Dakshna dialogue [FF]

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Neethu

@ntsindia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

aage kya hai.. jaldi batao na..

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Asma Begum Ullah / Shahida (Shay)

@storytellerSSBN

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: lucky.m
FF...Contd...

Daksh comes out and sees ayi standing there.He is shocked but He doesn't say anything and goes into his room .Ayi stands with shocked expression combined with regret..After a while she follows daksh..

In daksh's room...

Daksh stands at window with tears in his eyes, ayi comes puts hand on him and says "chintu"

Daksh wipes tears in his eyes and truns back..says..ayi

Ayi; chintu..maine jo kuch bhi suna kya woh sach hain..tu naina se...

daksh; chodna ayi..mujhe kaam hain..mein abhi aata hoon..he starts going ayi stops him

Ayi..baat ko thaal mat,mujhe nahi batayega,apni ayi se nahi kahega...

Daksh gets emotional and hugs ayi and sheds tears for sometime then he says

Daksh; Haan ayi ye such hai.Mein naina se pyar karta hoon,,bahut pyar karta hoon lekin mein usse bata nahi paya..jab batana chaha tab abhi beech mein agaya..naina ne bhi haan kehdiya issliye mein chup raha...aur uss ke baad jo kuch hua aap janti hain...Mujhe samaj mein nahi aa raha mein kya karoo..aap ne suna na kaise naina apni kasam dekar..mujhe...Tu batana ayi mein kya karoo..kya karoo??

Ayi;Chintu ye tune mujhe kiss dhuvida mein dal diya..ek taraf shhadi ki tayariya ho rahe ho aur doosra taraf tu aur tera pyar... (after few minutes.). galtiyaan toh tujhse hui apna pyar ka zikar nahi karna aur sona se shaadi ke liye haan kehna...ab ek aur galti nahi hona chahiye..Main tere baba se baat karunga aur kahunga joshi ji se baat kare...

Ayi; (In lil tears..) Tu itne dino tak itna dard akela sehta raha.,tera dil nahi samaj paya mein😭 aur naina mere samne thi lekin kabhi mere dil mein ye khayal nahi aaya naina meri bahu bansakthi😃 is se jyada khushi baat kya ho sakti hain mere liye...lekin...ek baat bata mujhe, kya naina bhi tujhse pyar...?

Daksh; Pata nahi ayi...woh kya sochthi hain mere baare..kuch bhi pata nahi

Ayi; Agar tu kahe toh mein naina se ek baar baat karu..woh mere baat zaroor manegi

Daksh;nahi ayi..tu aisa kuch nahi karegi...

CONTD...

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Asma Begum Ullah / Shahida (Shay)

@storytellerSSBN

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

if daksh aur sona ki engagement/shaadi tootgeyi toh ungliya naina par hi utenge, dosh naina ko diya jayega aur phir se uski bezaati hogi. log sochenge ki naina abhi ko apni pyar ki jala mein nahi pasa payi isi liye woh ab daksh ko apni pyar ki jaal mein basan chahti hain aur daksh aur sona koh alag karna chahti hain.

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: storytellerSSBN
if daksh aur sona ki engagement/shaadi tootgeyi toh ungliya naina par hi utenge, dosh naina ko diya jayega aur phir se uski bezaati hogi. log sochenge ki naina abhi ko apni pyar ki jala mein nahi pasa payi isi liye woh ab daksh ko apni pyar ki jaal mein basan chahti hain aur daksh aur sona koh alag karna chahti hain.

Mein tho apni FF mein joshi aur co ki aise waat lagaunga.sara bhadaas nikalunga.just wait and watch and dnt wry abt naina's role yaar..she will not be blamed for sure..thanks for ur constant response and also to nts india...any more ideas..pls share..

Edited by lucky.m - 14 years ago

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niksidfan

@niksidfan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

gr8 yaar...i just love all of the parts...:)👏

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

FF..CONTD...

Ayi: comes to know abt daksh's feelings and she says she would speak to naina...ab aage

Daksh; Nahi ayi..tu aisa kuch nahi karegi..Mein nahi chahta kisi ki kehne par ya samjhane par naina mujhse pyar kare..jis tarah mujhe ehsaas hua iss pyar ka, mein chata hoon naina bhi khud realise kare...

Ayi; teek hai chintu.agar tu chahta hai ki mein naina se baat nahi karu toh yehi sahi.lekin ab tu kya karna chahta hai..sonakhsi ke baare mein?

