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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
WOW Shanti ,read the OS again, it was Mindblowing👏, just watching a beautiful climax of a movie.👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yes Krithika, its just liek watching a movie, Infact one incident where Anmol is chasing tarun and he goes uptill the airport I felt that these people could have actually not done the kidnapping of taashi , and instead focused on Angini more woth thos storyline and Ragini's confession and then Vasu could have got them married on Diwali day. I wish I had written this earlier before the episode aired on 13th of November and they could have executed it much better, even with the way they had amazing TRP to end at No1, this twist would have shown more depth in the chracter of ragini who after so many years could understand Anmol, 7 years is a long time to be living with a man under the same roof, and not understanding his eyes was not convincing to anyone , she woyuld have proved herself stronger and win her heart over her mind which had drifted wth Shivani's convining act
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: shanti05

Yes Krithika, its just liek watching a movie, Infact one incident where Anmol is chasing tarun and he goes uptill the airport I felt that these people could have actually not done the kidnapping of taashi , and instead focused on Angini more woth thos storyline and Ragini's confession and then Vasu could have got them married on Diwali day. I wish I had written this earlier before the episode aired on 13th of November and they could have executed it much better, even with the way they had amazing TRP to end at No1, this twist would have shown more depth in the chracter of ragini who after so many years could understand Anmol, 7 years is a long time to be living with a man under the same roof, and not understanding his eyes was not convincing to anyone , she woyuld have proved herself stronger and win her heart over her mind which had drifted wth Shivani's convining act

Yes Shanti ,if the CT's had not wasted in the tashi kidnap scenes and continued from the anmol leaving the house followed by your fantastic take from this OS, the reunion of angini would have been a blockbuster hit.

Definitely ragini need to understand how much anmol sacrificed for her and need much more depth in the scene where ragini confessed her love for anmol.

I couldn't forgive the CT's for such a disastrous scene of ragini's so called confessing her love and incomplete end to the beautiful angini story.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@shanti ..read the OS again and the added pics are so apt for the scenes..it sure blends well with the story..👏
angini has given us some so memorable scenes of them to cherish..be it sad..happy..emotional all are still fresh in our mind and heart..
how i wished the story took another turn same as in the OS from the divorce scene..till march we would have got some extremely powerpacked performances and memorable scenes ..
my only wish we get to see both sharing screenspace once more be it in the new story of B2 coming in 20...or any new show as they are one outstanding couple on screen..
Edited by saveeta24 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: shanti05

Yes Krithika, its just liek watching a movie, Infact one incident where Anmol is chasing tarun and he goes uptill the airport I felt that these people could have actually not done the kidnapping of taashi , and instead focused on Angini more woth thos storyline and Ragini's confession and then Vasu could have got them married on Diwali day. I wish I had written this earlier before the episode aired on 13th of November and they could have executed it much better, even with the way they had amazing TRP to end at No1, this twist would have shown more depth in the chracter of ragini who after so many years could understand Anmol, 7 years is a long time to be living with a man under the same roof, and not understanding his eyes was not convincing to anyone , she woyuld have proved herself stronger and win her heart over her mind which had drifted wth Shivani's convining act

Yaar if they could have used this na atleast we would be convinced that Ragini's character also was on par with Annol's in understanding the depth of the relationship
Post leap she was quite bold and she took many decisions but again when it came to her personal relastioonship with Anmol she was hesitant , then taking the decisin of divorce for his happineess should have rung the bell that I am a women and this man has been more that anything I could think of for my happiness...

Alothought they got the kidnapping masala , it could have been pushed aside , But they kept Tarun till the end instead he could have got arrested or shown him walking out of Saakshi's life

THey would have enegered a better part for Ragini by showing both Anmol and Ragini showing their feelings and Ragini also making her stand straight that Anmol is her husband since she had already stareted havinbg that deep feeling for him
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@bhondu..so true how i wished too after the divorce scene the story had taken another turning point in angini's relationship..it would have been such a powerful track showing this time the pain and longing of ragini to have let go of such a precious gem from her life ...
the show could have gone beyond that rushed climax.
i remember writing a dream track..wat if the story had taken this twist...apoorva.parul would have given the best performances ever as they were too good in emotional scenes and they made them so believable...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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A dream track that i had written just to show how the creatives could have given us another angle of this divorce scene..
part one..
Anmol out of rajvansh house ..ragini rushing to her room and taking the photo frame with their pics break down emotionally..she is all shattered and it was so unbearable for her..

On the other side anmol kissed and hugged tightly his two daughters and told them to be good with their mama..waving them a last goodbye he entered his car..anmol could not bear this seperation and was in tears..suddenly all went blurred before him and a crash..

In rajvansh house...ragini got controlled of her emotions going to shivani's room..

