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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh SweetAish.. so sorry for late reply.. it is too tooo good.. i lked it yaar.. 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
@lucky, @neetu, @ aish,
Great FFs guys...thanks sooo much...🤗dakshna will be more and more immortal bcz of all the FFs u all have created...well done👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
A small FF...Inspired by Naina's custard and lucky's ice cream...
Let's just say Aayi found her brain again and is back on track towards sanity ... now everything is normal...she has blessed dakshna and now in the process of saying sry sry sry sry...(so it goes on)
Aayi: ( for the 1000000000...th time) im sorry daksh...mene kitne nakare kar diya tum dono ke saath!!(and starts weeping)
Daksh: aayi pls...pls dont cry... aise sry bolne ka koi zaroorat nehi hai...(daksh is trying to pacify her but at the back of his mind he is impatient,thrilled and excited!! all he wants now is a quiet moment with his beautiful wife...and he cant wait to ditch everyone downstairs and spend some time alone with Naina..)
D: aayi...pls ab tum so jao...hum kal baath karenge...
While aayi is resting , the rest is in the living room , enjoying the freedom they finally got after so long... Naina is serving tea arnd...daksh comes to the hall... dakshna eye lock... daksh looks at the staircase and makes a sign to Naina with a cute smile...
Naina looks at the tray...(baad me)...
daksh... baby face(kya Naina??)
Naina...tum jao...meh abhi aati hu...
Daksh goes to his room...and is waiting and waiting and waiting...
Daksh:yeh naina bhi na! kitne waqt lagega!
Just then Naina comes...with her hands behind...intense eye lock...both are so happy and relieved that all problems are over...and aayi is back to normal...😉
Daksh moves towards naina ...her hair flowing in the air beautifully making her look like an angel...naina steps backwards until she backs against the wall...daksh puts his arms on the wall and leans towards her...and closer and closer...and abt to kiss her...an inch away..just then-
Naina brings her hands foward...
Daksh:yeh kya???😕😡
Naina: custard...(and she takes a spoonful of custard in to her mouth and enjoys it...)mmm...
D:cmon naina, pls keep that aside... (tries to take it away from her)
N: DAKSH! nehi! bilkul nahi! waise tumhe bhool gaye hai kya?
D: kya?
N: tumne tho kaha tha...ki jab saare problems teek ho jayegi tho hum dono buhaut celebrate karengi...
D: yehi tho mene karne ki kaushish ki! par tum(comes forward...but naina runs away from him)
N: tumne tho kaha ki hum custard ke saath celebrate karenge...(takes another mouthful)
D:offo Naina...
N: at least try tho karo...
Naina gives him a spoon full of custard...
D: mmm...achcha hai...lagtha hai kaki ne buhaut kush hai...aaj unone bahauth achchi se yeh custard banaya hai..
N: (hits him playfully...with frowing eyes) yeh mene banaya hai!
D: KYA??????????????????😲
N : aise kyu dekhrahe ho?
D: nehi...me tho...woh>..
N: tum kitne karaab ho daksh! go away! (turns around and enjoys her custard alone)
D:(hugs her from behind)sry ma'am... tumne aaj itna achchi se custard banaya hai... majhe tho bahuath pasand aaya...
then daksh hold her hand with the spoon and makes her feed him another spoon of custard...
Naina(lost): tho yeh achchi hai? (hugs him)
D: Bahauth!!
they look at each other and smile... so happily...😳
Naina sees some custard at the corner of his mouth...points at it...daksh wipes the other side of his mouth...( just like the paint scene at their flat after marriage ok?)
Naina lifts up her hand to wipe it...just inches away from daksh's lips ...daksh looks lost..
Just then naina's hand stops in mid air... looks at daksh intently... daksh is confused...he is wondering wether Naina's still thinking abt her promise abt aayi...
Just then naina slowly moves towards daksh... places her lips at the corner of his mouth...and wipes away the custard with her lips...a cute smile appears on KP's face...blushing blushing...😛😳
Naina looks at daksh and gives a cute smile...daksh takes her face in his hands and brings it closer...scene fades...
Hope u all like it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey guys ... another one set arnd Dakshna's flat ...




Dakshu calls up in the eve, cribbing bout the traffic in mumbai,telling her he should be home in half an hour...or he'd leave the car there and walk home :p she calms him down, asks him to come home safe and sound and without loosing his temper too...

D : Naina ...

N : ab kya hua daksh...

D : miss you...

N : (smile in her voice) love you...

he cuts the call, turns the fm on, wishing for a helicopter...or a little movement in the blockade ahead instead...

Naina comes down to wait for him...neeche between the parking lot and park...She stands der, park ke bahar, eyes on the apartment's driveway...

