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lucky.m

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

FF CONTD...

PATWARDHAN HOUSE

Discussion b/w ayi and baba(no dialogues)

Baba tells ayi he is not getting y sonakshi has aproblem with naina staying here and y mr.joshi is trying to impose his will on them.If this is the case they have to face many issues in future even after daksh's marriage

Then ayi tells him about daksh's love for naina and her conversation with him

VP is shocked to hear this, later he says even if they need to break the marriage one should knw what does naina feel for daksh.If its from both sides then its better to stop wedding here, but if naina don't have any feelings for daksh, then daksh can't spoil his life being alone whole life.He will say he will speak with daksh about this once he is back

Joshi house;

Joshi is furious and says how dare he(daksh) to speak with him like that that too for that naina.He don't him properly , may be he forgot the house issue.He will not leave him

Sonakshi says the main problem is not daksh, its naina and finally the time has come to decide the things.She asks her dad to not involve in this and she will deal with that naina and she leaves to patwardhan house

Patwardhan house

Daksh comes back furiously and ayi asks him whether he needs coffee. Daksh refuses and asks here where naina is, and finds out she is in her office.Ayi asks him if everything is fine, he says nothing to wry and goes to find naina

Daksh goes to naina's office. Naina is busy with work

Daksh; naina.

Naina, arey daksh , mein tumhari wedding hi plan kar rahiti.mujhe batao ki tumhe,...

Daksh; mujhe tumse baat karna, chalo mere saath abhi isi waqt

Naina; lekin kaha

Daksh; bataunga, chalo...

.He holds her hand and takes her with him to the terrace and closes the door

Naina; Daksh , kya hua??

Daksh; kya hua, tum mujhse poochti ho ki kya hua.Mein ne tumhe kitna samjhaya, lekin nahi tum samajthi hi nahi.Main ne kaha tumse ki tum ghar chodkar nahi javoge..phir bhi tum jaana chati ho kyunki woh joshi chata hai, uski beti cahati hain haan bolo

Naina is a bit shocked to hear this

Naina; daksh.. dekho mein bas darjeeling jaana chati hoon kuch dino ke liye,

Daksh;kuch dino ke liye.. ya hamesha ke liye

Naina shocked

Daksh;( in gussa) tumhe kya laga,tum mujhe nahi batavigi, mujhe pata nahi chalega,tum mujh chod kar jana chati ho..mujhe, lekin kyu naina? kyu? woh bhi hamesha ke liye,kis galti ki saja de rahi ho mujhe bolo...tum uss sonakshi ke liye itna sacrifices kyu kar rahi ho?

Naina; Mein kya sacrifice kar rhai hoon, kuch bhi tho nahi

Daksh; acha, shayad tumhe pata nahi, mein batata hoon.tum uss ke liye, mujhe , hamri dosti ko aur mera pyar ko qurbaan kardeni chati ho..kyu.

Naina; daksh

Daksh;😡 Dekho naina akhri baar keh raha hoon, tum mujhe chod kar kahi nhai javoge, kabhi nahi aur pls apna kasam wapas le lo, mein sonakshi se shaadi nahi karna chahta. pls naina, samajhne ki koshis karo mere pyar ko samjho, mein tumhare bina nahi rehsakta naina

😭

Daksh; Batao naina, kya tumhare dil mein mere liye kuch bhi nahi..kuch bhi😭,

Naina;daksh mujhe jana hai. she starts leaving

Daksh; jao chali jao.Tumhare pyar mein adha pagal tho ho chuka ho..iss dard mein poora pagal ho javunga..jao😕

Naina controls her feelings and turns back.daksh comes near her, holds her shoulders and says

Daksh; Naina tum apni mamma se keh sakte ho ki tumhe mujhse pyar hai, lekin mujhSe nahi..haina,, bolo..mujhse kaho naa.Tumhari mooh se yahi baat sunne ke liye mein tadap raha hoon..batao naina..batado ki tumhe mujhse pyar hai

Naina looks at daksh with tears and bit of shock.Both keep looking at each other.Soon naina comes into realisation releases her self and runs away from there

CONTD...

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Neethu

@ntsindia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

lucky... wow.. ! do continue... when this Naina will open her mouth?

