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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
Thanks for part three, sad to know Anmol's mother breathed her last and Anmol was not there to attend.💔
Part four brought bad news, Anmol is alive for sure he will never his Ragini alone.😭
Edited by rekha03 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42

Till eternity Part 7

Ganga's eyes reflect her pain.
G:Mother..when you first talked to me about this,i had given you a reply.Still it's my decision.
Mother Superior:You think once more.
G:I don't have to think again.Please don't hurt me like this.
She cries.Mother feels her pain.

Mother Superior gets George's call.
MS:Ganga is not willing for that.Before public,it's Ganga who has right over Seleena.
George can't tolerate this.
He visits Ganga.He stares at her.

G:Who are you?
Ge:I'm George.
Ganga is shocked:Why did you come here?
Ge:We want our Seleena back.
G:There is no Seleena here.Here stays only my daughter Palak.
Ge:Ganga..you know very well that Palak is our Seleena.
G:Since her babyhood i have been looking after her.Why should i give my daughter to you?Never!You people had deserted her once.Right?
It hurts him.
Ge:Yes.I did a mistake.Because of my mistake my Malini had to desert Seleena.I regret now.I wan to correct my mistakes.Please give our daughter back.
G:No.I and my daughter can't live without each other.
Ge:Because of my mistake Malini has been living with pain for the last few years.I want to bring her back to a normal life.I want to make her happy.Poor Malini'she deserves happiness in her life.
G:For that i should sacrifice my daughter?Never.You can go back.
Ge:Ganga..
G:You ditched your own child.You have no right to snatch my child from me.
George's eyes get filled up with tears.
Ge:I know..but because of my mistake should Malini suffer?
G:I don't know.But you please leave.
George goes with disappointment.

George reaches home.
He sees Malini sitting and crying thinking about Seleena.

He does'nt know how to tell Malini what has happened.He can't face her.
Malini looks at his eyes.
M:She won't give Seleena back.Right?
George does'nt open his mouth.He wonders how she understood that.
M:I know that she can't give her back.Though she did'nt give birth to her,she is the real mother of Seleena.
She bursts into tears.
George weeps:I'm the rootcause of all these problems.I don't deserve pardon for leaving you and our child.God is punishing me.
M:Don't think about the past George.Now you have changed a lot.Now you are very nice.
Ge:When i see your pain..i can't bear this.God!I'm such a big sinner.
M:But i will bear this pain like i suppressed my pain all these years.Anyways our Seleena is living happily somewhere.God is kind.Right George?
George keeps silent by shedding tears.
Malini rings up Mother Superior.
MS is tense.She thinks:How can i tell her the truth like i tell George?
M:Mother..don't irritate Ganga by talking about us.Let Seleena live as Ganga's daughter.
Mother is surprised.

Ganga tells Palak:Don't talk to strangers even if they tell that they are your parents.
P:I don't talk to strangers mom.No one will kidnap me.Don't be scared.

Ganga thinks a lot about George and Malini.
Ganga's mobile rings.She sees MS's number in her mobile.Her hands shiver while taking the mobile.Ganga is tense.
MS:Ganga..
G:Mother!
MS:I did'nt call you to desturb you.God heard your prayer.I called you to say that.George and Malini have realized that it's better to leave Palak with you.
Ganga can't believe it:What?
MS:They themselves told me.George got transfered to Delhi.Day after tomorrow they are going there.
G:No.Palak should live as their daughter.
Mother is shocked:What?What are you saying?
G:I'm telling it seriously.I thought a lot about this.They are longing to see their daughter.They should not sacrifice her for me.Here Palak will have only a mother.But their she will get not only a mother,but also a loving father.I will bring Palak to the orphanage.Let them take her from there.But they should not take her away in front of me.
She cuts the phone and cries.
MS is in shock.
MS:What happened to Ganga?

Ganga takes Palak to the orphanage.
G:Mama has to go to a place.Till i come back you play with the kids here.
P:Ok.
Ganga goes out and cries.
George and Malini reach.Malini looks at the kids play.Her eyes fall upon Palak.Palak attracts her the most.She does'nt know that it's her Seleena.
MS calls Seleena:Palak!
Palak runs to MS.
Malini is surprised:The kid who attracted me is my own Seleen.My blood.That's why my eyes struck her.
Malini hugs Palak.George feels happy.
M:Do you know me?I'm your mother.
P:Oh!I know that there are people who tell kids that they are their parents and kidnap them.Don't try to kidnap me.I will get you arrested.
Everybody becomes dull.
Malini can't bear this.
M:I told you the truth baby.I'm your mother.The other one is not your real mother.

