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lucky.m

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

FF..Contd..

In the evening..Daksh's office

Daksh about to leave from office and sona reaches there..Daksh sees sona and says

Daksh; Tum...

Sona; oh god phir se wahi dialogue..Tumhare pass waqt nahi tha toh mein ne socha khood yaha avunga..tum nikal rahe ho..chalo kahi chalte hain..mujhe kuch baat karni hain

Daksh; Dekho mein bahut thak chuka hoon..aaj nahi.agar tumhe kuch kehna ho toh abhi kehdo..mujhe dher ho raha hain

Sona; Kis baath ki dher ho rahi hain..ghar hi to jaana hai..aisa kya jaroori kaam hai..mujhe se bhi jyada...

Daksh; ufff...pehle kaho kya kehna chahti ho

Sona; Mein kuch kehna nahi, sunna chati hoon.ki tum mujhe chodkar kyu naina ko apni saath legayi..mujhe tho aane se mana kardiya...kyu? kyinki tumhe koi disturbance naaa ho...tum dono ek doosre ke saath waqt bita sako..

Daksh; meri baat suno..naina ko le jaane ke peeche wajah hain.Mein naina ki taklif ko door karna chahitha tha..aur iss liye...

Sona; Batao..aur batao...mein tumhara har bahana aur jhoothi wajah ko maanne ke liye tayar hoon...kyunki mein jaanti hoon reason kya hai

Daksh(with gussa).😡..acha.. tum jaanti ho tho kyu pooch rahi ho?,mein tumhe wajah batana chahta tha..lekin ab nahi aur batana zaroori nahi samjhta , tumhe jo sochna hai soch sakte ho...hogaya.. ab mein jaa raha hoon...

Sona; Tum mujhe aise chodkar nahi jaa sakte

Daksh; Bilkul jaa sakta hoon. bye..

Sona; kamse kam drop tho karsakte hona

daksh; tumhara gaadi kaam kar raha haina..maine nahi kaha yaha aane ke liye..tum khood ayi ho..aur ab khood jaa bhi sakthi ho...chalo.bye gud night

Daksh starts leaving..sona uska peeche peeche jaati hain lekin daksh don't bother and

he leaves in his car

Sona; Mujhe akela chod kar chala gaya..tumhare liye mein yaha tak aayi aur tum...ek baar shaadi ho jaane do..tab bataungi...she leaves..

Nothing important happens in patwardhan house that night, as usual daksh and naina apne khayalo mein khoye hue raat guzarte hain

Next day'

Naina will be planning to start wedding arrangements of daksh and sona..she is in her office with aku..daksh leaves for office.Every body busy with their respective works.

Joshi comes to patwardhan house..

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Asma Begum Ullah / Shahida (Shay)

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

cant wait for the nxt part

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lucky.m

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

FF..CONTD

Vidhyadhar patwardhan is reading news paper and vibha ayi is busy in kitchen

Joshi; Namaste Mr.patwardhan

VP; Arey joshi ji aap, namste ayi ye ayiye..betiye,Vibha also comes and after all formal greetings

Joshi;Kaise chal rahe shaadi ki tayariyaan.aur kaha hai aapki woh wedding planner?kya naam hai uska..haan naina..kaha hai woh?

Vibha; Apni office mein hogi

Joshi; Dekhiye aap toh jaante hai sonakshi meri ek lauti beti, aur woh mere liye sabkuch hai.Iss liye mein uski shaadi mein koi kasar nahi chodna chahta.mein chahta hoon wedding arrangements aise ho ki dekhne walo ki hosh udd jaye..issi silsile mein baat karna chahta tha.

Daksh kaha hai?office chala gaya..

Vidyadhar: ji

Joshi; Mujhe toh aisa lag raha yaha par to kuch bhi arrangements shuru nahi hua, shaadi ka mahol toh nazar nahi aa raha

Vidyadhar; Dekhiye joshi ji.mein maanta hoon ki arrangements itne joro shoro se nahi ho rahe hain lekin hum koi kami rehne nahi dege apni bete ki shaadi mein..woh naina ke saath jo kuch bhi hua...us ki wajah se sab..