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lucky.m

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

FF CONTD...

Naina is in her room remembering dakhs's words.Daksh is still on terrace in his gham.Then a hurricane named sonakshi hits patwardhan house.....

Bell rings.Ayi comes and opens door sees sona

Ayi; 😲arey sona,..shes' about to say something but sona stroms into house asking where's naina

Sona; Naina(in hyper tone)😡

Naina comes out and all others

Sona; Tumhari problem kya hain, kyu hamesha mere aur daksh ke beech mein aati ho? kyu daksh ko mujhse door karne ki khosis kar rahi ho

Naina; sonakshi, ye tum kya keh rahi ho?😲

Sona; Itna bola ban ne ki zaroorat nahi.Tumhine badkhaya na daksh ko mere papa ke khilaaaf, uski kaan bar diya...

Ayi; sonakshi,baat kya hein, kya hua, tum itne gusse mein kyu ho?aur naina par kyu chilla rahi ho?

Sona; batata hoon ayi.ye aapki naina jitna masoom dikhthi utni hai nahi..ye bahut chalak hai..isne pata nahi daksh ko kya kya pattiya padayi.daksh ne iss ke liye mere papa se jagda kiya..iss ke liye.pata nahi ye lagti kya hain isko tho mein

Daksh makes an entry

Daksh; Sonakshi, bas bahut ho gaya.tumhari himmat kaise hue naina se aise baat karni ki

Sona; aao daksh, tumhari khami thi.kya kaha tume mere papa se, ki ye kahi nahi jaayegi aur shaadi ke baare mein dobara sochlo..haan,ayi, poochiyena apni bete se..

Ayi,daksh ye sona kya keh rahi hain.. tum mr joshi se.

Daksh; haan ayi ye biilkul teek keh rahi hain, mein iske ghar gaya tha, kyuinki mujhe pata chala iss ke papa yaha aakar kuch sherte rakh gaye the..usi ke baare mein baat karne ke liye gaya tha,aur saaf saaf kehdiya ki naina kahi nahi jaayegi

Ayi; lekin tuje ye baat...

Sona; aur kisne ayi iss naina hi bataya hoga..

Ayi; nahi sona, naina ne nahi, naina ne maan kiya..iss baat batane se

Daksh; dekho mujhe jo kuch bhi kehna tha maine kehdiya tumhare papa se, tum pls jaakar apni papa se baat karo, yaha par scene create karne ki koi zaroorat nahi

Sona; mein scene create kar rahi hoon..mein..waise kya lagti hain ye tumhari ki tum is ke liye mujhse shaadi todhne ke liye bhi tayaar hogaye, dost..yahi kahoge na tum ache dost ho..mein tumhari honewali patni hoon. samjhe

Daksh; pehle tum samjhne ki kosish karo.mere aur naina ke beech jo rista hain woh tumhare samaj se bahar hain.. tum samaj nahi pavoge

Sona; to phir samjavona..kya hain tumhare beech

Daksh; sunna chati ho..himmat hain toh suno..kyunki main naina ..

He's about to say that he loves but naina stops him and tells him not to say

Sona; Wah, iss ne kehdiya, aur woh rukh gaya...agar tumhe ye itni pasand hai to mujhse shaadi kyu kar rahe ho.

Daksh😡; kyunki naina chahthi ke mein ye shaadi karu iss liye.mein tumse shaadi karne mein koi interest nahi , pehle mein ne inkaar kardiya.sirf naina ke liye mein iss shaadi e liye haan bola😆

Sona shocked

Sona; is ki kehne par..agar ye shhadi nahi karne ko kahegi kya tum rokh doge??

