sleep. In Dakshn's side Daksh comes with pillow and blanket. Seeing that Ayi pretend that she has slept. In sofa, dask is tiring to sleep. he turns this side and other side. Ayi fro her side sees the same and wants to ask him to go and sleep in room.. but she closes her eyes to show she has no concern abt him. There in Aku's room, Naina cannot sleep.. she is turning this side and other side. She thinks abt the old incident that Daksh had to sleep On sofa and he had back pain at that day... she gets up and comes down. She looks Ayi.. "yah she has slept.." then she moves near Daksh... she sees the blanket is on the floor and pillow is not under his head.. she corrects it and strokes his hair. then cover the blanket well... and abt to leave.. Daksh holds her hand and stops.. Naina turns towards Daksh..
N: Daksh tum soye nahi?
D: kya huva? tumhe need nahi ati??
N: mein sirf itna janne ke liye ayi hai ki tumhe kuch chahiye...?
D: takes a naughty sigh and tells: ha.. par nahi... tum nahi dogi...
N: kya? kya huva..?
D in soft voice: agar patakar bhi tum aise kahegi.. bhool gaya kya? hame pehle bhi tair kar liya... jab tab ayi-bab- muje bahu ke roop se sweekar nahi karti.. tab tak hum ek doosre se aisa nahi karenge..
N looks at him.. D looks sad.. ayi's wonderd - kya?
N: Daksh chup kar... ayi sunenge..
D: don't worry.. Ayi soyi gayi...
N looks at him and smile - tum bhi na..
D: ha .. muje acha nahi lagta.. room mein hote to kamse kam tumhe dekhkar so sakte hai na.. [little sad]
N: Accha...?
D: Muje pata hai.. tumhe bhi bura lagta hai.. isiliye tum muje dekhne ke liye yeha ayi... aur mein voh expect bhi kiya..
N: Nahi.. muje koyi bura nahi lagta.. mein isilye ayi hoom ki muje pata tha tume aise hi rote rahte hogi... bina pillow se aur bina blanket se... yaad hai.. us din kya huva tha? agale din tumhara kamar mein dard hori thi?
Daksh smiles...
N: ab mein sab teek kar diya.. tum so javo..
D: tumhe need ati hai?
N looks at him.. :kya huva? [it seems he wants her presence]
D: Daksh holds her hand: thodi der yehi baido na?
naina sits on the sofa and daksh lies on her lap.. she slowly strokes his hair.. and looks at Ayi sadly... Daksh notices it. he gets up: Naina ab tum apna rona suru mat karna...
N: Nahi Daksh.. par muje bohot bura lagta hai.. tumhe pata hai.. aja ayi ko kitne takleef huyi hai?? uska kamar bohot dukha rahi thi.. pata nahi vahini aise kyu kart hai..
Daksh hugs her and : don't worry Naina.. everything will be Ok soon..
N: Par kab Daksh.. ayi ka yeh halat dekhkar hum kaise.. ?!! muje poora yakeen hai agar dada ko pata chala to voh vahini ko rokega.. par.. par.. baba ne muje mana kiya haina kuch bhi karne ke liye..
[ayi is shocked in hearing their conversation]
D show a little bit smart.. Naina... tumhi na keh diya tha na us din.. jab Ayi-Baba ke account mein paisa dalne mein ayi muje mana kiya to? tumhi ne keh diya na.. Beta.. tum kisi ko kuch patane ke zaroorat hai.. bas bete hone ke nate tum apna farz poora karo.. .. isi traha mein kehta hoom.. "beti...tum bahu hone ke nate apne sasuma ko madat kere rahnna.. sabh kuch teek ho jayega.. "
N: Sach.. kya mein kroon daksh?
D nodes head : yes..
They hugs.. ayi absolutely shocked.. kya.. yeh sab ka matlab kya hai...? she lost is thoughts of Bab's words, aku's words...

Next morning..