Daksh;Wahi toh soch raha hoon ayi..naina ki kasam ki baare mein ...agar naina kasam nahi dete toh mein ye shaadi karna nahi chahta tha..lekin

Ayi; Kyu itna tension le raha hai..thoda waqt le aur ache se soch ki tu kya chata hain.. ye teri poori zindagi ka sawaal hain.Mein nahi chahti tu jald baji mein koi faisla kare...lekin ek baat yaad rakhana tere faisle se do aur zindagi bhi judi huyi hain...teri jo bhi faisla hoga mein tere saath hoon

Daksh; Thanks ayi..acha ayi mein ab nikhaltha hoon office ke liye..dher hogaya

ayi; apna khayal rakhna..

Daksh leaves for office...

Joshi house

Cartoon calls daksh and dakshu is busy handling a client..he disconnects the call but hamari psycho keeps calling(u know how she she is).She want to meet daksh and confront him about taking naina with him and leaving her..

At last daksh picks the call

Sona; daksh..tum kab wapas aye..mujhe call takh nahi kiya..mujhe tumse milna hai abhi isi waqt

Daksh(with irritated exp); dekho sonakhsi..iss waqt ye possible nahi hain ..mein client ke saath busy hoon..baad mein baat karunga...aur please baar baar phone karke mujhe tang mat karo..rakhta hoon bye😆

Sona; arey daksh; meri baat suno...(dakshu disconnects)😆

Sona;; mujhe pata hain tumhara imp client kaun hai..us ko tho mein dekhlungi...

She goes downstairs with hyper tension expression..and then don papa is getting ready to go to his office..He sees face of his psycho daughter and aks her whats matter...she explains him that daksh didn't call her after coming back and now he don't have time for her..he is not giving importance to her...blah//blah...😡

Ab joshi ko hypertension hogaya😆 and he says to sona not to worry..he will solve her problem soon ...very soon(with wicked smile)

Contd...

Edited by lucky.m - 14 years ago

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: niksidfan
gr8 yaar...i just love all of the parts...:)👏

Thanks yaar..

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Neethu

@ntsindia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Mein tho apni FF mein joshi aur co ki aise waat lagaunga.sara bhadaas nikalunga.just wait and watch and dnt wry abt naina's role yaar..she will not be blamed for sure..thanks for ur constant response and also to nts india...any more ideas..pls share..

[I know it is a childish story line... u just asked idea.. if it helps you... ]

for that, Supriya - Diwakar's past should be out I think. May be a big story of cheating behind that. may be Mr Joshi's greed and attitude of possessing what he wanted spoiled other 3 lives [Diwakar, Anjali, Supriya].
If they try to repeat the old story once again for Sonakshi, Supriya will burst out. she may say she married her papa but never could love him truly eventhough she didn't keep any relation with Diwakar. Knowing the truth the pic abt SOnakshi's papa will be broken. She will come to know that love is not that thing one will get forcefully. It should happen from the heart. But knowing the truth Naina decides to go from there. Daksh will be upset and he plans to stop her and confess in front of all that he cannot live without her and why she closes her eyes towards him. "KP ko maaph kar sakte hai kya?" naina will lose control and a filmi situation.

Mr Joshi and beti will decide to bring Daksh in their way but Daksh will obey in a limit. In btn Mr Joshi comes to know that Naina is Supriya's daughter which makes him fear. if the old story is out all the image of him will be broken and his daughter's mrg will also get messed up. he hides the matter from everybody. He plans to keep naina away from Supriya and padwarthan family. he will ask Naina to go from Daksh by herself for her friend's future [any positive character will overhear this]. Naina plans to go. padwarthan family incl Daksh will be upset. Then he will come to know that because of Mr Joshi, naina plans to go. Padwarthan family will have annoyance in him. he will ask why he demaded to Naina so. Aftre knowing the thingsm Daksh will tell if they do not have faith in him right now itself, there is no meaning in proceeding the mrg. Mr Joshi will try to blackmail Daksh with the property issue. They will be more annoyed. Daksh breaks the mrg completely. Sonakshi will accuse Naina as the resposible for breaking the mrg. Daksh will correct her she is not resposnible for breaking the mrg but it is by himself only. In hyper she will call Naina as illegitimate who does not know who exactly gave birth of her even. that makes Naina hurt and she will shout it is true that she never met her mother but she knows whose daughter she is.. her papa is Diwakar Bharadwaj and mother is Supriya. hearing that Supriya will get shocked and fainted off... awakeing from her she will cry "naina.. meri bachi... "
;)

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Neethu

@ntsindia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

Lucky, keep writing FF.. it is too good..

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 14 years ago

#30

@nts india...good idea yaar..I will surely include ur ideas..whole idea may not be possible but a part is for sure possible..U need to wait to know which part of yours.. I am going to include...thanks for sharing😉

Edited by lucky.m - 14 years ago

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