Daksh; Koi shak?😆

Sona ke andar ki kaali jag jati hain aur usse bahut bahut gussa aata hain. as her ego is hurt😡

Sona';to naina; Yahi chathi thi na tum, ab khush.. iss sab ki jadh tum ho..agar tum nahi hoti toh..tumhara koi hakh nahi yah rehne ka , chalo yaha se abhi nikal jao

She holds naina's hand and keeps pulling her towards door every body is shocked by this action of sona.Daksh is about to react

Naina releases her hand from sonakshi's hand and finally opens her moth as her patience has crossed limits

Naina; bas😡, Mein chup chaap sun rahi hoon..is ka matlab ye nahi tum kuch bhi kahoge aur kuch bhi karoge aur mein dekhta rahoongi

Daksh is about to say something but naina says

Naina; daksh; mujhe baat karne do..tum kaun hoti ho mujhe yaha se nikhalne wali.tum dash ki honewali patni ho abhi hui nahi uar rahi baat meri jaane ki mein kahi nahi javuingi naa iss ghar se. naa daksh ki zindagi se, kyunki pehle mein ayi thi agar kisi ko jaana padega woh ho tum samjhi👏

Every body is again shocked as they have not seen naina like this

Naina; tumhe yehi lagraha hain na ki mere aur daksh ke beech kuch hain dosti se jyada.tum bilkul sahi soch rahi ho.hum sirf dost nahi..pyar karte hum ek doosre se..daksh mujhese pyar karta hain aur mein daksh se.samjhi👏

Daksh shocked with happiness,😛,shock pe shock lag raha hai sab ko

Naina turns towards daksh and says I am sorry daksh,ki maine tumhe iss se shaadi karne keliye mazboor kiya..mein apna kasam wapas leti hoo.and she turns towards sonakshi and says aur kuch..

Sona; daksh..kya ye sach hain?

Naina; daksh se kya pooch rahi ho, mein keh raha hoo na..

Daksh; naina ne keh diya na , yehi sach hai.

Sonakshi ( gussa and tears); Mujhe kisi ki daya par ye shaadi nahi karni ,iss naina ki daya par to bilkul nahi.Mujhe laga tum bhi mujhe pasand karte ho...lekin..mujhe tumse shaadi nahi karni.mein ye ristha thod thi hoon She takes away the ring, throws away and leaves from there👏👏

Everybody takes a sigh of relief...

Contd...

PS; See guys, sona herself stopped marriage😆

Edited by lucky.m - 14 years ago

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niksidfan

@niksidfan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

wah lucky...tumne to ek hi pal main sonakshi ka patta cut diya...kash naina kuch aisa hi kare au koi mahan sacrifice mata na ban jaye...really good job...aur koi..daksh ki"koi shak" was too good...hahahah

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Asma Begum Ullah / Shahida (Shay)

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

I hope Daksh says he doesnt luv sona in SSBN or atleas tells hert he only said yes to marrying her because naina persuaded him. I think a some poit naina so y wud naina try 2 break them up and y she is asking naina to keep away from daksh.

I think u understand the characters very well, i can actually imagine the characters sayinh the same dialogues in the actual serial.

I also think like you, that at some point naina's patience and sympathy for sonakshi wil break, thanks sona for being unbeareble for too long.

i hope daksh says he ends the marriage because he'l never be able to love her and he doesn't 1 2 lie 2 her nemor and cause her more grief.

Edited by storytellerSSBN - 14 years ago

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lucky.m

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

Hey all , thanks for response..

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 14 years ago

#47

FF CONTD..LAST PART

I have decided to give a happy ending to this FF.So here we go...

Joshi house

Joshi is worried about sona,just then psycho comes running with tears in her eyes and goes running into her room.Joshi and supriya follow her,and ask her wahts matter. She hugs her dad cries and tells what happened in PH, and she is not ready to marry someone who doesn't lover her ans loves some one else and who rejected her.She asks them to leave her alone for some time,joshi calls patwardans and tells he is breaking off marriage, but they will have to pay for it

I know u are shocked by this nature of sona,lekin jab FF shuru kiya don't know she would be that psycho as shown in recent days.Just think sona in my FF is little better

Everybody discuss the events happened and VP tells them that joshi broke the marriage,and he says its good because it would be difficult for both daksh and sona to live together wthout love and sona's behaviour is totally immature.Daksh and naina are silent and look at ecah other, naina slowly leaves from there nad daksh keeps looking at her

Ayi and baba, conversation b/w ayi baba

Ayi tells baba,whatever happens is for good and now naina has declared that she loves daksh we should speak with her, VP says, its too earlyas just now marriage broke,they need to take some time befor taking any further step.

