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Posted: 13 years ago
Final part of dakshna HM series...

Contd..from last part.....

Just then daksh ka mobile bajta hain.😛..

Dakshna come out of hug and daksh handovers lap top to naina and goes inside to attend the call...

After few min moon poolakar bahar aata hain and sits besides naina.Naina looking at photos...

Naina; daksh ..ye dekho turns at him sees his sad face and says; daksh kya hua? tumhara mood kyu kahrab hogaya .😕.sab teek tho hain?( lil wrd)..kaun hain phone par...daksh pls batavona( hand on cheek)..batavo..😕

Daksh bina kuch bolo naina ko hug kar leta hain.🤗..after few min he comes out of hug and says..office se phone tha...ek problm hogaya case ke wajah se..aur teek karne ke liye wapas jaana padega..kal hi...

Naina ; tickets?😲
Daksh ; kal ka book kardenge...😕

Naina first lil upset but later apne aapko sambhal ke looks at daksh...😛

Naina ; puts hands on his cheeks and says;bas itni si baat..itna upset hone ki kya jaroorat hain...aaj nahi tho kal tho hame jaana hogana..😛.hum thodina zindagi bhar darjeeling main rahenge...kaam bhi tho karna hain vakeel saab...aur kaam bhi important hain na😛

Daksh; haam kaam bhi imp hain, lekin tumse jyada nahi..hmari khusiyon se jyada nahi😛..pata hain wapas jaana hain lekin itni achanak...expect nahi kiya thana ..iss liye😭

Naina; main samaj sakthi hoon ..lekin kabhi kabhi kuck aisa hojaata hain jiske liye hum biklul prepared nahi rehthe.par..aise up set hone se thodina sab teek hojayega..

lil playful tone...

Naina;Waise bhi bhaut hogaya HM...Main bore hogayi..chalo wapas ghar chalte hain.😆.Main packing kardu...and is about get up...daksh pulls her back...😳

Eye lock😍

Daksh ; lil frown)sach main bore hogayi??😲
Naina ; haan bore hogayi darjeeling main HM manate huye romance karte huye..winks at him😉

Daksh now gets her point ; with lil smile ; acha! tho stroking her cheek ; Mumbai ka kya khayal hain Mam..baaki ka HM waha jaake...comes lil closer..Naina blushes a lil and hugs him...🤗

Naina ; plan tho acha hain..mujhe manzoor hain..😛.
Daksh lekin ek problm hain
Naina ; kya?😲
Daksh yahi ki waha privacy milna mushkil hogana aur tum tho gahr jaate hi pati ko bhool javoge...pehle hi bol raha hoon...tum mujhe ignore nahi karoge...ok aur..😛
Naina hugs him tight ; promise..nahi karungi...aur!
Daksh; aur..hamara deal deal hi rahega.ek pe ek aur. wapas jaake akele nahane ke liye nahi kahoge..bilkul nahi...samjhi!😆😆
Naina;😳 besharam..chupkaro hits him playfully ;
Daksh arey I am serious...ok aur phir

Naina ;comes out of hug ; bas bas tumhare ye aur aur kabhi khatam nahi hoga..ab chalke pack kare..
Daksh offo naina..tum bhina ..itna jaldi kya hain pack karne main..

Naina smiles .gets up holds the cups..daksh takes laptop both move in from balcony

Daksh laptop table pe rakhke aur naina cups kitchem main rakkhe wapas aati hain...

Both start packing with lil jokes fights...packing hogaya

Daksh ; sleeping on bed...ye packin bhina ..uff leejiye mam ab khush ..packing hogaya...😛
Naina ; bahut khush..slips besides him...and sleeps on his chest ; aur ab kal subha tak hame koi kaam nahi...pauses for a min and says;; sifa romance karne ki..alava.
Daksh ek min ke liye is like ; whoa😲😛
Daksh; kya kaha tumne?😛
Naina gets up; maine kya kaha..kuch nahi
Daksh ; (gets up)acha!..iss liye mam ko packing ki itni jaldi thi taaki..pulls her into his laps...and holds her tight.. his head on her shoulder .And says ab chodne ke liye mat kaho..
Naina ; maine kab kiya chodne ki baat ..moves closer to him...and tuns to his side..his hands on her waist and her hands around his neck...😳

Daksh; tho?
Naina ; tho?
Daksh ; pulling her face closer tho romance shuru kare..
Naina ; nods her haed with blushing cheeks☺️ and cute smile.😊..they come closer..scene fades...

after few hrs...U all know ki kya position hoga.🤣.In blanket..lol cuddled in each others arms

Daksh; tumhe pata hain naina ...ye hamara HM mer zindagi ka sabse khoobsurat yaad banke rahega...
Naina ;meri nahi KP hamari kaho...bhool gaye mujhe lifts up her head
Daksh puts a hand lovingly on her cheek and says; apne jaan ko bhool jana??..no way...I love u naina❤️..agar tum nahi aatimeri zindagi main tho pata nahi..😛
Naina ; shhh kp..chup raho..aab tho gaayi hu na hamesha rahungi...LOve u.❤️.
Daksh; Love u too..kisses her forehaed..