P:Don't lie to me.Don't try to kidnap me.
Malini bursts into tears.
M:Please believe me baby.I'm your mother.
Though Malini try to make her understand the truth,she does'nt accept it.
MS:It's not easy to capture kids' heart.Anyways don't delay..take Seleena with you now itself.Ganga has handed over her luggages.
G:No need.She should have Ganga's memories.
George carries her and takes her to the car.Malini follows them.
Palak cries loudly:I have been kidnapped.

That time Ganga looks at the photographs of Palak and sheds tears.

Jeev and Maya visit Ragini and family.
They are surprised to see Ragini.
M:We never thought you would be here.
J:Today you did'nt go to take tuition?
R:The tuition class is over.
J:Over?Why?
R:That girl was Gangaji's adopted daughter.Her real parents took her back.Poor Gangaji..she is mentally and physically weak.I feel upset seeing her condition.
M:Why are you becoming so emotional about them?She is just your tuition student's mother.
R:But there formed a strong and beautiful relationship between us.

Fernandus is a rich man.His wife is Vilsy.Their son Charlie works in the Dubai.
Daughter Sweta was studying in Bangalore.After completing her studies she has just returned.She is a beautiful attractive modern girl.She is the darling of her house.
Sweta smiles with excitement

:You told me over the phone that Charlie brought someone from Dubai.Where is he?
I want to see him very badly.
F:Come..we will show him to you.
They take her to his room.
He is sleeping.
V:His name is Anmol.We don't know where he belongs to.He is really weak.He is bedridden.He can't even speak.
S:My God!
Edited by jasminerahul - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
@jasmine..another emotional part you have so well penned down...
at last ganga let go of her daughter palak to her real parents..it was so heart wrenching and the little girl knows only ganga as her real mother..
i just hope she is back to ganga as she deserved to be palak real mother.got me teary-eyed this scene where palak saying dont kidnap me.ganga looking at the pic of her daughter crying..very touching scene.
intro of new family and new characters with some good and bad news..
anmol is alive but in a very bad condition..
a real suspense of wat has happenned to anmol for him to be in such a bad state..
do continue the story soon as its becoming more interesting...
you doing great job..keep it up...👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
wow very very interesting and sweet keep it up
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
Very toucching part..
Awwpoor Palak she did'nt want to part from Ganga....
George and malini took her away..
I hoper tgey realiuze that she loves ganga and would like to stay wit her

Ragini stops tuitions .. Abhi maybe some like in finding out where Anmol is
Wow I like this new twist of a new family Charlie and then their daughter maybe she will help ANmol to get back to Ragini !!

Nice stoyr yaar It feels like I am watching teh show ecverything infornt of my eyes
Keep it going
thansk for teh lovely update !!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
Very nice part.
I was so touched by the pain Ganga was facing. Its hard for her toletgo of palak, but yet she had to.
I hope palak rememebers her mom Ganga..
I think George and his wife may take care of her but still she sees Ganaga as her mom
And Ragini is so lost in her thoughst abt Anmoland leaving teh tuitions

Later wow another family who keeps ANmol safe with them but donno know abt him interesting
Hope he meets Ragini soon she thinks he is dead or he is lost somewhere
I hope they get happiness as teh story moves on
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47

Till eternity Part 8

Sweta:We should inform his family.Right?They will be so upset.
Fernandus:Charlie is not close to him.He knows only his name.
S:How did he reached this stage?
F:Once he fainted.Then he did'nt get up.What to do?This is man's life.
S:I respect Charlie more now.Even though he does'nt know much about him,only he was there to help him when he got paralysed.
Fernandus and Vilsy smile.
V:We are giving him treatment.Let Jesus save him.
S:I forgot to tell something.I want to do fashion designing.
V:Good.But again you will have to stay in a hostel.Right?
S:That's true.
V:WE thought atleast from now onwards you will stay here.
S:I will go only after the vacation no.So be cool.