Shivani ...neelam today my mission got accomplished...anmol will be mine now as that stupid housewife has kicked him out of the house..

she just got trapped in my plan..anmol nein mujhe saaf kahaa tha use ke office mein woh sirf ragini se pyaar karta hein and he threw me out . I had to take my revenge for this humiliation and wat a better way to fool ragini..

shivani..listen to the best part..anmol,alone in kitchen and I made him a fool too making him promise that he wont tell anyone I have agree to marry shlok..arey who bhi mera plan tha..suno agee kya hua.. I saw ragini there, I just went In anmol's arms and she got fooled big time and asked for divorce...wow I should get an award for best actress un dono ko bewakoof banaya..waise I'm more interested in anmol's property-money..

shivani was unaware of ragini's presence at the door..she could not believe wat shivani has done and went in a fit of rage..ragini just turned her around and slapped her hard leaving a spellbound shivani..

in the hall..inder came from abroad and vasu so happy to see him back for the festive occasion..she related about anmol going on business trip but inder promised to get him back in time for diwali..the Sharma family too came as vasu has invited them..

back to shivani's room...I cant believe you stoop so low to get anmol..i trust your lie more than him.. it was killing me a thousand death to let him go..par ab aisa nahin hogaa aur yeh joh tumhara sapna hein woh kabhie puri nahin hogee..

ragini...anmol mera hein aur hamesha rahega.

In the hall all were chatting happily ..suddenly all was quiet watching the scene on the stairs..ragini dragging shivani in the hall and asked her to go away or else she will do the honour to throw her out ..vasu-inder-sharmaji were astonished to see ragini in such state..shivani out ragini just crack down and crying her heart pain out..vasu rushed to her and wanted an explaination of wat has caused her to do such thing..kaushi giving her a glass of water and after a few mins calmed down.

Vasu..ragini kuch batao kya hua hein aur tum kyun shivani ko aise..

Ragini..bus mummyji iss ghar mein uska naam maat lena.aap ko pata hein she has made me do such a big sin..i believed her more than anmolji because of her lie I gave him divorce and told him to go...

Vasu could not believe it ..kya kaha tum nein anmol business trip par nahin gayaa tumnein use ghar se nikhal diya..kyun ragini kyun..

Ragini..shivani anmolji ki ex GF hein and all she wanted to get him back for his money ..she made me believe anmolji and her are still in love aur yeh meri saab se bari galti hein mummyji..uska vishaws kiya anmolji ka nahin..

Vasu..galti tum nein ki ragini arey jab hum saab jaantey hein ki anmol tum se kitna pyar karta hein aur saat saal useke saath rahene par bhi tum ek baharwali par yakeen kiya..really you are totally blind and stonehearted to throw him out..now vasu is out of control of her anger..how could you kis haque se tum nein mere bete ko uske ghar se nikhalnein ki..i wont forgive you for this ragini..dekha sharmaji aap ki beti mujh se pooche bina itna bara faisla kar li..

Inder..vasu calm down anmol ko phone karo aur use wapas ghar bulao..several times and mins gone by they could not get through his phone and neither he was in office..this made them more restless and ragini's state of mind getting more worse..the kids too returned home from school..both had this sad expression and looking at the tensed face of the family tammy burst into tears..

Ragini..kya hua beta..aap mujh se baat maat karo ..she was perplexed at the reaction of tammy.

Tammy..i wont talk to you..you are bad aap nein mere papa ko divorce diya leaving ragini speechless..

Badi mummy mein apne papa ke bina nahin raha sakti aap usse wapas bulao please..

No one has an answer for her and at the same time a knock at the door..tammy the first to run to the door saying papa aa gaye?her smile turned into a sad face as it was the police at the door..

Policeman..is this mr anmol rajvansh house?..

Ragini suddenly got a bad feeling in her heart..something bad has happened to anmol..

Inder.yes wat's the matter?..wat ragini was thinking got cleared as he has brought anmol's personal things back and announced to them he has met with an accident and taken to hospital.

Ragini felt dizzy on hearing this bad news about anmol..

Part two...

Vasu was in tears and scolding ragini though she was so devastated herself..

Vasu..agar mere bete ko kuch hogaya to tumhein kabhie maaf nahin karoungee..inder jaldi chaliye anmol ko hamaree zaroorat hein chahe kissi aur ki usski koi zaroorat nahin looking sternly at ragini..

Ragini...folding her hands ..mummyji mujh se bari galti ho gayee hein mujhe maaf kardijiye.mein bhi hospital chaloungi..

Vasu just went out and inder asked ragini to come ..kaushi telling them she will be with the kids..

Arriving at the hospital at the reception desk they asked for anmol rajvansh..

The lady at the desk..jee anmol rajvansh yahan admitted nahin hein woh and just at that moment the doc who looked after anmol came for some file..he asked if they were anmol's family..vasu saying yes he is my son...

