Mayan n Rabir ff [Play Date] -Completed Last chap @pg 49 - Page 38

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Posted: 10 years ago

Last chap:
Kabir n Rachna turned in shock hearing Dad's voice.They broke the hold n stood by each other side.Rachna kept making distance seeing her Dad's expressions.But Kabir didnt allow her this time.He held her palm tightly
Rachna:Kabir leave my hand
Kabir:No Rachna,I am not ready to loose you again
Dad seeing both still holding their hands left the terrace,this time not with anger but with pain that his daughter cheated him.
Rachna:Kabir,Dad
Kabir:Rachna don't worry,Everything will end good,He will accept us
Rachna:I never seen Dad crying before,I am worried only for him now.I behaved too selfish.
Kabir:hmm u r right,Even I feel so guilty but we need to face all this,We just cant run away from our problems.Will you be with me
He let out his hand n Rachna gave her hand as approval.They both walked down the terrace,Whole family waited for the couple.Seeing Dad sitting in sofa so depressed Rachna left Kabir's hand n ran to her Dad.
Rachna:Dad pls say something,Don't be like this pls,Ma ask Dad to talk to me,Am sorry
Mom:Your Dad never understands what is important,For him more than his daughters happiness his ego is only important,Leave him Rachna ,Even if we saw you a bride,he wont b good like Kabir.He is best for you n ur Dad will get it soon
Saying it Mom went near Kabir n stood by him to show her support.Kabir gave a bright smile n touched her foot.
Rachna's sis:Ma what r u doing,You against Dad?
Sis husband:Am with aunty,Kabir s the best for Rachna
He too went to stand beside Kabir
Sis:I will be always in my husband side
Gunjan's Dad stepped in with his family n stood with Kabir
Gunjan's Dad:Even I was stubborn like you,but Gunjan tought me a good lesson that her choice is the best.She too cheated me but it was only to give me a chance to understand her.Today I understood,my Daughter's decision will be always right
Gunjan: uncle to get Mayank in my life,I lied a lot but today am happy I revealed everything to them n my parents too accepted him.Pls Rachna deserve more happiness,She didn't lie like me..She thought your happiness important than hers uncle pls accept them.
Rachna:Pls talk to me Daddy, everyone are against you for my happiness but not me.I will be on your side forever.
Kabir to himself" This Rachna will never change uhhh"
Dad stood from the chair with lot of pride in face n helped Rachna to stand too.
Dad:My Daughter is in my side,that's enough for me..Am ready to do anything for her happiness.
While Announcing it,Rachna hug her Dad n Kabir too ran to him n hugged him along Rachna.Rachna n Dad starred at him.
Kabir left the hold n gave an naughty smile
Kabir:Am sorry,got over excited
Dad laughed n patted on Kabir's back.Rachna signalled at Kabir something.
Kabir:What Rachna
Everyone shouted at same time : Kabir,Rachna wants to meet you alone.
Rachna blushed n ran from the room.Kabir too ran behind her n whole family was laughing.
Rachna ran to her room n stopped behind the door breathing heavily.Kabir searched for her n hearing her breath.He gave a wicked smile n locked the door.Hearing the door locking sound Rachna got more nervous n turned to him.
Rachna:Kabir y u lockin t,My whole family is outside
Kabir:You r mine from now baby
He said dragging her hand n she fell on him.
Rachna:Kabir leave me
Kabir:Come on Rachna one kiss plsss,We gonna get married soon
Rachna::Marriage now,No way its only after my college
Kabir:I cant wait that long,Lets get married n then u read
Rachna:Noo
She kept shaking her head in neglect n her lips were shrinked as she kept saying No.Kabir to stop her cupped her chin n stopped it from shaking n kissed her hard making her go week.Rachna too responded to his kiss.
Rachna:Can we get married today
Kabir laughed hard n carried her in arms
Mayank: Am so happy for Rabir
Gunjan:Ya finally they won their love,True love always wins
Mayank:Like ours
Mayank carried Gunjan in her arms n both the hero's carrying their love kept circling.The girls felt like they are the queen of the world
Three years later:
Rachna's Dad:I was waiting for this day,finally our daughters finished their studies
Gunjan's Dad:We must be blessed to have good Son in laws
Rachna's sis:Uncle they r not yet ur son in laws,half n hour left for their marriage
Kabir n Mayank reached the stage n got blessings from both their parents n sat before fire waiting for their queen.
Pandit:Bring the groom soon,Time is nearing
Someone shouted both Gunjan n Rachna not in mandap.Shocked parents search for their daughters but the hero's knew where their girls would be
Kabir:Uncle don't worry,Your daughter s safe,She is just playing with me
Mayank:Come Kabir lets get our girls
Both held their hands n jumped down the stage n ran out,n whole followed them.
The boys car stood outside all decorated n their girls waited for them in their respective car.
The boys ran to their own driver seats,Turning on the car
Gunjan's Dad:Where r u all going?
Rachna:We running from our marriage
Dad:All stop first
Gunjan:Bye Daddy
Kabir:Bye uncle
Rachna's Dad:Let them be happy,Leave them
Everyone bid them bye happily


