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Posted: 14 years ago
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😭😡Guys,

Today's episode was damn boring so thought I would continue with FF.This is completely irrespective current track in SSBN..Hope u will like it😊

Contd from previous part...

Daksh and naina in rain.hugging each other😳,after daksh poured out his heart before his love...ab aage...

A big lightening (to bring our jodi to real world)😉and it works.Naina first opens her eyes and but hamara dakshu abhi khoya hua hain😆.She slowly releases herself from embrace and now daksh comes into senses..both look at each other with an expression' ye kya hogaya?"😲

Daksh; Ab hame chalna chahiye..bahut dher hogaya..

Naina nods her head and both sit in the car..

Patwardhan house;

Ayi; Syamal,.pata nahi waha kya hua hoga?bahut dher hogaya. abhi takh chintu aur naina laute nahi..mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai.?

Syamal;Ghabarao mat vaini..baarish ho rahi hena.kahi rookhe honge

Daksh's papa; itna tension mat lo vibha,,aate hi honge

Sound of car..

Ayi; Lagta hai aagaye..she rushes towards door and opens it

Daksh and naina come inside(completely wet)

Ayi; Chintu, naina..jaldi se jao ,aur kapde badlo..poori tarah bheegh chuke ho..sardi hojayegi
Mein doodh leke aati hoon..phir baat karenge

Dakshna; teek hai ayi..both go into their rooms

Ayi brings 2 glasses of milk ,first she goes into chintu's room and gives it to him

Before ayi could ask anything chintu tells her that nothing much happened and naina faced the situation very bravely..now she is much better, ayi loosens up little bit and goes into naina's room with milk and they have small chat where naina says she is fine and she erased whatever happened with her completely out of her mind and heart...

Ayi feels relieved ,wishes her good night and leaves the room


Guys..I didn't write complete dialogues to ayi's part as our main concern is dakshna dialogue..

Night time..daksh stands at his fav place(window)..cool breeze touching him..remembering the hug, and all his moments with naina❤️

Naina walking in her room remembers the hug,daksh's dialogues ,his confession in drunken state..and all situations he stood up for her

Both reach their own conclusion on what next step would be and think "haan yahi teek hoga"..

Next day Morning....

Daksh gets ready and goes to speak with naina and knocks the door, goes inside..Naina is looking at some files ..

Daksh; Naina..

Naina..hi daksh..gud morning

Daksh; Mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hain..

Naina; mujhe bhi kuch kehna tha..pehle tum kaho..

(AS usual tum kaho..nahi tum kaho...naina wins )

Daksh; Naina, Mujhe lag raha hai ki jo kuch bhi ho raha galat hai.hum use rokh dena chahiye

Naina (holds daksh's hand ); Mein bhi tumse yahi kehna chahthi thi..mein khush hoon ki tum bhi aise hi soch rahe ho..

Daksh(with surprised smile); Sach ,mujhe yakeen nahi hota ki tum bhi..any ways chalo acha hua,😃.ab mujhe aur dher nahi karna chahiye.mein abhi jakar MR.Joshi se keh deta hoon ki ab sonakshi se meri shaadi nahi hosakthi..lekin iss se pehle mein ek baar ayi baba se bhi baat kar leta hoon..

Naina😲😲 in double shock

Naina; Daksh ,ye tum kya keh rahe ho? shaadi kyu nahi ho sakthi?? aur ayi baba se kya baath karne chahiye?

Ab daksh ki baari(triple shock)😲😲😲

Daksh; Naina, abhi tumne kaha ki...(long pause)..tum kis galti ki baat kar rahi thi??

Naina; Kal hamare beech jo kuch bhi..mein us ke baare mein tumse baat karna chahthi thi

Daksh😡😡😡(gussa..loads of gussa) kya..kal jo kuch bhi hua, mein ne jo kuch bhi kaha tumhe woh galti lagta hai...mere dil ki baath, mere feelings(jasbaadh)..mera pyar..sab galat lagta hai..😭 aur ye shaadi jo ho rahi hai sahi hai..hey na...bolo...tumhare nazar mein mere feelings ki koi value nahi...😭.😭

Naina; Daksh..aise baath nahi hain. mein samjhti hoon tumhare feelings..lekin ab bahut dher ho chukha hain..tum iss waqt shaadi se mooh nahi mod sakte..sonakshi ki zindagi ka sawaal hain..