Vasu...can we see him but wat came next shocked them all..

Doc..mrs rajvansh anmol got some bruises and was taken care of but he insisted he had a business deal so I had to let him go..

Inder immediately phoned the office to check if anmol was there.there was never a bussines deal nor he came back to office just in the morning..it was so unbearable for ragini ..As if that was not enough kaushi phoned and asked them to come urgently..

Running upstairs it was tammy with high fever ...

Somewhere In a hotel room anmol was in deep sleep after taking his painkillers..

Tammy...papa kahan ho aap in her sleep...

Anmol woke up in a jolt and had a bad feeling..

Anmol..my baby is calling me and he was so restless..wat to do?how will I return there to see my princess.he was in tears..why ragini you did this to me?he could not take it anymore he had to do something..he took his phone which was switched off..switching it on looking at the screen he saw so many missed calls from inder.. without a second thought he called inder and first thing he asked is tammy fine?..

In hospital inder just asked him to come immediately and gave him the address...

Ragini-vasu-sharmaji in the corridor as doc was taking care of tammy..

Inder.dekha ragini anmol itni door hokar bhi use ehsaas hua ki use ki beti theek nahin hein..woh aa raha hein ragini..yeh rishta koi bhi nahin tor sakta tum bhi nahin..this made ragini felt more guilty and ashamed of wat she has done..

A few mins later anmol rushed in the hospital and went directly to inder asking wat happened..

Inder..anmol woh tammy..just hearing his daughter's name he felt so weak thinking something terrible has happened to his child..inder made him sit on the bench and relate all to him..

Ragini was just looking at him so devastated..he had so many bruises and all she wanted at that moment to go and hug him tightly..To feel him near her that he is safe and to promise she wont let him go again..

It's the doc who made her back to her senses as he asked for anmol..

Doc..your daughter is fine now..it was more of some trauma .. it seems you left and this took a toll on her health..mr anmol do see to it you are there when she wakes up.

Anmol..be certain of that I wont leave my daughter..he entered tammy's room and all this time outside he did not look up at ragini..so true to himself though he was not in good shape due to accident he stayed with tammy holding her hand..

Two days after anmol came back in rajvansh house with his daughter..everyone was so happy to see them back.ragini tried to get anmol's attention but it was cold shoulders from him..not once he spoke to her ?

Tammy's room..papa aap mujhe chor ke nahin jaoge nah..

Anmol...never papa will stay with you and now I want my baby to smile not sad..

Ragini enters the room with soup for tammy..both looked at each other but ragini could feel there was something different in his eyes and behaviour..

Tammy...papa aap mujhe kilaogey..

Anmol..sure my baby and took the bowl of soup from ragini ..

Ragini was left standing there in the room as father-daughter was in full convo smiling and laughing..she did felt like an outsider at that moment..she ran to her room and burst in tears..one mistake and I have hurt two persons so close to me...why why I did not face the reality and asked him about shivani..all the time he was telling me he has forgotten his past and is happy with his present.why I did not believe him..

Ragini..itni bari sazaa kaise bardash karoungee.anmol mujh se baat bhi nahin kar raha hein ..tammy too feels I have separated her from her papa..her tears was just flowing as it was so unbearable these pain...

Sometimes later Tammy was in deep sleep kissing her forehead anmol quietly got out of her room..

Anmol entered the room and saw ragini in thoughts sitting on the bed..feeling his presence ragini woke up in a jolt and looked up at anmol..

Anmol...i'm sorry I came in here just to get a pillow and blanket for the night..

Ragini..aap bhi theek nahin hein aap bed par.anmol don't let her finish wat she had to say.

Anmol...its ok ragini I will be fine in the study..you can sleep on the bed..

Ragini...par aap wahan kaise..

Anmol..why so much concern ragini?..i told you I will be fine and turned to go from the room.

Ragini..anmolji mujhe aap se kuch kahana hein..shivani..

Anmol..ragini I think its time we have a serious convo looking directly in her eyes and she could feel something has changed in anmol..

part three..

Ragini stays rooted there and lowered her gaze..

A few mins it was all silent in the room and ragini's heart beat was getting more faster..

Anmol…ragini and she looked up at him… in her eyes hope was there that all will get settled between them..

Anmol..one thing I want to make clear if I'm here its just for my daughter tammy.i cant bear to see her unhappy..she has been very hurt about this divorce thing.. now I will see to it nothing of such things happen again..she is my life and you too cant break this bond..

I will do my duty as a father to my daughter and of a son.bro to my family.. As for our relationship you wanted it to be one of compromise from day one.i was never given the right of a husband and we are already divorced so nothing matters now..just for tammy's sake and family we will act as a couple but nothing else.

Ragini could not believe her ears ..is this the same anmol?no I have to clear this misunderstanding and why I did so?...

