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Posted: 13 years ago
Lagta hai aaj andhra mei mausam bohat accha hai.Tab hi toh FF's ki baarish jo horahi hai.Am not complaining.Just enjoying the drench.
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Posted: 13 years ago

i also have some FFs in my mind.. for current situation to get some
Dakshna...

like as follows:

Night time in Dakshna's room...

Daksh lying on the bed.. but cannot sleep.. he is happy that Naina took Ayi
to hospital and she prepared the food for her. Naina also lying on the
couch.. Ayi is in a confused state now.. she remebers the saree and food
and prepared food also.. she is on the way to terrace. and happens to see
Daksh lies on bed and Naina on couch. she is a bit shocked... y these
people lie separately. sometimes jhagada to nahi kiya hai na... yani.. yeh
sachmuch shaadi nahi kiya hai ya nahi..??!!! she sees daksh restless and
turns this side and that side.. Ayi's anxiety increases. Naina gets up and
comes near Daksh and sits beside him..
N: kya huva daksh...? koyi pareshani hai?? tum sote nahi??!!! thabeek to
teek hai nai?? [she puts her hand on his forehead.]
D: Kuch nahi... looks at her and smiles...
Naina gets up and abt to take a glass of water... Daksh feels too much
love towards her... and gets up.. comes near her and hugs her from back..
N: arre kya huva..?
D: huva nahi.. ho raha hai.. muje bohot pyar ho raha hai... [saying this he is abt to kiss her with lost feeling.. ]
Naina is also abt to lost but she realises... comes out of his arms and
steps forward to the couch.. Daksh holds her hand ans pulls her towards him.. and hugs ger behind & starts expressing his love agin
N: tum kya kar rahe ho daksh..
D in the middle of his passionate kiss he says in a husky voice: kya.. meri
khud ki biwi se pyar karana kuch galat baat hai kya.. ? [he is lost completely and under romance... parts her hair and strockes her neck and places kiss on her neck and continue his talks with a tender voice.. Naina is also going into his feelings and she closes her eys and leans towards him... and shuddres] muje haq nahi hai kya..? [forgetting himself and all the things]
[When Daksh started his romance.. Ayi feels guilty that she peepd in his bed room... she is abt to go.. but Naina's diagoue with sad voice made her shocked..]
N tries hard to manage her mind and open eyes: ha daksh.. tumhe poora haq hai... par tum bhool gaye hai kya... jo decision hum dono saath me le liya tha..?
[ayi automatically turns towards them]
Daksh opens eyes and looks at Naina as if he renmeberd something... yah bit despirate... he takes his hand from her belly.. and slowly goes to the bed and sits.. Naina sadly looks at him.. she understands he is disappointed... She feels to console him.. she goes near him and sits beside him
[now ayi is in completely confused.. abt what decision she says.. why they keep distance with each other.. ??]
She consoles Daksh.. : Daksh tum..
b4 completeing her, he tells.. : i'm sorry Naina... pata nahi kabhi kabhi mein sab kuch bhool jata hai... [takes a sigh..]

N: daksh tum so jaavo.. [and abt to get up]
D holds her hand and ask her to sit some time with him...
She sits.. Daksh lies on her lap.. Naina strokes his hair slowly and smiles at him.. he is ok after sometimes.. he holds her hand and kisses on it. and place her hand closer to his heart..
D: yeh.. ayi kab samjoge hamara pyar ko..? [lttile disappointe a litle sad too]
N: daksh.. Ayi ko sach pata nahi hai na.. isilieye hai na yeh sab.. tum fikar mat karo.. ayi hamesha yeh kehti hai ki.. sach hamesha hamesha ke liye chipa nahi sakte.. sach bahar aa jayega aur uska galat faimiyam door ho jayega..
D: ha... uski galat faimiya tab door ho jayega jab voh teek se dekhna, aur teek se samchna suru kere...
[ayi is absolutely shocked.. she is too much conusef.. she cannot understand anything.. thinking of all thing she goes to her sofa]

