Mayan n Rabir ff [Play Date] -Completed Last chap @pg 49 - Page 35

Originally posted by: mkakkar93

hi alka i missed u too but because of my new hostel and studies got busy with settling in a new atmosphere but now i am almost settled down will now make my mind and then will try to update asap😳

Originally posted by: parmarA

I am right withy my guessing?

@Saranya it is beautiful update for Mayan's side.

But Rabir had to go long way i think.Just started their way.But is it feeling?means special feelings?i can't understand.

Somewhere i fell Kabir didn't want to take advantage of Rachana and Rachana is misguiding that.

But last part was beautiful.Mayank and Gunjan doubted but Rachana oh no!not again.

The strory is moving slowly but steadily from Rabir's side.

Thank you for your fab update

Originally posted by: cuteangelasya

Luv your story...

Moving so nicely:D

Mayan scenes at the start were too gud...then their hug..mmm just amazing..

Coming to Rabir...hayee!!no words...everything's just awesome...

Kabir n rachna working together soo cute...wanted this so much:P

Lovely update...

The last part were mayan talk abt getting Rabir together is so sweet n

Gunjan asking rachna about the two:P luved it

Amazing update...

Ooops I forgot the last part :/...

The last were rabir r at the terrace too cute n romantic

Rachna telling kabir to sleep her lap...wow :P

Rachna is again in love with our hero yipee...

Kabir is too gud,luv him saranya...he didn't hug her thinking tht he might ne taking advantage so sweet...:D (not every1 is like him)

Tht's y he is one in millions;) right? (Lol)

Originally posted by: Pookhi

Wonderful update.😳
Both Mayan and Rabi were very cute.
I especially liked the way KT was helping Rachana out.😃

Originally posted by: Nuritzur

so lovely ff I really like at.

I woes start to read at before but dont know that you update at. Nice work

Keep at up