Contd...



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Posted: 14 years ago
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Guys,

Let me know ur views on this FF,I have never written such long FF,that too contd.version never..If its boring I will stop it...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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it is really gud, esp where daksh tells naina she has no value for his feelings. i often feel that way.
Edited by storytellerSSBN - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: lucky.m




Naina😲😲 in double shock

Naina; Daksh ,ye tum kya keh rahe ho? shaadi kyu nahi ho sakthi?? aur ayi baba se kya baath karne chahiye?

Ab daksh ki baari(triple shock)😲😲😲





great lucky...i m enjoying thoroughly...plss do continue...the show is now pathetic with deir tragedic twists and turns...i thnk cvs shud visit forums ..
these writings give me lots of entertainment👏
@red....hahaha...double shock and triple shock is tooo cute😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lucky.. it never a boring yaar... actually I felt too good in reading ur FF. Please continue.. it is really superb... !!! I enjoy this more than the serial story...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi guys

FF Contd...from last part...

Daksh closes the door comes to naina and says

Daksh;Wahi toh mein tumse keh raha hu naina, ye sonakshi ki zindagi ka sawaal hai.Hum ko koi haq nahi usse barbaad karne ka..mujhe nahi lagta mein usse woh sab kuch de paaunga jo ek patni apni pati se expect karti hain..aur sonakshi toh bahut jyada expect kar rahi hain...
nahi naina, ye galat hai..acha yahi hoga isse yahi rokhde

Naina; daksh Tumhe shaadi koi mazaq lag raha hai..jab chaha haan keh diya..jab chaha tod liya...tum aise kyun soch rahie ho ki tum uss ki expectations poora nahi karpaugi...pause.meri wajah se,,kyunki tum mujhse pyar karte ho.??

Daksh turns his back towards naina

Daksh; nahi naina wajah tum nahi..mere pyar hai..mein nahi jaanta tumhare dil mein mere liye kya hain,dosti se badkar kuch feelings hain ya nahi..

He turns to naina's side and sayslekin mere dil mein sirf tum ho aur hamesha rahoge..mein kisi aur se...(pause)

Naina; daksh .aisa mat kaho..tumne meri liye shaadi ke liye maan gayena, ab mere liye..pls shaadi bhi karlo...dheere dheere sab kuch teek ho jageya...aur tum mujhe bhool bhi jawoge

Daksh; aisa tum sochthi ho naina..bhoolna itna assan nahi..agar hota, toh mein tumhe usi waqt bhool jata jab abhi se tumhari shaadi fix huyi...sab log abhi jaise nahi hote..samjhi...tumhe ye kaise pata hoga..tumne kabhi pyar nahi kiyana...

Naina looks at him with pain in her eyes..the pain of loosing daksh then she turns back and...says..teek keh rahe ho...maine kabhi kisi se pyar nahi kiya..😭 kabhi nahi..


Daksh...maine faisla kar liya hain, mein ye shaadi nahi karunga..bas

Naina tries to convince him but daksh is not ready hear and at last naina uses the most powerful weapon which never failed in daily soaps " tumhe meri kasam" aur dakshu bechara..😭😡...he dosen't say anything and starts leaving, he opens the door steps outward with all pain in his eyes and he finds...AYI standing there...😲(Ayi listened everything)👏

Contd...


Edited by lucky.m - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oh.. superb yaar... i ever wanted this... Ayi comes to know abt Daksh's feelings... i really want it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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it is a really gud ff... do continue... i want to know how aayi reacts
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Posted: 14 years ago
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FF...Contd...

Daksh comes out and sees ayi standing there.He is shocked but He doesn't say anything and goes into his room .Ayi stands with shocked expression combined with regret..After a while she follows daksh..

In daksh's room...

Daksh stands at window with tears in his eyes, ayi comes puts hand on him and says "chintu"
Daksh wipes tears in his eyes and truns back..says..ayi

Ayi; chintu..maine jo kuch bhi suna kya woh sach hain..tu naina se...
daksh; chodna ayi..mujhe kaam hain..mein abhi aata hoon..he starts going ayi stops him

Ayi..baat ko thaal mat,mujhe nahi batayega,apni ayi se nahi kahega...