Mayank:Gunjan,First time I saw you I thought u r a ghost sleeping in my car
Gunjan:Oh tonight u will regret for it,Letme show u some scary moves,She winked at Mayank


Kabir:I love you Rachna
Rachna:Me too Brother
Kabir gave her kill you look n she laughed hard.
Rachna:I love you too Kabir
Play date continues.
The End.

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MythilyRaman

It's been long time i never read any ffs on this forum.. loved it! Love the twist n turns in your story 👏


update soon 😈

Did u edit ur comment,But yes all my ffs I wrote will have Tamil movie style on it n happy that u liked t
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteangelasya

Amazing saranya...

Totally in love with the update:D
Mayan together for forever...
Gunjan's parents asked him to marry gunjan, that's so cool...
N rabir part,as always...superb...
Kabir did so much...wow
N the proposal...oops...y am I in disorder?
The part from whr rachna not going infront of kabir...its awesome...
So emotional I mean fabulous...
Searching 4 words..:P
N the proposal, hayeee kitna cute...so cute yaar...
N the way she ws hesitating...oh my!!!
Thn rachna accepted...kabir so happy kissed her all over her face...
N the last part rachna's dad coming in...
Very very interesting end...

Enjoyed reading ur comment tank u so much
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: crtkelly

Couldn't multitask today, and as you know my focus was on today's episode more than anything😕, but have finally had the opportunity to read your update.

So happy for Gunjan and Mayank, everything worked out so well for them, a whole lot easier than they expected , that was so cool😆
Aww our poor Rachna lonely for someone to share her joy with, obviously got used to a certain someone always being there!
Kabir doing so much for her family, beyond sweet.
The terrace scene...wow, you've left me speechless with it, suffice to say I loved it so much.
Finally good old Dad, couldn't he have stayed away for another minute😕, but then again that discovery may have been worse than what he has walked in on now😉
Great update, Dear!
Can't wait to see what happens next.

Thanks Kelly
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank u every one for ur big support
U guys r really gr8,Love you all
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Posted: 10 years ago
finally u updated n i was crazily waiting for urs n kelly's update...
I read it now it was just awesome ...
Coming to love towards dad u created onscreen rachna Ly...
Loved it wen all told kabir that rachna wants to meet you alone...
N i m sad that its last part...
N ya i m sure there ll a new ff also...
And finally thank you for updating...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow..wht an update yaar...
Bt y did u end it :(
Its superb end...
Luv it
Will be waiting 4your next ff :P
Will comment on the update later coz am in a hurry sorry :((
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Posted: 10 years ago
kahatam kar diya???? not fair grrr
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Posted: 10 years ago
Saranya happy update.
First i afraid by seeing Dayal's expression.But love Kabir's confident tone and Supportive family.First time saw shail taking her daughter's side going against Dayal.Then whole family joined them.

I love Rachana and Kabir's naughty romance here.And like's Gunjan's father approach too.

So fianlly they all are happy that they got their Manzil.

Three yrs leap and Rachana and Gunjan completed their studies.This is the best part .

Very beautiful ending dear.

But want new ff from you dear.


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Posted: 10 years ago
Last Chapter😲 how can you do this to us!

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