Till eternity climax updated on 23 may AnginiFF

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Till eternity Part 1

Ragini:The first daughter in law of Leela.She is a very dutiful loving daughter in law of that house.She is Anmol's loving wife.
Anmol:He works in Dubai.But now he has come home to attend his brother Ramesh's wedding.
Ramesh:He is a cool boy who loves to enjoy life.He is more closer to his sister in law Ragini than anyone else.He works as the editor in a book stall.
Priya:She is a very modern girl who fell in love with Rameesh on her book stall visit.Her parents brought proposal to Ramesh's house as she is madly in love with him.

Ramesh and Priya have a grand wedding.
Priya wears a beautiful orange salwar kameez and ruby ornaments for the reception party.
All the guests have gathered around to see the new bride.
One day:You look very beautiful.This salwar kameez and the ornaments suit you very well.From your appearance itself we can understand that you are rich.Leela is lucky.You are more beautiul than Leela's first daughter in law Ragini.
P:No need of praising my looks.I know that i'm pretty.I have won a lot of beauty contests.
That lady does'nt like the way she said that.
She:Though the second daughter in law has beauty,she lacks the good character which Ragini possesses.
Priya gets angry:No need of passing comments on me.My husband is there to talk about me.
Priya goes out of the room.
Leela comes that way.That lady:Leela...be careful..your new daughter in law will destroy your happy family.She will create problems between all the family members.
Leela gets tense.

Anmol goes near Ragini in their room.
He looks deeply into her face.She blushes
R:What happened?LOoks very happy.
A:I'm happy because i'm back to my wife after a long time.I'm going to celebrate it by enjoying each and every monent with you.
R:You are the oldest son of this family.But you behave like the younger brother of Ramesh.Today was Ramesh's wedding.Not our wedding.
They both laugh.

He goes closer to her.
A:Though we are not a newly married couple,what's the problem?We are like a newly married couple.Right?
She blushes.

Ramesh sits near Priya.

R:I will introduce all my family members to you.
She smiles:But i have already met everyone.
R:But still...my mom is very sweet.Anmol bhaiyya is very serious.Ragini bhabhi...i have no words to talk about her.She is the sweetest person in this family.She is like my mom.She loves me a lot.She is the person who understand me the most in this family.
She gets irritated:Are you silly?If Ragini bhabhi shows love to you,there may be a reason behind it.I know human psychology.She is not that good.Be careful.
Ramesh can't tolerate it.
R:I know my bhabhi very well.You don't have to tell anything about her.
He lies down and closes his eyes very fast as he is in a bad mood.

The next morning...
Priya goes to the kitchen.
Ragini:You guys woke up?I will make tea.
P:Bhabhi..now its my duty to make tea for Ramesh.Right?
R:Sorry,i forgot.
P:I know how to make tea.I don't have to depend on others to make a tea for my husband.
Ragini feels bad.
Priya makes a tea and gives it to Ramesh.He spits the tea which he drank.
Ram:Why this tea tastes so bad?
Priya is hurt.
He goes to the kitchen.
Ram:Ragini bhabhi..why did you make tea for me?
R:That's Priya's job.Right?
Ram:I felt like vomiting the tea which she made for me.You please make a tea for me.
Priya is really hurt.

Ramesh buys magazines and novels for Ragini.
P:You gifted bhabhi a lot of books.You did'nt feel like buying books for me?
Ram:I'm sorry.I did'nt know that you like books so much.I will buy for you also.
She smiles.
P:Why are you doing a job which does'nt suit your education and status?
Ram:Status?What status do i have?I really enjoy my new job.
P:Resign this job.My dad will get you a prestigous job.

Ram:I told you..I have no intention to change my job.
Priya is irritated.

Ragini is the daughter of retired head master Prabhakar and Savitri.Her younger sister Maya dreams for a luxurious life.She stopped studies as she is poor at studies.She loves her relative Jeev.Jeev is a good journalist who writes poems.Their wedding got fixed long ago.Ragini's younger brother Bal is very serious and a studious student.

Ragini and Anmol are set to go to Ragini's house.Ramesh decides to join them.
Ram:Priya..get ready...we will go to Raggini bhabhi's house.
P:Why should we go there?I'm not interested.
Ram:Oh come on Priya.
He forces her.
P:Ok..i will come.But only once.
Ram:Ok..Priya...yiu did'nt even try to wear the blue saree which i bought for you.It will suit you very well.When you wear it,that saree's beauty will increase.Let Ragini bhabhi's family see how beautiful my wife is in saree.
P:I'm not interested in sarees.It's an old fashioned costume.But since you want them to know that even saree suits me i will wear it.
She wears the saree.Ramesh is bowled over by her looks:You look gorgeous.
She smiles.