One f their neighbours hails out to her, and she joins d group f regulr aunties nd kiddos 2 kill time til he comes home. She chats them up, even plays with the kids some, but her eyes keep darting to the driveway...

Finally, finally his car scrunches up d gravel and she looks up, elated...

He takes the car up d path, turns to d parking lot. A flash, a movement somewhere catches his eye and he looks out d window... Yes der she is, amidst a group f women nd children, waving @ him, and smiling... Her smile... He smiles back nd lifts a hand in reply. Dat smile was heaven 2 come home 2...SHE was heaven 2 come home to... Rueing the fact that you can't pick your wife up and swing her around in full view of the world, he parks d car nd gets out, grabbing his bag from d backseat.

Ah, fate. One of their neighbours steps up to him, and he has to get through the small talk and the rest if he has to get to her... And from her post in the garden she seems to be in a similar situation, for her eyes keep darting to his, too just as he seeks out hers...The little pang of longing surprises him...It was only a matter of a few minutes, right...? She'd be in his arms then...

She senses it, the way his face fell a little when the other man came up to talk and gets up to leave, but basic manners require her to finish the conversation too...But then she gets an idea and smiles...

She was smiling again...Not the smile that was reserved just for him, but the one that her ideas claimed...He smiles too, wondering what she's up to now...She's having a serious conversation with this cute kid now, whose father is right now is standing next to him, having his ear chatting about the weather...

Oh. She just bent down and gave the kid a kiss on the cheek...Daksh catches himself being envious of the kid now for the little fellow just took away his welcome-home kiss, then snaps himself out of it...Jealous of a toddler...? very mature, he congratulates himself. But damn, did she have to smile like that right now...? Daksh directs another polite smile to his dear neighbour, wishing he'd just melt into thin air with the rest of the world so he could just be with the one person who was HIS world...

The kid comes running up to them and is scooped up by his father, who leaves the weather and starts on the minutes of the society's latest general body meeting...the kid leans towards Daksh, reaching out to him. Helpless, he takes the kid from its father, wondering who had earned the larger share of his irritation, father or son...

Naina is watching the play of emotions on his face with a soft smile on hers...KP was on the last vestiges of tolerance now...

The kid announces to daksh that he has a meshag...oh, cute kid with a lisp who stole away my kiss, poor Dakshu says in mind.

D : kya message hai beta...?

Neighbr : oh msg aya ...? (indulgent smile) papa ke ph me? (he hands over his cell to the kid)

And he goes back to boring Dakshu to death. The kid insists he has a message. Daksh lets out a heartfelt sigh, asks him again patiently...

In reply the kid gives him a peck on the cheek, scrambles down and off into the garden with the mobile, and the father goes after the kid.

Releived, he turns to find Naina there, mischief sparkling in her eyes...She takes his bag from him, smiles, and without a word exchanged they get into the lift along with two others who were also waiting there...

Lift mein ...

(Dakshna are at the back)

N : (low tone) Daksh mera msg mila tumhe...

He looks at her, and she looks back, all innocence...Then her eyes go wide, for a hand's just snaked around her waist, gently, slowly, making all things go warm inside her, and then some...

Eyespeak ...

N : Daksh kya kar rahe ho ?!

D : (naughty smile) abhi reply du...

The lift opens on some floor, one person gets out.

Daksh holds her eyes, and mischief forgotten, she stares back too...he lets out another sigh then, wondering how long could a 20 second elevator ride be...he draws her closer in a one sided hug; she leans into him, resting her head on his shoulder.

D : (soflty) ghar ake reply dunga me ...

N : (cheeks warm, quietly) OK...

The lift stops and its their floor... Dakshu takes her home for a long, long detailed reply😉 ...



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Posted: 13 years ago
neetu di, mysti, geeha ... thnku guys ... glad u likd it ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
R u by any chance gonna tell us what dakshu's reply is? 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

😉Dakshna apne flat me hi ok guys... Pzoo ke liye mera toleranc levl khatm...hav fun evryone...



Saturday Afternoon...


Naina's cooking something, Dakshu s on the kitchen counter trying to talk her into spending some time with him.

She pretends to be oblivious to it, stealing little glances in between when he looks away fuming. Smiling to herself, she continues.


D : Naina bas bhi karo Naina ...thodi der ke liye...

N : khana kaun banayega phir?

D : (mildly irritated) mat banao. bahar se order karenge.

N : itna kyu chid rahe ho custard nai bana rahi me :p ... aur muje nai pata tha tumhe ghar ke khane se itni prob hai... meri cooking utni kharab hai ...?