Joshi; Dekhiye mr patwardhan, mein maanta hoon uske saath boor hua.iss ka matlab ye nahi ki aap uski asar iss shaadi mein padne denge..ek paraya ladki ki wajah se

Vibha; joshi ji, naina paraya nahi.woh iss parivaar ka hissa hain

Joshi; Vibha ji aap maniye ya nahi paraya paryae hote.waise kitne mahino se rah rahi hain woh yaha

Vibha; 6 or 7 months se

Joshi; Bas.suna hai daksh ke saath uski kaafi achi dosti hain..woh sona ne bataya

Vibha; Haan, dono ek doosre ke bahut ache dost hain

Joshi; bas dost hain na..lekin shyaad daksh dost aur hone wali patni ke beech ka fark nahi samaj tha, dekhiye meri beti jo bhi chahathi hain woh poora hona chahiye..aap naina se kehdijiye koi woh koi doosra ghar dekhna shurukar de..mein nahi chahta meri sona ko koi taklif ho

VP; Yeh aap kya keh rahe hain?

Joshi; Naina hamesha yaha rehnewali nahi hain. aaj nahi toh kal usse jana hoga,agar meri beti chati hain woh yaha nahi rahe toh woh nahi rahege..bas

Vibha;lekin joshi ji ,Aise kaise

VP; Vibha bilkul teek keh rahi hain , naina ko

Naina comes in and says

Naina; MR.Joshi aap ko fikr karne ki koi jaroorath nahi.ek baar shaadi ki arrangements ho jaaye ein khood chali javungi yaha se

Joshi; yahi acha hoga tumhare liye aur sab keliye..chalta hoon namskar

And that khadoos leaves 😡

Vibha; naina ye tu kya kehrahi hain.. tu chali jayegi,,nahi tu kahi nahi jjayegi ..bas

VP; Haan naina beta..tumhe jaane ki koi zaroorath nahi..woh apni beti ki shhadi yaha kar rahe iss ka matlab ye nahi woh jo chahe woh hogi

Naina; Ayi, baba, aap tension kyu le rahe ho.mein hamesha ke liye thodi jaa rahi hoon..darjeeling javungi mamaa ke paas..

Vibha; tu wapas aayegi na

Naina; haan ayi.meri doli baraat ka kya hoga? aur ayi aap ye baat daksh se mat kehna, naraz ho jayega..teek hain.ye hamari secret hain..acho mujhe kaam hein mein jaa rahi hoon and she leaves

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Neethu

@ntsindia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

oh.. when Daksh comes to know abt Mr Joshi's demand... oh.. can't imagine... do write.. soon...

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lucky.m

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

FF..CONTD

In the evening at patwardan house

In Naina's room

.Naina will be speaking to anjali.After formal questions like how rae u etc..anjali find out naina wants to say something and she keeps asking naina what is it,and finally our dumbo opens the mouth..

Naina; Mamma, Aap bilkul teek kehthi thi .Daksh mujhse pyar karta hai, bahut pyar karta hain.Mein hi samajh nahi payyi uske dil ko bhi aur mere dil ko bhi ki aur mera dil kya chatha hai

Jab samajh ne lagi.bahut dher ho gaya.😕

Anjali; Naina. Tum teek tho ho...kya tum bhi daksh se😲

Naina; Haan mamma mein bhi daksh se pyar karti hoon..bahut chahti hoon..mein hi stupid ki tarah apni feelings ko ignore kiya..kabhi dyan nahi diya..aur ab daksh mujhse door ho gaya😭

Anjali; Kya tune daksh ko ye baat bataya?

Naina; Nahi mamma, Mein nahi chahti daksh ko pata chale ,uski shaadi honewali aur mein usse kisi confusion mein nahi dalna chahti

Anjali; Ye tek nahi hain beta..jab tum jaante ho ki daksh sirf tumse pyar karta hain tumhe usse batana chahiye.yehi acha hoga tum dono ke liye aur...

Naina; PLss mamma , mein iske baare mein aur kuch discuss nahi karna chahti aur ek zaroori baat karni thi

Anjali; haan , bolo

Naina; Mein darjeeling wapas aa rahi hoon

Anjali(with happiness); kab aur kitne dino ke liye??

