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Posted: 14 years ago
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WOW Saveeta , I was left speechless.👏👏👏

Though this whole updates are still fresh in my mind😍,it was a complete visual treat to read and visualize it again.😍

It was Fantastic with so many beautiful emotions.👏

I just thought of posting my favorite scenes😃 ,but once i completed it was so much 😆, but anyway i tried to reduce it as much as I can.😳

These are those few scenes which was so beautiful reading it,😍

Vasu..galti tum nein ki ragini arey jab hum saab jaantey hein ki anmol tum se kitna pyar karta hein aur saat saal useke saath rahene par bhi tum ek baharwali par yakeen kiya..really you are totally blind and stonehearted to throw him out..now vasu is out of control of her anger..how could you kis haque se tum nein mere bete ko uske ghar se nikhalnein ki..i wont forgive you for this ragini..dekha sharmaji aap ki beti mujh se pooche bina itna bara faisla kar li..

Vasu..agar mere bete ko kuch hogaya to tumhein kabhie maaf nahin karoungee..inder jaldi chaliye anmol ko hamaree zaroorat hein chahe kissi aur ki usski koi zaroorat nahin looking sternly at ragini..

Somewhere In a hotel room anmol was in deep sleep after taking his painkillers..
Tammy...papa kahan ho aap in her sleep...
Anmol woke up in a jolt and had a bad feeling..
Anmol..my baby is calling me and he was so restless..wat to do?how will I return there to see my princess.he was in tears..why ragini you did this to me?he could not take it anymore he had to do something..he took his phone which was switched off..switching it on looking at the screen he saw so many missed calls from inder.. without a second thought he called inder and first thing he asked is tammy fine?..

Ragini was just looking at him so devastated..he had so many bruises and all she wanted at that moment to go and hug him tightly..To feel him near her that he is safe and to promise she wont let him go again..

Anmol..ragini wat you believe or not I don't care..7yrs staying with you in a sec you just throw me out like an outsider trusting more a cheap woman..all these yrs my eyes conveying so much of my feelings to you still you believed her..it hurts ragini as I'm human too..mere bhi jazbaat hein..i have feelings.. wat hurt more you separated a father-daughter but look at fate made me meet my little girl again..she is my priority now..
You want to live with your past its fine by me but my present is my daughter and her love is enough for me to live a whole life..
So from now on I will sleep in the study and for you i'm anmol sareen the stranger you met 7yrs ago..
Ragini was dumbfounded and just looked at anmol leaving the room..left alone ragini had only her tears as companion…she just sat on the bed and was totally lost …how her world came crashing down..wat will I do without him in my life..all that because I believed that wretched woman ..getting flashback of wat anmol said"we are divorced now"she opened the drawer and took the file…I have given so much pain to anmol all because of this ..she ripped the papers and threw the file away..nahin anmolji yeh rishta nahin tootega..i wont let this relationship break…

..Though anmol was aware of ragini's sad mood and may be not sleeping well looking at her face kept his distance as he did not want to be weak this time..A lone In the study all his thoughts were of ragini and so wanted to go and take her in his arms but he stepped back.
Anmol..not this time ragini its you who should take that step towards me..i want you to come conscious clear to me and say it loud that you love me same as I cant take you away from my heart..
Taking the picture frame on his study table he looked at ragini's smiling face… he could not stop himself from touching the face of his beautiful wife..how he always dream of a happy life with her forever..at that moment anmol heart was saying this to ragini..
Kaaash tum mujh se ek baar kaho tumko mujh se pyar hogaya..
Vaade wafaa ikraar karo tumko mujh se pyar hogaya…
Kuch bhi kahaa nahin jayee..dard saha nahin jayee..
Hoke judaa jaane adaa ab toh raha nahin jayee..
Maane na dil dewaana jaalta rahe parwaana..
Mein nein toh ki tum se wafaa
Tum nein nahin pehechana…
Kaash tum ek baar kaho jeena sanam dushwaar hogaya..
Anmol In tears and he hugged the picture frame close to his heart..
In ragini's room her loneliness and tears.. she too with their picture frame looking so lovingly at anmol..
Looking up there was anmol looking so adoringly at her..without losing time she was there standing before him..wat she wished at that moment..

Jee mein ataa hein tere damaan mein sar chupa ke hum rote rahe rote rahe..
She just went into his arms and was relieved she was at the right place near her anmol's heart..
Anmol cupped her face and kissed her tears.. his touch on her face she put her hand to feel it and realized it was all her illusion as anmol was never present in that room..completely shattered she just looked at the door with a hope..in the study anmol waiting for that knock on the door and his love back to him..