D : muje prob khane se nai- me kyu samjha raha hu tumhe. Subah se yahi keh raha hu ki mere sath-

N : ha, wahi tho me bhi soch rahi hu(steals another glance at him; he's frowning now)...subah se mere peeche pade ho tum, ki Naina ye mat karo, wo bad me kar lo, thode der yaha baith jao, paper pad lo...(hands him a mug of coffee, smiling) vaise KP, tumhe kabse paper padne ke liye company ki zarurat padne lagi ...

Dakshu muh phula leta hai nd starts to walk away. She holds him back by the arm.

N : kaha ja rahe ho?

D : PAPER padne. (sets the coffee down)

N : Coffee tho le jao...

D : nahi chahiye (he goes off)

N : lo. Rooth gaya. (shakes her head, smiling) Ye KP bhi na...

She finishes up quickly, pours out two fresh mugs of coffee...

Meanwhile, Dakshu in the front room...

Grabs the newsp and sits on the couch, fuming. "Subah se try kar raha hu, aur use samaj nahi aa raha .. "

He notices the paper's upside down, corrects it; behind him Naina's satnding with two mugs of coffee, suppressing a laugh.

D : (continues muttering) Likh ke dena padega ab shayad ...

N : (softly, kaan me) ha tho likhke hi de do na ...

D : me tumse bat nai kar raha tha .

N : oh ... paper se kar rahe the ... thik hai ... (lets go, places a mug in front of him)

D : nahi chahiye muje.

N : mene kab kaha tumhare liye hai... (sits beside him)

D : (uski taraf dekhta hai, den page turn karne ka bada show karta hai) to kya do cup piyogi...

N : (sips hers) hmm. Vaise muje share karne me koi prob nahi hai :p

D : (still pretending to read) tum yaha kya kar rahi ho...? aur koi kam nai tha kya baki ... itni busy thi abhi...

N : (sly smiling) me bhi... paper padne ayi thi ...

D : nahi dunga (turns to the other side)

N : are ... (laughs) kab se akhbar pe gussa utar rahe ho ...(tries to take it from him) Daksh do na...muje padna hai...

D : (childishly) nahi. Nahi dunga me.

Naina gives up, holding back another laugh and goes to get the remote.

D : (lowers the paper) ab kaha jaa rahi ho...?

N : (comes back, sits down agn) me tho apne pati dev ke sath tv dekhne jaa rahi hu...

D : (folds paper) akele dekh lo. Muje nend aa rahi hai .

N : Daksh dekho sara kam ek sath khatm nai kiya tho tumhe poora weeknd aise tang karne ka time kaha milta muje... samaj jao na ...

D : kya ??

She just smiles at him...

He frowns, takes up a cushion...Naina's face falls a little...

Then he places the cushion in her lap, aram se stretch out karta hai and rests his head in her lap...

D : (eyes closed) dekh lo tv. Par muje sona hai.

N : (smiles, softly) sach me nend aa rahi hai tumhe ... (runs her hand through his hair gently) bed pe chale ...

D : (looks at her, brows raised) mene kaha muje sona hai.

N : (laughs) tumhare dimag me ek hi cheez chalti hai kya KP... mene isliye kaha ki sofa tumse chota hai, tum utne comfrtbl nai hoge ...

D : (eyes closed, smiling) isse zyada comfy nahi ho sakta kahi bhi...

N : (still playing with his hair, soft laugh) sach ...?

D : (takes her free hand) sach... Naina ...

N : bolo ...

D : (gets up, still holding her hand) ek bat kehni thi tumse ... (she nods) paper padne me, coffee peene me, Naina mere ek din me jo bhi hota hai us sab me ... mujhe tumhari compny ki zarurat hai ... (slightly plaintive note) I need you... tumhare bina tho saase bhi...

N : Daksh...kaisi bate kar rahe ho tum...(hugs him) Tumhe kabse lagne laga ki me samajti nahi hu tumhe... me tho bas...Daksh... mere zindagi ka hare ek pal, har lamha tumhare nam se hai...aur pls tum aise mat kaho phir kabhi... (gentle squeeze) I love you...

D : bataogi nai kitna...

N : (draws back nd hits him) KP... ab tumhe likhke dena padega kya?

D : (cheeky smile) dikha do tho acha hai, jaldi samaj jaunga .

N : (takes his face in her hands) ek hi route pe chalta haina dimag...

D : bed ki kaun bat kar raha tha...couch bhi chalega...

She pushes him back onto the cushions, and before he knows what her lips are on his...sweet, soft and generous...

N : (touches her lips to his once more) bahot pyaar karti hu me tumse...bahot...(draws back a little to look into his eyes)

D : (pulls her back for a longer one) explanation aise adhe raste nai chodte...

N : (between kisses) pata hai... bed?

D : (lays back, taking her with him) couch...