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Posted: 13 years ago
conitnues...
next mornig.. ayi is now super duper anxious abt Dakshna.. she cannot understand anything, totally confused... still trying to figure out was it... she is going to dry the washed dresses on terrace.. on the way when she reaches near Dakshna's room her curiosity increases and she cannot stop herself from looking inside. in the room
N: Daksh,,, abhi tak tum shirt ka collar teek se lagana seekh nahi liya.. [smiles and corrects it...]
D: looks at her lovingly and tells.. : isiliye to tum... meri pyari si biwi sambalogi na.. ?
N: accha?? to mere aane ke pehale kaisa tha... ?
D thinks: tumhare ane se pehale.. [thiks] pata nahi.. tumhare aane ke pehale kaise the.. mera zindagi kaise the... pata nahi... kuch yaad bhi nahi hai... softens his voice and tells... par.. jab tum mere zindagi mein rang lekar aayi,,, uske baad sab kuch muje yaad hai.. sab kuch.. sach me muje sirf voh hi yaad hai...
N smiles...:sach ??
D: jaise.. hum dono pehdarjeeling mein pehli bar mile... uske baad Akshay ki shaadi me.. phir jhagada kiya.. phir yeh aakar bhi jagada kiya.. mrs Archrekhar ka khar me pati bankar gaye.. phir pata nahi kab kaise tumse pyar huva tha... voh samachkar tumhe voh batane ke liye Kajrat tak aya tha.. par bata nahi paya... phir jab abhi tumhare saath dete tho muje gussa aya tha.. phir tum misundertand kiya mein kisi aur se pyar karta hoo.. phir tumse yeh baat batane ke liye aya thaa parr... [sad voice] mujse pehle abhi tumhe propose kiya.. [he holds her and pulls towars him.. ] jab tum ha keh diya na.. us samay mei... mei... toot gaya tha.. poori tarah se.. kitna dard huva that tumhe pata hai [naina takes a sigh and hugs him...]
N: Daksh mein kya karoo... meine soch tum kisi aur se... phir mein kaise... ?
D manages and tells.. : Hah.. par kya huva..? nashe min to sahi mein mere dil ki baatem bataya tha na..
N: par bohot der ho chuka tha Daksh.. shaadi ke din mein kaise batavoo..? upar se tumhare shaadi Sonkashi se tair huyi dhi na..?
D: Ha... par tum keh nahi diya phir bhi voh shaadi toot gaye the na..? [naina smiles... very smart]
D: phir tumne kya kiya..? mere dil ke zyada tumhe Sonakhi ki chinta tha na? tum mujese bhaagne ke liye tumhara office, aur iss ghar badalne ka bhi decide kiya tha na? pagli... [he hits nina's head slightly.. Niana smiles - AYi is in shock hearing this - she remembers all that flash backs].. tumhe pata nahi tha mein kitna smart hoom.. tumhe convince karne ke liye Lonavla mei le gaya tha na? par tum bhi bohot sid tha.. vaha me bhi tum mujse choot bol diya tum muje pyar nah ikarti hai na??
N: par tumhe kaisa pata chala mein choot boh rahi thi...? hah?
D; Vahi to - the gr8 Daksh Padwarthan.. [pulls his collar] - jab mera jaan khatre mein hai haiye soch kar tu itna pareshan huva itna pareshan huva... ant mein yeh maanna pada tum mujse pyar karti hai hai na?
N downs her head... with a shy..
D: sach naina... jab tum mujse keh diya hai na.. tum muje pyar karthi hai.. i was feeling like heaven.. itna kush itna khush.. pata bhi nahi sakta.. voh pal.. mein kahi nahi bhooloonga..
But becomes sad after that.. :yeh baat ayi baba se kehne ke liye aya tha.. par.. Akruthi ka problem se nahi bata paya.. phir Sonakshi se bataya.. Naina muje lagtha hai us samay hum Ayi se baat karna chahiye tha.. par mein kitna koshish kiya use yeh batane ke liye.. ?? usko meri baat sune ka time nahi tha.. aur baat yehi tak pahoonch gaya.. [now ayi feels to fainted.. she cannot beleive what she heard.. ]
Naina sees Daksh becomes too emotional.. she plans to manage him..
N: Daksh.. voh sab ho gaya na.. bhool jaavo sab..
D with a KP tone.. : oh.. tum bhi kam nahi hai.. ayi keh diya tho tum muje chodkar chali gayi hai na?
Nina sad.. : aur mei kya karoomm? [Daksh feels bad]
D: to kya huva?? phor bhi tumhare hero DP ne tumhe diye huye vaada bhi thodkar tumhe lene ke liye aya tha na... tum sochna padega... yea sab kisi mamoolis si ladka nahi Daksh Padwarthan ne kiya..
[Naina smiles.. she hugs Daksh.. both take sigh.. after sometimes Naina comes out of the hugs ]
N: Acchaa daksh tum ek baat batavo... agar meri shaadi sach mein Abhi se hoo gayi tho tum kya karta???
D: aise kaise ho sakta.. tum sirf aur sirf meri ho.. aise kaise voh shaadi ho payega..
then sits.. in tender voice: pata nahi naina... tumhare bina mein kaise jee paayega...
Naina touches his shoulder.. accha..?? ab yeh sab batakar rahoge yah.. office jana nahi hai kya?