And the Whole Confession part was WOW MINDBLOWING.👏👏👏

Loved the whole wedding scene and their first night together😍










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Posted: 14 years ago
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WOW savee wonderful... I was visualizing this beautiful part... After reading ur update i feel one thing.. Y did they end this beautiful serial. There was much more to go...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@shanti..krithika..zee ..thanks for reading again and your comments..
shanti definitely that would have been a real fantastic track showing ragini going on a guilt trip..how she realised her mistake she has done wrong with anmol...how treating anmol so badly telling him to go after 7 yrs she has not only hurt anmol but the whole family and above all theirdaughter tammy..
too bad for their their pride and ego they decided to end it on a high note.
krithika this kind of emotional captivating confession we needed in the show not that edited bit..hum humesha saath raheinge..it was that convincing and what we expected though they were rushing to promote the new show which is already off air..
zee yes so true the question always arises in mind why but why they ended this show which was doing so good in the chart and we as a viewer we know there were so many potential track to move on with the serial.
only hope they keep their promise of its coming back as they gave it an open climax..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Anmol-ragini room…

Coming out of tammy's room in the corridor ragini was having butterflies in her stomach ..Though staying with anmol for 7 yrs she was feeling so flustered..so many mixed emotions was there in her heart..

Ragini opened the door of their room and surprised looking around ,the room was ablaze in candlelights and beautiful bouquets of red roses everywhere...the one who her eyes was looking for anmol standing near the window looking at the sky with thousands of twinkling stars and a bright moon..the light breeze and the flow of the curtains she was just in awe looking at him …

Without turning around he felt her presence ..he could not wait to have a look at his ragini and there she was looking ethereal with the glow of the candles..his heart skip a beat and he was so lost in her beauty …the silence in the room it was only their heart beat and their eyes conveying so much to each other..

the atmosphere was romantic..a moment he has waited for and he slowly walked towards his sweet wife ..

anmol…finally the wait is over its just you and me smiling so cutely at her and ragini lowered her gaze .…

he asked about tammy with her replying she is fast asleep..looking at the door he went to lock the room.

tammy is sleeping but you never know with some naughtiness in his eyes making ragini blush..A ur waise though I love my daughter very very much but today I dont not want to share you with anyone..ragini heart beat was getting more faster and she moved away a little from him …anmol so sweetly smile and was feeling the same emotion she was going through..…

anmol…ragini..his soft romantic voice was enough to make her turn around to look at him who had his arms opened and no losing time she went straight into them..they stayed in each others arms for much longer and in their own world..

anmol….let me look at you and pulled a little away from her so that he can adore her beautiful face…oh ragini I still cant believe you are mine for real..

she touched his face so lovingly as if reassuring him its not a dream but she is there ..he pulled her close up to him again and she felt his lips at her hair..litlle later anmol pulled back and so gently kissed her forehead with an "I love you"…next he placed tenderly loving kisses on her eyes saying you are my life ragini..finally he gave her a warm loving kiss on her lips saying I love you more than myself..

ragini whispered anmol her heart full of emotion and she rushed away from him to the window..anmol understood wat's ragini going through..turning her to face him she said kyun anmol kyun itna pyar karte ho mujh se..yes it was the guilt making her feel so bad done to her husband..i don't deserve she was in tears and choked with emotions she said I did so much injustice and hurt you..

anmol..enough ragini…he stopped her from saying more as he was hurting to see her so much in pain…he hugged her so tightly and said some soothing words to her and she felt relieved and so peaceful in his arms..looking at her ,he said if you say this once more about guilt as a punishment you will get that couch to sleep..ragini just burst into a laughter and he was totally mesmerized…he could not resist he stroked her face with such care and his eyes filled with passion..he bent down and kissed her so passionately and ragini return same with intensity. taking for breath he looked into her flushed face … in her eyes he got the answer to his unspoken feeling….in his pocket was that precious gift for her.T he AR pendant and he clasped it around her neck and so adoringly looked at her…the smile he got back from her made him really happy, he lifted her up into his arms ..anmol telling her so tenderly in a husky note in his voice"I love you so very very much"..

ragini..i love you too anmol and I promise to always do…

anmol felt same emotion as the first time he called him by his name ..eveytime she said the I love you it gave him such a feeling of joy...he kissed her again and turned to lead them to the start of their new life..

a new journey where two bodies will become one soul and so many promises in their heart for each other and to love each other till eternity..to witness this magical moment the twinkling stars in the sky and the bright moon..

they were meant to be together..it was their destiny..a pure relationship and after some ups and downs today they are one soul..

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This was the best they could have shown indeed showing Ragni's realization of Anmol's love for her was the important part of her journey

This route would have comended the way Ragini has given herself a chance to move on in life

I was a little disspointed with Ragini at many places, I hope if they return with the cast and Anmol and Ragini have a say in there as acouple these aspects can be taken care or if tehy do teh continuation which would e si idealin Ragini's life


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