Let daksh and naina decide what they want to do,then we will proceed .Ayi agrees

Ayi and baba are surprised who told daksh about mr joshi 's comdtions and they come to know its akruthi

Get ready for dakshna union..😉

Edited by lucky.m - 14 years ago

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lucky.m

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Posted: 14 years ago

#48

Dakshna union😉

Naina is in her room remembering all that happened and her declaration of love for daksh infront of every one.She thinks what to reply and how to face daksh,if heconfronts her on this.She expects daksh to come and speak with her, but he doesnt turn up.😲

Naina keeps waiting.She is curious😲to see what daksh is doing and goes into his room.Daksh is busy in his room with his files and work

Naina comes in and says

Naina; daksh

Daksh; arey naina tum.kab ayi?, sry woh kaam mein thoda busy tha tho..kuch kaam thaa kya?( u might have guessed by now that dakshu darling is doing all this pruposefully)

Naina is surprised at normal behaviour of daksh as he is speaking to her as if nothing happened

😕

Naina; nahi, kuch nahi,bas aisa hi,

Daksh; acha toh teek hain

Naina; daksh ,kuch kehnatha, aaj jo kuch bhi hua, maine jo kuch bhi kaha...

Daksh; bas naina, tumhe explanation dene ki ki zaroorath nahi.In fact mujhe tumse thanks kehna chahiye

Naina; thanks.. kyu?😲

Daksh; Tumne apna kasam wapas le liya mere liye, muje sonakshi se bachane ke liye, itna bada jhoot bhola ki tum mujhse pyar karte ho..thanks naina

Naina is shocked 😲that he thinks her declaration of love is a lie and she gets angry.😡

Naina; kya kaha tumne..jhoot😡

Daksh; AAJ tumhari iss jhoot mujhe ek nya jeevan de diya..agar tum ne woh jhoot nahi kaha ho tha tho..tumhari issi jhoot ki wajah se mein aazad hoon..aur😆

Naina is very angry and she says

Naina; bas, baut ho gaya, jhoot, jhoot,tum me itna bhi akal nahi, itna bhi nahi samaj sakte kya jhoot hai kya sach.tumhe mera pyar jhoot lagta hai...tum ek number ke buddu ho..tumhara kuch nahi ho sakta..woh jhoot nahi, sach tha damn'it.😃

THey keep looking at ecah other and then naina realises what she said and starts going from there.Daksh holds her hand and says

Daksh; kya kaha tumne.kuch sunayi nahi diya.phir se kaho😛

Naina; maine kya kaha, kuch bhi tho nahi..mera haath chodo daksh

Daksh pulls naina towards him and says😳

Daksh; apne mamma se kehdiya, sab ke samne kehdiya, lekin jise batana chahiye tha uss se bhaag rahi ho.😊.

He puts his hand on her waist pulls her closer and says

Daksh; bahut intezaar karvaya..ab tho bata do aur ye mat poocho kya?

An intense eye lock, a smile with shy on naina's face and daksh with a mischevious look and then naina says😳😳

Naina; maine jo kuch bhi kaha woh sach tha daksh I love u daksh,I love u.❤️

Daksh; Naina, yahi sun na tha mujhe..ab hume koi alag nahi karsakta aur pls apna irada mat badlo.Tum mujhe milgayee aur kuch nahi chahiye mujhe, kuch bhi nahi👏

They both hug each other tightly and get lost in their own world 😉

Just then ayi comes to speak with daksh, she sees both her son and her would be DIL , with tears of happiness she leaves from there.

THE End...Hope u liked it..

.Will try to come up with another fiction

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Neethu

@ntsindia

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#49

Oh.. that was super.. brilliant.. I loooveed.. it...

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Neethu

@ntsindia

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#50

In Naina's confession I expected one thing at that time. You added that here..
What I meant is at that day when she scold daksh and at last Naina would say: "I love you damid..." i expected Daksh will say... "what did you say.. i didn't hear."
When she tells: "i love you, Daksh" Daksh grabs her and asks her: "Phir se bolo... " Naina smiles and tells again softly... Daksh with soft voice "kab se intzar kartha hoo yeh sunne ke liye... "
You added this in ur FF brilliantly.. I like it...

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