Both share few smiles and get back into embrace...

------------------------------------- The end-------------------------------------

PS; THo hagaya dakshna HM series khatam...feeling sad.😭.but happy ki all these days this series made all of us smlie me too.😛.lol...This is my last FF and thank u all for all the love support ...Will miss u all



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Posted: 13 years ago
@ neetu,
Lovely FF!!!!! and i knw whats gonna happen after 6 months!!😉 but im not gonna tell...ssshhh😆
@lucky,
awww! thats the best honeymoon ever!😃 i simply adore the whole series lucky!! it was like u taking all of us on a "love montage"😍 thank u so much lucky... u gave us what the CVs couldnt give to us...thank u! thank u !! thank u!!!🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

as light arrives inside the room naina opens up the eyes... she lifts the head from his chest and and looks at him. he is still in deep asleep like a cute baby. she smiles and gives a cute kiss on his forehead. then she gets up from bed without disturbing his sleep and goes to washroom. after a while daksh looks disurbed in his sleep and he is uncomfortable. he shrinks his eye brows and moves head this side and other side. then lazily stretches his hand and searches the one whom he misses on the bed. no she is not there. he opens his Eyes and looks around. No, she is not there. Understands she is in washroom. turns towards her side and grabs her pillow and places his face on it and lies smelling her by closing eyes. after some time naina comes out from the wash room and looks at Daksh. "oh yeh KP abhi tak udtha nahi?"she comes near him and sits beside him. she smiles and gently strokes his hair. when her cool hand touches on his face he feels good.. but not opening the eyes. She puts her lips very close to his ear and says in husky voice: Daksh, udo subah ho gayi hai. The scent of her makes him mad. He turns towards her and gives her a naughty look and abt to hug. Naina surprises, to tum sote nahi tha na? telling this she is abt to get up from bed. But daksh holds her hand and pulls her towards the bed again. N: kya kar rahe ho tum Daksh. Tumhe jana hai na? jaldi udo aur ready ho javo. and gets up. Daksh lazily but reluctantly gets up. Naina goes near mirror. Daksh is still in naughty mood and comes near her. she sees him in the mirror. Daksh hugs her from behind. Naina turns towards him and tells "javo jaldi se nahavo.." give the towel. he is not ready to go. still abt to do romance. N: Daksh kya hai..? yeh raat nahi hai. subah subah tum suru kiya hai kya..? aajkal tum bohot badmash nikalte ho.. [pushes him] ja.. jakar nahavo... office ke lye der ho jayega.. daksh shows his cute bechara baby face.. :naina...
N thoda seriously.. :daksh...

d: teek hai baba.. gussa mat karna..
daksh goes to the bathroom and naina nods her hear with smile - yeh daksh bhi na.

After he goes to the wash room, she corrects the bed and brigns a dress of him from the wardrobe. watch, wallet, cell phone, his bag etc. then goes near mirror and brushes her hair. don't know she feels strange. chakkar aa raha hai kya.? nahi she is ok.. she goes to kitchen.
in kitchen: rohini prepares food for her adharv [she started to do works] and goes for feeding him. Ayi is kitchen. Naina comes: good morning ayi
A: good morning beta .. she looks at Naina's smile [whether anyhting missing in it]
Kaki comes and telsl: vahini, pooja ka sara arrangments ho gaya..
A: teek hai mein abhi aati hoo... (turn towards Naina). beta nashta bana diya hai.. ab sab ke liye chay banana hai.. tum sambhaloge na beta..?
N: ji ayi.. mein dekh loogi.. aap jayiye..
Kaki and ayi go to poja room.. on the way
k: vahini, naina ka chahra thoda pale lag raha hai na?
ayi: mein bhi notice kiya. uska smile mein voh charm kami hai.. aaj.. kahi aisa to nahi, daksh ke sath uska jagda to ...
Meanwhile Daksh comes to the dining table. :naina, nashta laga hai kya..?
on the dining table baba rads news paper and having the morning coffee..
D: Good morning baba
B: GM beta.
Daksh sits, Kaka also comes "naina, mere liye bhi chay laavo.."
Sanket and Vedant also come and sit in their seat. Rohini comes and helps naina to serve the chay aur nashta.. smile sees on evryone's face..
After break fast everybody disperse to their own work. naina goes near Daksh and corrects his collar, folds his sleeves. by then Ayi and Kaki come after pooja. ayi looks at then and feel proud to get such a good DIL. Daksh leaves..
Naina runs behind him taking the lunch box.. in outside.. Naina gives the lunch box to Daksh.. he confirms nobody sees them.. he stretches his face towards her. naina smiles and gives him a cute cute kiss. in return he gives her a lovely kiss on her fore head. says bye.. he puts the lunch box in the car and looks again his love. he is not interested to go today.. but noww he gets shocked.. naina is abt to fall fainted.. b4 she fall, he manges to hold her.. all concerened and rush towards them.. Daksh tensed, calls the doctor.. ayi wcomes with water.. Rohini fans her,,,, in this time door bell rings. Naina is taken to the bed... Naina gets her concousness. kaki goes to see who is! it is Anjali.. came for a visit.. By then then Dr Vihan and Mrs Vihan come. Vihan examines Naina... all out of the room. Daksh is restless, tensed in front of the door.. walks to and fro. all tensed. Dr Vihan comes.. All curious to know.. anxiously looks at Vihan. he is calm. Daksh: voh teek to hai na..?