Ragini..anmolji woh shivani..she made me believe you

Anmol..ragini wat you believe or not I don't care..7yrs staying with you in a sec you just throw me out like an outsider trusting more a cheap woman..all these yrs my eyes conveying so much of my feelings to you still you believed her..it hurts ragini as I'm human too..mere bhi jazbaat hein..i have feelings.. wat hurt more you separated a father-daughter but look at fate made me meet my little girl again..she is my priority now..

You want to live with your past its fine by me but my present is my daughter and her love is enough for me to live a whole life..

So from now on I will sleep in the study and for you i'm anmol sareen the stranger you met 7yrs ago..

Ragini was dumbfounded and just looked at anmol leaving the room..left alone ragini had only her tears as companion…she just sat on the bed and was totally lost …how her world came crashing down..wat will I do without him in my life..all that because I believed that wretched woman ..getting flashback of wat anmol said"we are divorced now"she opened the drawer and took the file…I have given so much pain to anmol all because of this ..she ripped the papers and threw the file away..nahin anmolji yeh rishta nahin tootega..i wont let this relationship break…

Month went by anmol a very happy guy around with the family but remained a stranger to ragini..

This attitude of anmol was breaking her heart into pieces and sleepless night ..Though anmol was aware of ragini's sad mood and may be not sleeping well looking at her face kept his distance as he did not want to be weak this time..A lone In the study all his thoughts were of ragini and so wanted to go and take her in his arms but he stepped back.

Anmol..not this time ragini its you who should take that step towards me..i want you to come conscious clear to me and say it loud that you love me same as I cant take you away from my heart..

Taking the picture frame on his study table he looked at ragini's smiling face… he could not stop himself from touching the face of his beautiful wife..how he always dream of a happy life with her forever..at that moment anmol heart was saying this to ragini..

Kaaash tum mujh se ek baar kaho tumko mujh se pyar hogaya..

Vaade wafaa ikraar karo tumko mujh se pyar hogaya…

Kuch bhi kahaa nahin jayee..dard saha nahin jayee..

Hoke judaa jaane adaa ab toh raha nahin jayee..

Maane na dil dewaana jaalta rahe parwaana..

Mein nein toh ki tum se wafaa

Tum nein nahin pehechana…

Kaash tum ek baar kaho jeena sanam dushwaar hogaya..

Anmol In tears and he hugged the picture frame close to his heart..

In ragini's room her loneliness and tears.. she too with their picture frame looking so lovingly at anmol..

Looking up there was anmol looking so adoringly at her..without losing time she was there standing before him..wat she wished at that moment..

Jee mein ataa hein tere damaan mein sar chupa ke hum rote rahe rote rahe..

She just went into his arms and was relieved she was at the right place near her anmol's heart..

Anmol cupped her face and kissed her tears.. his touch on her face she put her hand to feel it and realized it was all her illusion as anmol was never present in that room..completely shattered she just looked at the door with a hope..in the study anmol waiting for that knock on the door and his love back to him..

Edited by saveeta24 - 14 years ago
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Part four..

Next morning coming out of the study anmol came face to face with ragini..

Their eyes lock just then tammy saying good morning papa..his chirpy little girl convo starts and both in their own world..ragini looking at both her eyes filled with tears in thought "I have destroyed my own happiness"..she turned to go downstairs while anmol asked tammy to get her breakfast till he gets ready and will drop her to school..

Coming downstairs anmol heard vasu asking ragini…why your face is so pale?..are you feeling ok?...

Ragini..yes mummyji .

Vasu …anmol tum ragini se kuch kaho.she eats less always busy in work..do ask her to look after herself and you always busy in office..coming late home..tum dono ko baat karne ka waqt nahin milta hogaa..

Vasu..anmol this should stop these late meetings ..take her out for dinner…always work and ragini busy with kids and home..

Anmol all could say its getting late I will drop the girls at school.. without his breakfast he just left with the girls and not once looking at ragini.

Ragini just controlled her tears so as not to let vasu get hint something wrong between her and anmol..

In vasu inder room..

Vasu…inder kuch baat toh hein..

Inder….ab kya hua..

Vasu….did you see anmol and ragini something missing in their relationship even after all got settled..

I'm sure they both acting again.i must do something..

Inder ..i think you are right anmol too sometimes seems so lost in office…wat to do?...

Vasu..yeh dono ek doosre se itna pyar karte hein but I don't know why they don't show it..

Idea.they need to be alone without the family..aap sochiye nah koi business trip where he can take ragini …

Inder….vasu you know anmol he will find the perfect excuse for ragini not to be with him..

Vasu…..hmmm yes my boy is so smart but his mama is more smarter saying this with a big smile..

Anmol gets a surprise visit in office..arey mummyji aap yahan.