Naina (with pain); Hamesha ke liye..

Anjali; Kyaaa?

Suddenly some sound outside naina's room,naina turns back and see shadow of somebody leaving from there

Naina; Main aapko baad mein call karti hoon..

She comes out and finds no body there.She is in little doubt whether some body has listened her words..

Daksh's office

Daksh as usaul busy with his work.He gets a call on his mobile.As soon as he hears what other person said he gets angry😡.After the call ends he says simran to handle the work ,he has some important work to be done.. and he leaves..

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Neethu

@ntsindia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

Super.. the way u added the suspense .. i liked it.. eager to know the next part.

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luv_virmaan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

your ff is awesum... eager to read the next part... is it ayi who overhears naina's conversation???????? do cont...

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lucky.m

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Posted: 14 years ago

#38

FF CONTD...

At joshi's house

Supriya; Aaj jaldi wapas aagaye

Joshi; Kyu tumhe acha nahi laga..chale jaata hoon

Supriya; mera woh matlab nahi hain

Joshi; Tumhara kya matlab he mujhe usse koi matlab nahi..daksh aanewala hain..usse kuch baat karna tha..ab yese khade khade mere mooh kya dekh rahi hoon. Is ghar ka damad aa raha hai khatirdaari ki tayariya karo jaldi aur sona kaha hain

Supriya; Apne dost ki yaha gayi hain..Aati hi hogi

Mean while daksh comes to joshi house and goes inside

Joshi; Arey daksh beta aao.aao beto,

Daksh comes and sits, after formal greetings,Supriya gets him snacks and tea , but he politely refuses

Joshi; Haan , bolo tumhe kuch baat karna tha..aise kya zaroori baat hain

Daksh; Baat toh zaoori hain mr.joshi bahut zarori hain.Aaj subha aap mere ghar gaya the kuch baat karne ke liye

Joshi; Haan woh shaadi ki arrangements ke baare baat karne ke liye

Daksh; Bas arrangements ke baare ya aur kuch..

Joshi; Ab samaj mein aaya..haan mein tumhare dost naina ke baare mein bhi baat kiya aur tumhare parents ko samjhadiya..ki woh shaadi

Daksh; Ki woh shaadi ke baad ghar mein nahi reh sakthi, hain na

Joshi; Haan , toh is mein galat kya hain.dekho daksh beta.mein jaanta hoon woh tumhare dost hain lekin tumhe apni prioroties pata hona chahiye.Ek paraya ladki se itna dosti..sona ka acha nahi lag raha hai..

Waise bhi tumhe ussi fikra karne ki ki zaroorat nahi..usko accommadation mein dilavunga aur

Daksh; Bas mr joshi.Iss se pehle aap kuch aur kehde mein chahta hoon shaadi se pehle hi kuch baatein clear ho jaye

Pehli baat; Mein apni priorities ache se jaanta hoon aur ye bhi jaanta hoon kisko kha rakhan chahiye

Doosri baat;Mere ghar mein kaun rahega kaun nahi ye app ko decide karne ki koi zaroorat nahi aur mein aap ko kuch yaad dilana chahta hoon..Aap ki beti, mujhse shaadi karna chahti thi mein nahi, aur rishta lekar aap mere gahr aaya the, mein nahi

Agar aap apni beti ko aisa pati lana chahte hein jo uski har baath maane aur uski ungliyon par naache toh mein galat insaan hoon aapki beti ke liye..kyunki aisa kuch nahi hoga..pls aap ye baat apni beti ko samjahyiye

Chalta hoon

Joshi( with that khadoos face), is in hyper tension ,Daksh starts leaving but again he turns back and says

Daksh; Ek aur baat mr joshi..Rahi baat naina ki, naina kahi jayegi naa meri ghar se.. naa meri zindagi se..mein usse jaane hi nahi doonga..agar appko ya aapki beti ko iss se koi problem hain toh acha yahi hoga aap iss shaadi ke baare mein doobara sochle...namaste

He turns back to leave and sees sonakshi standing there with her pshcyo hypertension expression.Daksh gives alook to her and goes from there leaving baap- beti in shock...

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