Mayan n Rabir ff [Play Date] -Completed Last chap @pg 49

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MEHAK

@mkakkar93

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#361

Originally posted by: saravathi

wow waiting for this moment to happen,really missed ur first comment
hope u will enjoy this

saranya i enjoyed a lot reading it and many atimes i was also thinking that what i wanna say everybody said all before so i always felt that when the moment will come again when i will comment first and now it happened and even i am too happy 😳😃

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MEHAK

@mkakkar93

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#362

Originally posted by: saravathi

Actually I wrote this update long back
but didn't post it t here,Really wondering it all happened bcoz u would come online
love you mehak thanks a lot for supporting me even in ur busy times

rather u are thanking me so much i shud say u lot of thanks to write and update always when i want to have the update even when i am not able to read it but still a big apology for commenting late in the previous month but now a big thanks for writing so well and making me in love with the ff 😳👏right now i am still not in a position to read the whole ff again but still when i am free maybe sunday i will read it all again as i want to relive the moments again of the ff😳

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Nurit

@Nuritzur

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#363

Thanks for update

Yaar this dayal. lol even in your ff is angry. lol just kidding

kt cant hide his feeling to rachna so lovely. I really like at dear and most of all the propose part. Nicely done. Cant wait to see what dayal will say about at. cant wait for your next update.

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Saranya

@saravathi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#364

Originally posted by: mkakkar93

rather u are thanking me so much i shud say u lot of thanks to write and update always when i want to have the update even when i am not able to read it but still a big apology for commenting late in the previous month but now a big thanks for writing so well and making me in love with the ff 😳👏right now i am still not in a position to read the whole ff again but still when i am free maybe sunday i will read it all again as i want to relive the moments again of the ff😳

So sweet of you dear,no need of sorry at all am sure,you will read mine somehow

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Saranya

@saravathi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#365

Originally posted by: Nuritzur
Thanks for update
Yaar this dayal. lol even in your ff is angry. lol just kidding
kt cant hide his feeling to rachna so lovely. I really like at dear and most of all the propose part. Nicely done. Cant wait to see what dayal will say about at. cant wait for your next update.

Thanks Nurit,glad to know u liked t,yes Rachna's Dad s strict here too..will update soon

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hangok

@hangok

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#366

ohhh nooo
ufff why has rachnas dad to come, cant he let them be alone😃

nice work and thanks for pm

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@HappySmiles

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#367

Woww that was so cool! 😛
Gunjan's dad wants his Gunjan to marry Mayank..yay like a dream come true.😆
I just hope Mayan don't get in too much trouble if Gunjan's dad finds out about Mayank.😆😆

Wow..the way Kabir helped Rachna and her family was just so nice..!!😃
He will be a good son-in-law in the future for sure!!😉😆

Awww, Rachna finally accepted her KT.😳 That was really very sweet!!!! : )

Everything was going fine when suddenly you scared me. Rachna's dad..😲
I hope things will be okay.😊

Reading this story, I can tell you are a creative person, keep it up!!👍🏼

Thank you for such a sweet story, I really love it.😳😳

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Cutie

@sidholic

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#368

Amazing saranya...

Totally in love with the update:D

Mayan together for forever...

Gunjan's parents asked him to marry gunjan, that's so cool...

N rabir part,as always...superb...

Kabir did so much...wow

N the proposal...oops...y am I in disorder?

The part from whr rachna not going infront of kabir...its awesome...

So emotional I mean fabulous...

Searching 4 words..:P

N the proposal, hayeee kitna cute...so cute yaar...

N the way she ws hesitating...oh my!!!

Thn rachna accepted...kabir so happy kissed her all over her face...

N the last part rachna's dad coming in...

Very very interesting end...

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crtkelly

@crtkelly

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#369

Couldn't multitask today, and as you know my focus was on today's episode more than anything😕, but have finally had the opportunity to read your update.

So happy for Gunjan and Mayank, everything worked out so well for them, a whole lot easier than they expected , that was so cool😆

Aww our poor Rachna lonely for someone to share her joy with, obviously got used to a certain someone always being there!

Kabir doing so much for her family, beyond sweet.

The terrace scene...wow, you've left me speechless with it, suffice to say I loved it so much.

Finally good old Dad, couldn't he have stayed away for another minute😕, but then again that discovery may have been worse than what he has walked in on now😉

Great update, Dear!

Can't wait to see what happens next.