They all go to Ragini's house.It's in a village.Priya is least interested in them.She walks along the compund.Maya's are in Priya's costly saree,ornaments and make up.
Priya goes near her:Why are you walking alone?
P:To be frank i did'nt like this area.I hate villages.
Maya lies:Ya..i hate living here.I wanted to join a college in a city.But it did'nt happen.
P:Why?You did'nt have good marks in 12th std?
Maya lies:No..not because of that.Here in this place no body likes girls going to cities for studies.That's why.
P:Oh!Narrow minded people.Why are yoy not wearing any grand dress?
Maya is embarassed.She lies:I have locked it in my cupboard as people who live here don't like girls wearing such costly costumes.
P:Oh!Why can't they allow people to live their own life?Villagers are cultureless people.

On the way back Priya tells Ramesh about what Maya told her.He feels like laughing as he knows that Maya is good at boasting.
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shanti05 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#2
Nice one dear.,👏👏
I have read your earlier one about the rain and happiness which you wrote about Angini.
Now another treat
I liked this story
Please continue
Ragini is a sweet Bhabhi and Anmol is a serious guy and younger brother Ramesh !! and Priya
Interesting

Priya seems a little head strong and a little ego..Good a needed factor !
Waiting to read the next part !😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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this is a new story line. And a beautiful family.
And anmol is in dubai.....waw..and ragini is very close to her BIL..
Nice ff. Contnue it soon.and shanti di is right have read that topic
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very nice innovative story !!

I loved it !!👍🏼
Anmol and Ramesh Borthers

I loke Shahid Kapur, and Apurva and Shahid sharing same screen space it will be great !![:0]

Ragini Rameh's Bhabhi and he must be one cuite devar !! so sweet

And Priya is a little over the top but koi baat nahi she will change with it 😊

Your Part one introduction and everything is awesome , May be Priya will influence Maya a little and she might see her POV ,Lets see what happens here.. Bal is sweet guy so he seems to be more like ragini

Please continue
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@jasmine..have read your other OS on angini and it was really beautiful.
this one too is interesting.a new concept..
two sister in laws and two bros.
ragini the sweet one and priya the full of ego-attitude one..
seems priya has a very high thought on her beauty but seems lacking manners/values as ragini..
anmol the serious bro with a sweet wife ragini where as ramesh cool and sweet but with a wife who always thinks i'm the best..
love the romantic side of anmol and angini's convo in their room..
he sure loves her very much...😊
seems clashes are bound to happen with priya as new bahu of the family..
do continue soon...
great job.keep it up..👏👏👏
Edited by savee_k - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Till eternity Part 2

Maya enters the Jeev's room.He is writing something.
J:Maya!
M:What are you writing?About me?
J:No.
M:Now you write one about me.Come... fast..
J:How is it possible?You can't write a poem easily if a pen and a paper are given.We should get inspired.
M:Why are you not getting inspired to write poems about me?Though i love you you don't love me at all.
J:Maya...
Maya bursts into tears and runs away.
Jeev becomes upset.His mother Sati comes near him.
R:Jeev!
J:Mom...Maya fought with me and ran away with tears.
S:Don't make her cry Jeev.She loves you very much.She is mad about you.I think she is furstrated for the wedding getting prologed.I think we should conduct the wedding immediately.
J:Now?No mom.
S:Why?Are you not interested in this wedding?
J:Nothing like that..but..
S:Like Maya fears are you losing interest in her?
J:Nothing like that.I don't dream too much.That's all.I'm not prepared to get married soon.That's all.
S:Ok,but don't make her upset.It will hurt her.

Anmol and Ragini visit Jeev.
R:Jeev...Anmolji has brought a gift for you from Dubai.
Anmol smiles and gives a pen.
J:Wow!This is really precious.

Jeev writes a poem with that pen thinking about Maya.He sings describing her:
Gum sum chaandni ho naazni ho
Ya koi hoor ho
Dil nashin ho, dil kashin ho
Ya janat ka noor ho
Masha allah, masha allah, masha allah..{Saawariya}.


Jeev gives that paper to Maya:It's my gift.
M:This paper?

J:Take it.
He smiles.
She threws that paper away with anger.Jeev becomes upset and he walks away.Maya takes that paper slowly and reads it.She is excited:Jeev has written a poem about me?Wow!
She runs after him:Did this poem come from the bottom of your heart?
He does'nt say anything.He looks very serious.
M:You thought i will ignore your gift?Can i ignore your gift?
He looks at her with wonder.
He never expected this kind of a reaction from her.
M:I loved your gift..love you..
She runs away giggling.He smiles.

Maya goes to Anmol's house to stay there for a few days.
Priya:I was getting bored.I'm happy that you came.I have not gone to the beauty parlour for a long time.Let us go now.
Maya is excited:Beauty parlour?Wow!

Maya wears a simple salwar kameez.
P:Ah!You are wearing this salwar kameez to the beauty parlour?Wear a modern dress and come.
Maya thinks:My God!I lied to her that all my good dresses are locked inside the cupboard.
M:But i did'nt bring them here.
P:What?You came to the city without it?Ok...then don't come with me to the parlour today.
Maya is upset.