... and they continue with the, umm, explanations ... 😉😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
yaar... Aish.. ummm.. you are in good mood today.. it is awesome.. !!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
lo pakad lo ek aur ... Dakshna apne flat me😛 ... without kebab me haddis😆 ... jus Dakshu nd uski Naina 😍...




She knows its almost noon, the sun is warm on her eyes. But he's not there...she puts out a hand for him...no. she gets up slowly, pulling the covers with her, slightly put off cos he isnt there. Looks around the room, and is pleasantly surprised to find everything in the right order. no clothes strewn around, no cushions on the floor either...the dress she'd exchanged for the uh, decimated nightgown too has been put away. and he'd left the drapes closed for her, keeping the harsh light away...a little smile curves her lips, roses bloom on her cheeks as she runs a hand slowly over his side of the bed...was the pillow still warm...? maybe he'd only just woken up and gone for a shower...

she calls out to him once, twice but gets no reply so goes to check. she finds his damp towel, steam in the washroom. but he isnt there either. assuming he went out to get food for them, she turns the shower on and steps in...

She's done with her shower, mirror ke samne baithi hai toweling her hair nd thinking f dakshu. slightly worried, she piks up d ph nd calls him.

par ph ghar ke andar se hi baj raha hai... agn thodi si put off, she puts the ph bak on the dresser, leans bak against the chair closing her eyes.

"Daksh tum kaha ho..." she says half to herself, "batake jate...ph bhi nahi liya...kaha ho tum..."

something falls on her...she opens her eyes...and then... rose petals ki barish hoti hai us par...

N : (surprised smile) daksh...

he's right behind her, smiling, and showers some more petals on her...laughing, she turns to him, puts her arms around him.he hugs her back.

N : (arms still around him) Daksh pls muje bataye bina kahi mat jao...pls?

D : sorry...(strokes her hair) soch raha tha tumhare uthne see pehle aau...phir pata hai tumhe kaise uthane wala tha main...?

N : (looks up, smiles) kaise...?

He leans down, drops a kiss on top of her head, draws back to smile at her again...opens his fist, and lets some more petals rain on her...

N : Daksh...

D : (enjoying her smile) hmm...?

She gets up, puts both arms around her, hugs him tight.

N : thank you...

D : thank you tho mujhe kehna chahiye...

she pulls back a litl .. "Kyu...?"

D : meri har subha itni khubsurat banane ke liye... aur aaj tho...

he smiles, leaving it off...she hides her face against him, blushing furiously.

D : vaise naina...

N : hmm ...

D : me complain tho nai kar raha hu, par agar roz muje aise uthaogi na... tho me offic ghar pe hi shift kar dunga... kya kehti ho...

N : Muje koi aitraz nahi hai...mera tho dil karta hai tumhe hamesha itne pas rakhu...itne pas, ki tumhari dhadkane muje sunayi de... har pal...

She looks up at him, smiles; as usual dono get lost ankhon hi ankhon me...

And as usual naina snaps out of it first.

N : (slowly) par ha, bad me ye mat kehna ki, umm, distract ho rahe ho... ya phir ye ki time hi nai mila...kam karne ke liye...

D : acha... me vaise distract nahi hota ok...

she smiles a knowin smile, pushes him off gently nd goes to the cupboard to pull out a salvar.

Dakshu s admiring her, side se lol.

N : Daksh brkfast me kya banau...

D : (absently) lunch...

N : (closes cupboard) hmm...? lunch... (she looks at the clock, its half past 12) oh... ok... (looks at him, freezes)

He's walking upto her, dazed as usual.

Puts out a hand, runs it through her hair slowly.

N : (softly) daksh...

D : (still lookin in2 her eyes) bolo...

N : tum...(he cups her face in his hand) distract nahi hone wale the na...

D : (slides the hand down, reaches her robe) distract- nahi, me kaha distract hua hu... (looks up at her again) mera tho shuru se yehi idea tha...(impish smile)

He pushes the robe off her shoulders a bit, bends down...she closes her eyes in surrender...he nuzzles her shoulder. she shudders delicately.

N : (husky tone) aur lunch...

D : (presses a kiss there)bad me decide kar le...? ya phir ... (trail of little kisses up her neck) me bahar se le aunga...

N : (slightly out of breath) ok...

he stops for a moment, draws back...

Eyespeak...

D : shall i...?

she tosses the dress in hand onto a chair, puts her arms about his neck... "yes..."

he scoops her up in his arms, lays her on the bed... aur phir ... censored😉😆😆


baki ka imagin kar lena😛 ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Pls, continue your good work sweety.LAGE RAHO,LAGE RAHO.Only with the help of such ff's we are able to smile through our heart ache.

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