Daksh gets emotional and hugs ayi and sheds tears for sometime then he says

Daksh; Haan ayi ye such hai.Mein naina se pyar karta hoon,,bahut pyar karta hoon lekin mein usse bata nahi paya..jab batana chaha tab abhi beech mein agaya..naina ne bhi haan kehdiya issliye mein chup raha...aur uss ke baad jo kuch hua aap janti hain...Mujhe samaj mein nahi aa raha mein kya karoo..aap ne suna na kaise naina apni kasam dekar..mujhe...Tu batana ayi mein kya karoo..kya karoo??

Ayi;Chintu ye tune mujhe kiss dhuvida mein dal diya..ek taraf shhadi ki tayariya ho rahe ho aur doosra taraf tu aur tera pyar... (after few minutes.). galtiyaan toh tujhse hui apna pyar ka zikar nahi karna aur sona se shaadi ke liye haan kehna...ab ek aur galti nahi hona chahiye..Main tere baba se baat karunga aur kahunga joshi ji se baat kare...

Ayi; (In lil tears..) Tu itne dino tak itna dard akela sehta raha.,tera dil nahi samaj paya mein😭 aur naina mere samne thi lekin kabhi mere dil mein ye khayal nahi aaya naina meri bahu bansakthi😃 is se jyada khushi baat kya ho sakti hain mere liye...lekin...ek baat bata mujhe, kya naina bhi tujhse pyar...?

Daksh; Pata nahi ayi...woh kya sochthi hain mere baare..kuch bhi pata nahi

Ayi; Agar tu kahe toh mein naina se ek baar baat karu..woh mere baat zaroor manegi

Daksh;nahi ayi..tu aisa kuch nahi karegi...

CONTD...




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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: lucky.m

Hi guys

FF Contd...from last part...

Daksh closes the door comes to naina and says

Daksh;Wahi toh mein tumse keh raha hu naina, ye sonakshi ki zindagi ka sawaal hai.Hum ko koi haq nahi usse barbaad karne ka..mujhe nahi lagta mein usse woh sab kuch de paaunga jo ek patni apni pati se expect karti hain..aur sonakshi toh bahut jyada expect kar rahi hain...
nahi naina, ye galat hai..acha yahi hoga isse yahi rokhde

Naina; daksh Tumhe shaadi koi mazaq lag raha hai..jab chaha haan keh diya..jab chaha tod liya...tum aise kyun soch rahie ho ki tum uss ki expectations poora nahi karpaugi...pause.meri wajah se,,kyunki tum mujhse pyar karte ho.??

Daksh turns his back towards naina

Daksh; nahi naina wajah tum nahi..mere pyar hai..mein nahi jaanta tumhare dil mein mere liye kya hain,dosti se badkar kuch feelings hain ya nahi..

He turns to naina's side and sayslekin mere dil mein sirf tum ho aur hamesha rahoge..mein kisi aur se...(pause)

Naina; daksh .aisa mat kaho..tumne meri liye shaadi ke liye maan gayena, ab mere liye..pls shaadi bhi karlo...dheere dheere sab kuch teek ho jageya...aur tum mujhe bhool bhi jawoge

Daksh; aisa tum sochthi ho naina..bhoolna itna assan nahi..agar hota, toh mein tumhe usi waqt bhool jata jab abhi se tumhari shaadi fix huyi...sab log abhi jaise nahi hote..samjhi...tumhe ye kaise pata hoga..tumne kabhi pyar nahi kiyana...

Naina looks at him with pain in her eyes..the pain of loosing daksh then she turns back and...says..teek keh rahe ho...maine kabhi kisi se pyar nahi kiya..😭 kabhi nahi..


Daksh...maine faisla kar liya hain, mein ye shaadi nahi karunga..bas

Naina tries to convince him but daksh is not ready hear and at last naina uses the most powerful weapon which never failed in daily soaps " tumhe meri kasam" aur dakshu bechara..😭😡...he dosen't say anything and starts leaving, he opens the door steps outward with all pain in his eyes and he finds...AYI standing there...😲(Ayi listened everything)👏

Contd...


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