Vasu..kyun mein apne bete ko office milne nahin aa sakti.

Anmol…oh no mama anytime you are welcome..

Vasu..anmol you know our new appartment I had to meet the interior decorator there at 7pm but have to go for a meeting at the club .you see cant postponed it as mrs sinha will be out of town for a few days..

Anmol…smiling he said its ok mama I will go there 7pm sharp.vasu touched his cheek and says thank you so much..she had that big smile on her face as she has succeeded in her plan..

Vasu….inder mission accomplished ..wahan ragini bhi hogee..bas ab yeh dono apne dil ki baat kahe warna undono ki pitaai karoungee..

Inder..laughing loud..tum bhi vasu but yes just want our son and bahu happy now…

Its ragini who reached the place first..she was waiting and had her back turned near the window looking outside..anmol reached a bit late ..he thought it was mrs sinha standing there said sorry I'm late..

Ragini turned around with a shocked expression on her face and anmol same..

Both could not utter a word just looking at each other..

Its anmol who break the silence..

Anmol…aap yahan mummyji mujhe bola tha ki mrs sinha yahan hogee.

Ragini…jee mujhe bhi yehi kaha ..then it clicked to both vasu has planned all this..

Anmol…Daam it's a plan .i think we should leave now..

It hurt ragini anmol could not bear to stay with her for a sec alone..he was already there at the door when ragini called him anmol…he stayed put there and looked back..ragini has called him by his name well without the "ji"……

Ragini telling to herself its now or never ..she took a few steps towards him to close that gap between them..she looked in his eyes and said mujhe aap se kuch kehena hein..

Part five..the confession of ragini…

The atmosphere was really tensed and ragini heart beat growing faster..all kinds of thoughts in her mind wat if anmol gets more angry .wat will be his reaction.?..anmol gaze to her was so disturbing …at last she took the courage to face the situation..

Ragini…aap mujh se itni nafrat karte hein aur shayad iss ki laayak houn..i did hurt you by not trusting your love for me..i'm paying for my sin done to you …your hatred for me and she was near tears ..she choked on her words..in these 7 yrs I have done so much injustice to you caring more about the family not your feeling even that you stayed by my side in every difficult moment …Aap ka pyar na saahi aap ki nafrat se jee loungee apni zindagi iss soch se ke aap mere kareeb hein…

Aaj mein apne dil ki baat batana chahoungee aap ko..you came in my life as a stranger but in these 7 yrs you were my ray of hope.guiding light …you had so much patience showering your selfless love on me and immense one for our daughter.. anmol you brought so much happiness in my life …aap ne mujhe doobara jeena sikhaya hein..your praise made me feel so beautiful everytime..you brought those dead feelings back with your love..you have touched my heart.. I started to feel for you..day by day you were getting that special place in my heart..the day I nearly lost you hearing the car accident it was so unbearable for me ..your KC gift was your pyar ki nishani for me still I got blinded by that greedy woman talks..Folding her hands she ask for forgiveness to anmol and he could not take it anymore.. he embraces her tightly with a ragini crying but happy tears..

Anmol… enough cant bear your tears and you know that wiping her face..

Ragini…Ab baardhast nahin hota yeh dooriyaan..i love you anmol..i love you so much it hurts..aap meri zindagi ho aur aap ke bina jeena nahin soch sakti..maar jaayegi aap ki ragini..

Anmol..shhh he cupped her face mein bhi aap se bahut pyar karta houn..every night I longed to be by your side but I was not sure of your feeling for me..today you made me the happiest man in this world..aww my ragini if I could tell ,how much I missed you though being in same house..

At last they confessed their love and sealed this magical reunion of them with a very tender kiss…its as if time has stopped for them and they were oblivious to the world..ragini heart singing for her anmol..

Kya jaanoon sajan hoti hai kya gham ki sham

Jal uthe sau diye jab liya tera naam

Kya jaanoon sajan

jab se mili nazar maathe pe ban gaye

Bindiya nayan tere, dekho sajna

Dhar li jo pyaar se meri kalaaiyaan

Piya teri ungliyaan ho gayi kangna

Kya jaanoon sajan hoti hai kya gham ki sham

Jal uthe sau diye jab liya tera naam

Kya jaanoon sajan

A bit later Whispering in her ears with his soft romantic voice ….ragini will you marry me?..

Ragini perplexed by his proposal just looked up at anmol..par hum toh shaadi

Anmol..NO ragini the first time it was just for namesake …waise mere liye uss baar bhi dil se yeh rishta kubul kiya tha..ragini felt more guilty when anmol said this and closed her eyes not able to look at him..cupping her face ankhein kholo ragini kissing her on her forehead now you have accepted me with your heart so I want both of us to take our vows again..