Dakshn's room..
D: Naina.. muje pune mein ek client ko milna hai.. shayad aaj mein vahi rukna hoga.. naina feels a little bit sad..
N: daksh tum...?!!
D: don't worry.. mein poori tarah se koshish karoonga aaj hi vapas ane ke liye..
Dakshna haugs each other.. after sometimes Naina mananges herself and packes his dresses..
Daksh leaves.. both kisses each other.
D: To mein chaltha hoom.. oh anh.. zyada inn sare bato mei aakar apne apko stress mat dena teek hai..
(naina nodes her head.. litle bit sad.. ) kuch bhi hote to muje phono zaroor karna... (takes a sgh..) pata hai.. baba, kaka-kaki, akruth aur sabb hai yeha.. par phir bhi... (becomes sad)
nana: aisa koyi baat nahi hai daksh.. yeha baba aur sab haina.. tum chinta mat karo... apna khayal rakhna..

On terrace... Ayi thinks whta may be the real intension of Naina? whetre she has any fault in understanding Naina? she decids to check the account of Baba..

After Daksh has gone.. Naina too woried... she is out of mind... Aku teases.. "dada ka yaad ati hai..?" naina shows smily face but in her mind she feels lonely.. in the evening she was arranging the wardrobe.. when she takes one his shirts she remembers the old good memories... she pats the sleeves of the shirt and lost in thoughts.. saving fromMr singhania, goons, Pune trip, lonavla villegers house, teacher's house etc etc.. [i would like to Naina dreams Daksh].. she is missing him badly.. Aku comes and call her for dinner.. then only she could remeber abt the time..
she goes to ddning table... everybody is having lunch.. ayi nocitces the same from her side. how happily and calmly they have food.. Naina looks at Daksh's chair and lost in thoughts.. Kaki asks something and Naina does not answer. everybody wonders what happened to naina.. baba asks something and Naina gives answer but not clear.. suddenly a call comes and Naina excited and attend the call: tum khana khaliya daksh.. ? everybody got what made Naina's mood..
She comes back.. Aku teases: lagtha hai kisi ne dada ko bohot miss karti hai..
naina gets shcked.. she adjusts the situation..

b4 going to bed naina calls daksh... dkah shares his sadness in staying away from her.. naina abt to weep.. Daksh consoles her and tells he will reach by next day noon..

Next day noon aku, kaki etc are sitting on the sofa.. from Ayi's side Ayi also.. evrbody in their regular chat... but naina looks lost in somwwhere.. Aku is asking Naina something and suddenly Naina senses something and excited: Daksh!!! Daksh aa gaya..?
evrybody wonders.. no they are not seeing anybody.. suddently they could see Daksh steps in the hall.. wonders how Naina could understand without seening him! Ayi also wonders from her side..

naina runs near him and abt to hug but suddenly she understhds the situaion.. she takes the bag from him and ask him to clean his face and hands.. and prepare for lunch.. all together had their lunch.. Dakshna has some eye to ey talks.. Daksh is eager to talk with naina.. but sometimes kaka, otherwise baba, or in other times Aku asks something and he deos not get chance to meet naina.. he becomes kp in mind and does nto show..
In Dakshna's room.. naina corrects the bed sheet and Daksh enters in the room in with a realxed mood - at last i came near my girl - locks the room.. he comes and hugs her from back.. naina excited but comes out of his arms and shows little bit attitude..
N: dopahar mein aya hai.. abhi iss 9 baje mein mili hai foorsat apni biwi ke milne ke liye..
D: naina.. tum to dekh liya tha na.. main kabse impatetly tumhare paas ane ke liye wait kar raha tha.. par.. tum ne dekh liya tha na?
N still in attaitude..d: aachha to tume abhi bhi attaitude dikha rahi ho.. ? toh mein janta hoo kaise vo teek kar lenge.. ?
N: Kaise.. ?
Daksh slowly comes near her and nain wonders slowly he comes forward.. Naina slowly lost... silent ho jati hai.. eyelock.. he holds her waste and pulls towards him. slowly.. comes closer to her face.. naina closes her eyes.. Daksh' face twists a bit.. a long cute kiss.. both stay in that more for sometimes.. then they hear kaki's voice.. naina.. dooth leke javo beta.. ;)

Originally posted by: DakshnaFan

OMG Neetu 😊...That was really wonderful 😊... Amazing scene dear👏👏 👏 ... Loved it 🤗 🤗 🤗 ...

Hope the CV's do something like this in actual SSBN too 😊

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Wow neetu...👍🏼

That was superb👏.👏. At least in ur FF ayi is trying to realise the truth...waiting for next part yaar

..iss kaki ko bhi abhi aana tha kya beech main...😡😆