Maya goes to Ragini and Anmol.
M:Di...jeeju...please take me for shopping.I want to buy modern dresses.Otherwise Priyaji won't take me to the beauty parlour.
R:Just to go to the Beauty parlour you want to buy modern clothes?You want to waste Anmolji's
A:It's ok Ragini.We will take her for shopping.
Ragini is not happy about that.

They go for shopping.Maya gets excited seeing the western clothes there.She wears a modern dress and goes to the beauty parlour happily with Priya.
Ragini is not happy about Maya going to the beauty twice a week.When she advises her Maya gets irritated.
M:Your husband works in Dubai.He gets a good salary.Then why do you hesitate to spend it on my clothes and beauty parlour visits?
Maya goes.
Anmol goes near her.
R:I'm scared about Maya.She is in a dream world now.
A:Don't think too much about her and spoil your mood Ragini.Only a few more days are left for me.Let us be happy together.I want to see you smile always.
She smiles.

Karvachauth..


Anmol feeds Ragini with water and sweets.She touches his feet.
Ramesh is about to feed Priya.
P:Ramesh...i did'nt take vrath.
He is shocked:What?Why?
P:I can't starve for long.
Ramesh's face becomes dull.Anmol and Ragini look at them.Anmol smiles:They are such a nice couple.
Ragini's face is dull.
R:But there is some problem.

Ramesh is out of mood and goes away.Anmol and Ragini watch it.
Ragini goes after him:What happened Ramesh?Why did'nt you feed Priya?She must be hungry.
Ram:She will never be hungry bhabhi.Because her stomach is full.I don't have to feed her.She knows to feed herself.
Ramesh goes away.Ragini's face becomes dull.
Priya goes near Ramesh:I'm sorry.
Ram:It's ok.

Anmol is set to go back to Dubai.Anmol and Ragini are controlling their tears.Anmol's eyes are wet.His lips shiver:Ragini!
She bursts into tears.Then she wipes her tears.
R:Have a nice journey Anmolji.I will wait for your next visit.
He is really upset:I don't know how i will stay there without seeing you.I will miss you.
They both are really upset.
A:But next time when i come i will arrange your visa and take you also to Dubai.
She is really happy:Really?
A:Yes.

Anmol goes back.

Leela goes to Priya:Ragini is struggling hard in the kitchen.Please help her.
P:I don't do kitchen work.I hate cooking.Why don't you help her?
Priya goes away with anger.Leela's face is dull.

Maya goes to Ragini:Please give me some money di.I want to buy a new western dress to go out with Priyaji.
R:I have no money.The money i have is spared for other uses.
M:Then ask Ramesh to give you money.
R:Ramesh..?Are you crazy?Look Maya...don't try to imitate Priya.She is a rich girl who has money to have a luxurious life.But we are not like her.We have no extra money to spend like this.You must understand that.
Unexpectedly Priya enters the room:Oh!Maya...so you were trying to show off?You pretended to be a rich modern girl.I knew that you belong to a family who can't afford anything.You and your sister belong to the same class.You Maya...bloody lair.
Maya bursts into tears.
R:Sorry Priya.Maya lied a lot.
M:Ragini di!You only embarassed me.I will not stay here even for a second.
R:Maya!
Maya leaves without listening to Ragini.
Ragini cries.Priya smiles seeing it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Interesting part !! Maya seems to be living in a fantasy world and dose'nt seem to see the real world.. and taunts ragini a lot highly influenced by Maya's richness..

I felt sad for Romesh that maya never kept KC vrath for him ..
Jeev is suppose to be Maya love interest I beleieve, but looks like he has his way of wooing her..
Aww Anmol leaving for Dubaii and Ragini upset .. Thats really sad, I hope he applies for her visa soon and asks her to join him
They need each other and she seems to long for him
Please continue soon !
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice part and some new characters..maya-jeev..
priya on her usual self full of attitude .did not kept fast for romesh .too bad.
maya seems to be influenced by priya's glamour world and goes against ragini her own sis..
this makes priya more happy to see maya upset with ragini....
lovely scene and emotional too both in tears as anmol going back to dubai..his promise to apply for ragini's visa soon and hope he succeeds as both cant stay without each other.
priya already have maya on her side and ragini alone without anmol hope she does not create problems for her.
do continue soon..keep it up..👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice part.and new ppl... Continue it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very interesting part ..
Looks like maya wants to be like priya , but i felt priya rather rude I mean she may be a sheher ki ladki but still she is showing a lot of attitude..

Poor Ramesh I felt sad for him he is so sweet i hope Priya rectifies her mistake..

And Anmol leaving to Dubai again 😭 I hope Ragini joins him soon .. she truly misses him and his love when he is away from her

Thnaks for another wonderful part please continue soon !!👏👏👏


Edited by bhondu2010 - 14 years ago

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