Ragini…Aap ne hamesha wohi kiya jo mein keheti thi but now mein woh sab karoungee jo aap chaheto ho.A ll smile says yes and I promise this time sirf aur sirf aap ki tasveer hogee mere dil mein…

Anmol hugs ragini and could not believe his wife, his ragini giving him all those happiness he dreamt for 7 yrs……

anmol.. ragini kaise itni khushiyaan baardhast karounga..i love you so much…

ragini..mein bhi aur hamesha hamesha karoungi…

cant wait now ghar chalein to tell them the good news..anmol took ragini's hand in his and look at her with teary eyed..

ragini..kya hua so lovingly touching his face…

Anmol….kuch nahin he just hugs her so close to him..

back home..

vasu pacing in the hall and angini looking at her smile to each other...

ragini was about to call vasu but anmol stopped her mouthing out to her let me...

anmol..mama ..

vasu turned around and looked at anmol serious face and ragini standing far apart..

vasu..mujhe pata tha kuch bhi nahin ho saakega tum dono ke saath.vasu angry tone all the other members came in the hall.

Inder ...vasu wat happened?

Vasu…. these two they really making me mad..anmol was really enjoying vasu's anger…

Ragini came close to anmol and signals him to tell them now..

Anmol went near vasu and said mama mein aur ragini doobara shaadi karna chahetey hein ..

Vasu to anmol….i don't want to hear anything now I'm fed up.T hen it clicked to her wat anmol said and asked him phir se bolo..Ragini coming close to vasu mummyji mein aur anmol shaadi doobara kareinge…

All the family members including vasu were really really happy esp tammy who hugged her parents..

Vasu..so its final there will be a grand wedding in the rajvansh house not one but two..

The two girls and gunni saying two baadi mummy.yes khushi your papa and sakshi's wedding..we could not go through as we planned but it will be my two sons marriage now...

"The best and most beautiful things in the world can't be seen, nor touched, but are felt in the heart."

One of them is called love.anmol loved ragini from the depth of his heart and finally ragini too accepted him dil se..from the bottom of her heart..

A confession which anmol waited for so long..Ragini felt the luckiest woman in the world and now its no looking back but to move in life happily with anmol her husband whose love has melted her heart and cant think life without him..

I will end this confession scene with these lines..

"pyar zindagi ki tarah hota hein,"jiske harr morr aasan nahin hota.." "harr raaste par khushi nahin milti,.." "par hum jab zindagi ka saath nahin chorte" "toh hum pyar karna kyun chorein"…
Edited by saveeta24 - 14 years ago
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Last part..wedding and promises..

The wedding preparation going in full swing in the rajvansh house..anmol and alekh baraat will leave from rajvansh to sharmaji house.the wedding is at 4 o'clock..

Two days back when they announced their wedding vasu called sharma ji .her decision ragini-sakshi will go with him and stay there ..anmol-ragini looked at each other as now they cant think of being separated from each other..

Anmol..par mummyji yahan bhi shaadi ho sakti hein..i mean all can stay here in rajvansh house.

Vasu..nahin.mere dono bete baarat lekar jayeinge to kaushalya nivas and that's final..

No one dared to oppose vasu's decision…Sharma ji accepted wholeheartedly the decision of vasu and waited for ragini-sakshi to get ready to take them home.tammy-khushi too agreed to go as they are happy their papa will come there with the baraat..

Anmol-ragini room…

Ragini packing and sad to leave anmol..

Anmol coming In room..ragini ..his soft voice and sad expression made ragini leave everything and she was in his arms…how will I stay without you for two days …

Ragini..mein bhi par jaana hogaa..phir use ke baad kabhie judaa nahin hoongey..

Neither anmol nor ragini was ready to leave their cozy embrace till tammy entered the room..

Tammy all excited about the wedding and tell her mama her nanaji is waiting and to come fast..

Ragini turned to continue the packing.

Anmol….so my baby wont miss her papa leaving him alone..

Tammy..aww papa will miss you but want to see you in groom outfit and coming to take mama home..

Ragini was ready and she asked tammy to go downstairs .she will be there in a mins.tammy kissed anmol and ran outside the room..

Ragini…..looking up at him saying mein jaoun..

Anmol removing a strand of hair from her face looking so passionately at her..he kissed her forehead...anmol giving her a last hug whispering so close to her ear I love you and miss me same as I will miss you.. ragini nodding a yes and said I love you too..

In the hall ragini sakshi taking blessing of vasu-inder ..while going ragini gave a last look at anmol both teary eyed..

Vasu was very strict about all the wedding rituals so no call or visit to Sharma house till wedding for anmol or alekh.. she so wanted everything to go fine for her sons wedding..alone in the room anmol felt the void and missed ragini..opening the cupboard for his clothes for the night his eyes fell on the gift and letter to ragini..she so preciously kept it on her sarees in the first row of the cupboard.anmol took it and smiled…

Finally the big day arrived .the wedding…

Both anmol-alekh looking dashing In their wedding outfit and vasu so proud of his two sons..