V: khabrane ka koyi zaroorat hai. she is perfectly alright..

Hearing that Daksh takes a sigh of relaxation and rushes to the room not ready to hear more. all still anxiously look at Vihan.. in btn Viha gets a call. In Dakshna room.. Naina is standing with a blushing smile. Daksh comes runing..

D: Naina... tum kaise ho.? ab kaisa feel rahe ho..? sar dukhate hai kya.. pani chahiye..? [Naina tries to speak in btn but Daksh's tension does not allow him to stop]

at lat Naina puts her hand on his lips.. left hand finger on her own lips: shhh... relax.. !!!

Dkash realises he is too concernd.. he looks at Naina.. she looks so relaxed.. Daksh wonders a bit.. Naina smiles at him.. his anxiety increases.. knowing that Naina takes his hand and places it one her womb {sorry if u read this style anywhere else..}... and just closes eyes towards him as if ""i mean it Daksh,..".. Daksh's tension changed to surprise.. "really..?".. Daksh looks at Naina.. he feels proud.. canot understand what to do.. he grabs her hugs.. Naina is thankful in giving her the most beautiful and valuable fortune for a woman... Meanwhile outside, Vihan tells the matter over phone.. "sonakshi, u r going to be a moushi...".. all excited.. after ending the call he tell everybody.. "yes it is true.. Naina is pragnant...".. don't know Ayi runs to kitchen.. then comes back then goes ot bappa... to thank.. comes with prasad.. all are super duper happy... Sanket brings sweets and serves... Dakshna appears.. Ayi. steps forward... gives the prasad of Bappa to them. them he master piece action - wiping their mouth with pallu.. Rohini tells Adharv.. "adharv, tumhe eke chota bhai ya choti behan anewale hai.. tuhara kaka-kaki ka gift.." Ayi hugs Niana. Aku come and hugs.. Anjali looks a bit worried.. by then Supriya and SOnakshi come.. SUpriya blesses them.. tells Anjali "tum naina ki maa haina.. yeh tumhara hi grand child hai.." anjali feels happy and proud.. all shares their happiness.. the camera Zoon In... and freez a happy pictre - mid Dakshna..

Thus Naina's all dream came true... !!!

I hope you like it..

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Posted: 13 years ago
thank you Lucky, Rupali, LM🤗
LM, yah.. it is definitely you expected... 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Oh lucky… it is a perfect ending..!! Super duper!!! 👏I loveed it.. 😳A big chintu hug and a sweet cute pink KP kiss. 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks neetu for the lovely FF...too bad we dont get to see a dakshna baby...but all of u guys wrote such beautiful stories abt it...😃 thank u very much...
Even i wanna write one last FF b4 the show ends but im not getting any ideas nw...im sooo tired seeing this serial nw that im fed up and wanna close my eyes and never see it...exhausted!
But bcz of all the sweet FFs u write im feeling much better..🤗 but still not getting any i deas..hehe...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
thank you LM, Thank you very much!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
@Lucky perfect end to the HM series bud👏... too too cute cute hai😳... Naina is very smart in ur FF... jaldi jaldi pack karke le liye😉...lucky dakshu 😉 thank u dear for all the wonderful FF and all the smiles 🤗 🤗 🤗

@Neetu...
Too good dear👏... perfect ending tha FF ka... kash this sensible ending we could have got in SSBN also... thank u for all ur FF🤗🤗🤗...

Will miss these lovely FF's...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks Rupali.. i am glad that you liked it... 😊
Edited by ntsindia - 13 years ago

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