[now ayi is clear what happened.. ]

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Posted: 13 years ago
@ Lucky, Neetu...
U guys rock... Thank u once again... dono ke FF super duper hai...loved them...

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Posted: 13 years ago
@Neetu

That was so sweet and nice..😛.thanks for FF bud

Contd from last part......😛

Naina; bas mujhe aur nahi dekhna..about to get up...😕
Daksh ; arey.naina...sry ab aur tang nahi karunga.she sits back...deal beech main chod kar chali jvaoge tho pata haina penalty.pay karna padega..extra 20 dene padenge😆
Naina as usual lil blushing.😳..; ab next photo dikhavo..
Daksh; aise kaise??
Naina; bhool gayi..

kiss on his cheek..

They continue their session...ek photo pe aakar dono rukh jaate hain..photo with kid
Both look at each other..smile..😛
Daksh;hamare baache bina aise hi cute cute honge😛
Naina; acha!😊
Daksh; haan kyunki hum dono itne cute hain...😉
Naina; woh tho sach hain.😛.
Daksh; waise hum bacho ke baare main kuch plan karnewaale the...😉
Naina ; Haan..bhool gayi...
Daksh; ek min..kahi tumhe cricket team/ foot ball team banane ka irada nahi hain na🤣
Naina; chup karo ...besharam..😳
Daksh; matlab aisa kuch nahi..thank god..😆.main tho soch liya...Hum do hamara char
Naina; kya? char?.😲.paagal hogaye ho tum😆
Daksh; arey tumhe yaadnahi acrekar;s ko tumne hi kaha.jab hum pati patni banane ka natak kar rahethe...😉
Naina; Bas aise hi kehdiya..waise manie bhi soch liya...Hum do hamara do...

Daksh ; ye bhi teek hain..mujhe na ek beti chaihye..pyar si..tumhari tarah..😛
Naina; mujhe na ladka cahiye..junoir KP(laughs)...waise main usse na tumhari kahdoos anhi banne doonga😡..bilkul meri tarah hoga woh😉

Daksh; abhi se bigaadne ka plan banaliya...tumhari tarah matlab..main tho gaya😆..pata nahi kitne shaharthi hoga..kitne saare complaints aayenge uske baare😆 main..poora ghar sar pe uta lega.😆
Naina; aisa kuch nahi hoga..aur pls tum ladki ko tumhare tarah akudu mat banana..
Daksh; tumne mujhe akudu kaha..😡
Naina; haan kaha..akudu ..akudu akudu...( pulls his nose)😆
Daksh; tum jhooti aur paagal😆
Naina; tumne mujhe paagal kaha...😲
Daksh ;haan tho...

Both start hitting each other..after few min..they smile and hug each other..

Contd...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Rupali and Lucky.. thanks a lot.. i just wanted to rewind all the things once again.. those cute days.. anyway, i will try for one last FF also.. later..

lucky... again u rocked.. !!! 👏 i liked it.. !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
@ neetu and lucky,
Superb FFs... loved them!!!!👏👍🏼❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
I don't want to leave my previous FF in a mid way...

Continuing from the same:

Ayi listens Dakshna and come to know that Daksh loved her madly very early itself.. but the problem was Naina didn't recognise the matter and Daksh did not try to clarify also. and she is very upset abt she didn't identify her son's feelings eventhough she was boastful ever abt him that she knows him more than anyone.. . she remembers all the things one by one. she also remembers Daksh's engagement and he went without putting on the ring on Sonaskhi'd finger. she wonder abt Dakshna told abt their love to sonakshi!!!! she can't believe that.. but she does not find anything to unbelieve Dakshna's todays' talk. so when... what.. where... the mistake happened. She remembrs she gave promise to Sonakshi without confirming it from Daksh.. oh whether the mistake made by herself..!!!! she starts to think how her favorite Naina became her enemy? thinking this she comes to downstairs.. then she comes to Rohini's room and finds Rohini talks to somebody..
"aap fikr mat keejiye.. yeh khar mein kisi bhi tarah se aapke haath mein hone doongi.. mein jaise kaha vaise bhi keejiye.. yeh log yeha chodkar jaana padega.. " Ayi gets shocked.. so she sent those people and she is the real reason of the problems.. she remembers yes it was rohini who injected poison in here head towards Naina.. but she pretends she has not heard anything.. Ayi can't beileve her eyes and ears still... next day the water problem electricity problem occurs and Ayi notices Rohini.. Rohini tells it is because of some bad things of this house it is better to leave the house. Ayi notices Rohini very well and she understand the things so clearly.. now she can see the difference between naina and Rohini very clearly. Rohini get out everybody from their side but how Naina grabbed them together... Rohini is trying heard to convince all that this house has some trouble. and shouting at everybody. Ayi raise her voice and tells... "deere bolo...aavaaz neeche" . Rohini wonders.. but Ayi gives the correct reply what she deserves.. she expains all thing and apologise Naina in misunderstanding her hearing that stupid rohini's words.. Rohini downs her head.. she understands it is better to admit the faults and apologise. but ayi is very stern.. she cheated her motherlihood. but naina asks ayi to forgive her as she regrets really.. [like she forgave Sonakshi telling it is her best punishment that she lost her love]then accepts Naina as DIL, in that situation she calls Anjali... and Anjali calls Supriya -Naina's real mom - to present in that good time. Ayi will again have a big shock. Sonakshi tells the truth. Aku also tells she knew the matter very early. then just imagine Rohini apologises to Naina and she changes..

in the eveing after everybody left.. Naina is sitting with Adharv on her lap.. all are happy and she plays with him.. adharv is smiling. Daksh also excited and wants to take him.. them happy happy moments with Adharv.. in between that without others see, daksh gives some accidental kisses to Naina pretending that he was abt to kiss Adharv but it misplace to her face.. Naina understands and eye to eye speak .. "kya kar rahe ho... kisine dekhega.." .. Daksh with naughty smile.. daksh gets up.. suddenly Naina thrilled with happy and says.. "dekho dekho daksh,... mein kaha na.. bantu muje bohot pyar karte hai.. ??? " all excited... Naina shows her saree to Daksh "see bantu mere lap mein zoo zoo kar diya.. " Naina expresses her happinmess. Daksh little bit Kp.. diappointed.. jealous.. alll laugh at Dakshna.. ayi enjoys naina's words. Daksh to bantu.. " aree bantu tumne ye kya kar diya,.. itni samay mein, tum mere saath tha na... mere body par zoo nahi kar sate tha na.. tum kaka se zyada kaki ko pyar karte hai kya..? yeh teek nahi hai.." [naughty KP].. Naina smiles at him and asks him to take Bantu as she wants to change her saree.. Adharv still smiles at Daksh.. now Daksh is also happy "see naina.. bantu sirf ttumhe nahi muje bhi bohot pyar karata hai.. dekho mera body par bhi voh zoo zoo.. " all laugh at the.. kaka with his usual comments.. ayi's eyes fill with tears.. here these people compete who will love thier nephew more.. !! Daksh gives Adharv to ayi saying he will come back with other dress..
In Dakshna's room.. Naina is about to change dress.. she takes her saree from her shoulder.. suddently she hears the sound of door open.. it Daksh.. Naina blushes... with shy, she turn around and puts her saree back to the shoulder.. Daksh a lost for while.. he locks the door behind him.. come steps forward near Naina... to manage the situation Naina abt to say.. "bantu muje bohot pyar karta hai.. " but Daksh is lost and looks in her eyes comes closer to her.. Naina becoming silent. D: kya kaha.. bantu tumhe pyar karta hai..?
N; h.. hah..
D: mujese bhi zyada..?
Naina does not have any answer... she looks into his eyes without saying anything... she understands his breath now..
N in huskly voice.. ;Daksh, chod do... muje kapde badalna hai...
D in very tender voice.. mein madat karoonga...
[just imagine what happen next.. can be that last song SSBN to be watched - very passionate Dakshna...]

Ok.. now after 6 months.. [guess they had a wonderful honeymoon as Lucky, Aish, LM etc narrated earlier] - a morning..


To be conitnued...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh neetu...😛

Tht was perfect yaar👏...The way u made ayi realise the facts very nice👍🏼 and the last scene.too good😳.waiting for next part...😳..even I am waiting for the last sequence😉...Lets see whats in store for us..but superb FF...👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aww 😊 Neetu too good yaar😛... just loved it🤗 ... u have done it again dear👏... u have shown everything exposed so logically😛... and the last scene oh boy that was way way cute😳... love my dakshna ❤️ 😊... waiting for the next part😍... thank u bud🤗... a big hug for this one🤗
me too waiting whats in store for us in the last 2 episodes and how the mess is gonna get cleared🤔😍...

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