Back in Sharma house there too ragini and sakshi looking so beautiful in their wedding sarees and matching accessories..…

The baraat reached In time and kaushi doing all rituals to welcome her two sons in law.

Time for the brides to come and sit In the mandap..anmol was so eager to see his ragini..

There she was looking so beautiful as he has always dream of her as his dulhan..H e could not take his eyes off her..its tammy who brought him back to reality and he walked towards the mandap for the wedding ceremony..

Alekh-sakshi got married first then it was for anmol-ragini..it was a very precious moment for them ..the punditji reciting the wedding mantra while anmol-ragini doing all the rituals.it was time for their saat phere..taking the pheras anmol-ragini making their vows to each other from their heart…

Yeh Din Yeh Mahine Saal Guzar Jayenge Mere Yaar

Magar Itna Rakhna Khayal Jeena Sirf Mere Liye

Jeena Sirf Mere Liye Kasam Se

Yeh Din Yeh Mahine Saal Guzar Jayenge Mere Yaar

Magar Itna Rakhna Khayal Jeena Sirf Mere Liye

Jeena Sirf Mere Liye Kasam Se

Ab Kabhi Na Kam Ho Bekarari Apni

Yun Hi Badhti Jaaye Yeh Khumari Apni

Mujhko Dhadkano Mein Tum Chhupa Ke Rakhna

Chahaton Ko Dil Se Tum Laga Ke Rakhna

Mohabbat Mein Sara Jahan Kare Chaahe Lakho Sawal

Magar Itna Rakhna Khayal Jeena Sirf Mere Liye

Jeena Sirf Mere Liye Kasam Se

Kaisi Bhi Ho Raahein Saath Saath Chalna

Chaahe Badle Mausam Tum Nahin Badalna

Tera Mera Naata Ab Kabhi Na Tute

Saason Ka Yeh Bandhan Ab Kabhi Na Chhute

Mile Hum Ko Gham Ya Khushi

Chaahe Kuch Bhi Ho Apna Haal

Magar Itna Rakhna Khayal Jeena Sirf Mere Liye

Jeena Sirf Mere Liye Kasam Se

After sharmaji doing the bidaai of his two daughters they reached the rajvansh house.. vasu after doing the grahpravesh of her two bahus asked them to come to her room..

there is the wedding reception at 8pm..she is so happy and want her two bahus to look really beautiful ..she had some special gifts for them..

she asked anmol-alekh to get ready too in their room..anmol looked at ragini going, she looked back and smiled with him giving a big sigh…no chance to be alone with her till the reception over..

vasu so proudly introduced her two sons and bahus to the guests..Though being with guests his eyes searched for ragini who was looking extremely gorgeous in a beautiful maroon georgette embroidered saree..ragini same could not concentrate much on the guests talks as her eyes too was looking for his anmol..party was in full swing and anmol saw tammy a bit tired.

Anmol..my baby feeling sleepy and he got a yes from her..he lifted her up and turned to take her upstairs to her room..ragini saw them and rushed to him and he asked her to stay with guests he will put her to bed..

A while back he was there in the party and it was time for guests too to leave..anmol called for gunni and asked her to keep ragini busy ..

Gunni..wow chachu kya baat hein surprise for chachi..mere romantic novel ke hero ki tarahaa..

Anmol..gunni you should stop reading these romantic novels and gives her a wink..

Gunni…ok go fast and no worry I will take care of your lovely wife..

Anmol giving her a smile and rushed upstairs..

Anmol-ragini room…

Coming out of tammy's room in the corridor ragini was having butterflies in her stomach ..Though staying with anmol for 7 yrs she was feeling so flustered..so many mixed emotions was there in her heart..

Ragini opened the door of their room and surprised looking around ,the room was ablaze in candlelights and beautiful bouquets of red roses everywhere...the one who her eyes was looking for anmol standing near the window looking at the sky with thousands of twinkling stars and a bright moon..the light breeze and the flow of the curtains she was just in awe looking at him …

Without turning around he felt her presence ..he could not wait to have a look at his ragini and there she was looking ethereal with the glow of the candles..his heart skip a beat and he was so lost in her beauty …the silence in the room it was only their heart beat and their eyes conveying so much to each other..

the atmosphere was romantic..a moment he has waited for and he slowly walked towards his sweet wife ..

anmol…finally the wait is over its just you and me smiling so cutely at her and ragini lowered her gaze .…

he asked about tammy with her replying she is fast asleep..looking at the door he went to lock the room.

tammy is sleeping but you never know with some naughtiness in his eyes making ragini blush..A ur waise though I love my daughter very very much but today I dont not want to share you with anyone..ragini heart beat was getting more faster and she moved away a little from him …anmol so sweetly smile and was feeling the same emotion she was going through..…

anmol…ragini..his soft romantic voice was enough to make her turn around to look at him who had his arms opened and no losing time she went straight into them..they stayed in each others arms for much longer and in their own world..

anmol….let me look at you and pulled a little away from her so that he can adore her beautiful face…oh ragini I still cant believe you are mine for real..

she touched his face so lovingly as if reassuring him its not a dream but she is there ..he pulled her close up to him again and she felt his lips at her hair..litlle later anmol pulled back and so gently kissed her forehead with an "I love you"…next he placed tenderly loving kisses on her eyes saying you are my life ragini..finally he gave her a warm loving kiss on her lips saying I love you more than myself..

ragini whispered anmol her heart full of emotion and she rushed away from him to the window..anmol understood wat's ragini going through..turning her to face him she said kyun anmol kyun itna pyar karte ho mujh se..yes it was the guilt making her feel so bad done to her husband..i don't deserve she was in tears and choked with emotions she said I did so much injustice and hurt you..

anmol..enough ragini…he stopped her from saying more as he was hurting to see her so much in pain…he hugged her so tightly and said some soothing words to her and she felt relieved and so peaceful in his arms..looking at her ,he said if you say this once more about guilt as a punishment you will get that couch to sleep..ragini just burst into a laughter and he was totally mesmerized…he could not resist he stroked her face with such care and his eyes filled with passion..he bent down and kissed her so passionately and ragini return same with intensity. taking for breath he looked into her flushed face … in her eyes he got the answer to his unspoken feeling….in his pocket was that precious gift for her.T he AR pendant and he clasped it around her neck and so adoringly looked at her…the smile he got back from her made him really happy, he lifted her up into his arms ..anmol telling her so tenderly in a husky note in his voice"I love you so very very much"..

ragini..i love you too anmol and I promise to always do…

anmol felt same emotion as the first time he called him by his name ..eveytime she said the I love you it gave him such a feeling of joy...he kissed her again and turned to lead them to the start of their new life..

a new journey where two bodies will become one soul and so many promises in their heart for each other and to love each other till eternity..to witness this magical moment the twinkling stars in the sky and the bright moon..

they were meant to be together..it was their destiny..a pure relationship and after some ups and downs today they are one soul..

a love that will never die ..a promise made to each other"I will love you all my life and when I die I will still love you through eternity and beyond.

here are two VMS made by our friend krithika.

one showing the pain angini went through their divorce..Rabba haay rabba..
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jrvInWNJUHo[/YOUTUBE]
The second one their promise to be with each other forever..to live for each other..jeena sirf mere liye..
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=omjXssP2eNY[/YOUTUBE]
Edited by saveeta24 - 14 years ago
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This attitude of anmol was breaking her heart into pieces and sleepless night ..Though anmol was aware of ragini's sad mood and may be not sleeping well looking at her face kept his distance as he did not want to be weak this time..A lone In the study all his thoughts were of ragini and so wanted to go and take her in his arms but he stepped back.

Anmol..not this time ragini its you who should take that step towards me..i want you to come conscious clear to me and say it loud that you love me same as I cant take you away from my heart..

Taking the picture frame on his study table he looked at ragini's smiling face… he could not stop himself from touching the face of his beautiful wife..how he always dream of a happy life with her forever..at that moment anmol heart was saying this to ragini..

Kaaash tum mujh se ek baar kaho tumko mujh se pyar hogaya..

Vaade wafaa ikraar karo tumko mujh se pyar hogaya…

Kuch bhi kahaa nahin jayee..dard saha nahin jayee..

Hoke judaa jaane adaa ab toh raha nahin jayee..

Maane na dil dewaana jaalta rahe parwaana..

Mein nein toh ki tum se wafaa

Tum nein nahin pehechana…

Kaash tum ek baar kaho jeena sanam dushwaar hogaya..

Anmol In tears and he hugged the picture frame close to his heart..

In ragini's room her loneliness and tears.. she too with their picture frame looking so lovingly at anmol..

Looking up there was anmol looking so adoringly at her..without losing time she was there standing before him..wat she wished at that moment..

Jee mein ataa hein tere damaan mein sar chupa ke hum rote rahe rote rahe..

She just went into his arms and was relieved she was at the right place near her anmol's heart..

Anmol cupped her face and kissed her tears.. his touch on her face she put her hand to feel it and realized it was all her illusion as anmol was never present in that room..completely shattered she just looked at the door with a hope..in the study anmol waiting for that knock on the door and his love back to him..


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Wow Saveeta its beautiful !!

I so wanted Anmol to do it.. Ragini realizing that yes I went wring somewhere I am guilty and I will make an attempt to recitfy myself..

It would be more convining from a women's POV


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