Sweta reads an article written by Jeev.She is impressed.So she searches and collects his other creative works and reads.She writes a mail congratulating him for writing so well.She expressed her desire to meet him.Jeev and Maya read her mail together.
M:Wow!A die hard fan of your's.You should reply to her mail.We should give her a nice treat.
Jeev can't believe her reaction.He thinks:Maya is asking me to mail a girl?
J:Maya..what happened to you?
M:She did her studies abroad.Now she is going to do fashion designing.She is rich for sure.Having a good relationship with her will help us.
Jeev is irritated:So that's why you want to invite her home.You are blinded by her money?
M:No...no...she is your true fan.I'm sure.Let her come here and meet you.
Maya forces him to reply.So he replies.He is tensed.

After a few days...Sweta reaches their house.
Maya:Who are you?
S:I came to meet Jeev.
M:Why?
S:Accidently i came to read Jeev's articles.I'm truly imprressed by his writing style.That time itself i decided that i should meet him.I mailed him.He replied to me.He invited me here.
M:Sweta?
S:Ya.
M:Why did'nt you tell your name?We were expecting you.
Sweta becomes happy.
M:Come inside.
She gets inside.Maya observes her carefully.
Maya thinks:She is more modern than i expected.She is very rich.This friendship will favour us.
M:You are more beautiful than i expected.
S:Really?Thank you.Still i can't make out who you are.
M:I'm Jeev's wife Maya.
S:O!You are so lucky to be his wife.
Jeev comes.
M:Jeev..this is Sweta.
He thinks:She came immediately after receiving my mail?
S:Hi Jeev!Nice to meet you.
J:Hi..
S:I read your articles.Wonderful.I have no words to appreciate your writings.
J:Thank you.
She gives him a gift.
S:I did'nt know that you are married.So i did'nt bring anything for Maya.
Maya's face becomes dull.
M:From your appearance itself i understood that you have the talent to do fashion designing.Your costume is superb.
S:But this is not designed by me.I bought it from Bangalore.
Maya is embarassed.
M:But i'm sure that you are talented.You are Jeev's fan.Right?So will you design a dress for Jeev's wife..myself?
S:Sure.
Maya is happy.She thinks:The first step is successful.
Jeev thinks:Maya is desturbing her.
J:Maya just joked.Don't strain to design dress for her.Sorry for the desturbance.
Maya's face becomes dull.
S:It's not at all desturbance for me.I'm crazy about dress designing.
Maya smiles.
M:Where are you going to do fashion designing?
S:THe college is here.
M:I can't believe it.You did your studies abroad.Then how did you choose this small toun for this?
S:Just for a change.No good colleges in our place.
M:Where will you stay?
S:Hostel.
M:Hostel is not that safe.You better stay in my parent's house which is near to the college.
Jeev can't believe what Maya said.He stares at Maya.
S:Thank you so much.I'm just your hubby's fan.Still you are doing so much for me.You are great.
Maya smiles.
S:Ok then i will make a move.
J:Ok.
She goes.
Jeev:Maya..what did you tell her?You don't know anything about her.Still you are making her stay in your house?That also without seeking permission from your parents?
M:They will agree.
Maya tells this to her family members.
Savitri:What are you saying?
J:She is mad.
R:Let her stay here mama.You should be happy that Maya is helping a girl.
M:Yes.Why am i not allowed to help anyone?
R:Don't worry.Sweta can stay here.
Maya is excited.
Maya takes Sweta to her house.

When Maya reaches home,Jeev stares at her.
J:So you introduced Sweta to her family?
M:Ya.We both went there by Sweta's car.Nice drive.On the way back we drank cool drinks from a shop.Since i'm her friend now,i'm getting chances to enjoy like this.
J:Nonsense!
M:Why are you so irritated?She is not staying here no?
She goes out and sits due to anger.Jeev decides to console her.He goes near her.
J:Maya!
She does'nt look at him due to anger.
He shows her some yellow flowers.
Her mood changes.Slowly she smiles.He is relieved.He smiles.
Again her face becomes red.
M:Why yellow flowers?Yellow flowers are for friends.
J:I did'nt get red roses.That's why.Why are overeacting?Though they yellow,i only gave the flowers to you.That also with so much of love.If you look at the flowers with love,you will feel that it's colour is red.
She looks at the flowers again.She feel that they are red roses.She smiles and takes it from him with a cute smile.Like an innocent child she says:Thank you.
He smiles.

Ragini makes notes for Palak.She is tired.So she closes her books.Suddenly Anmol appears.
Ragini is surprised:Anmolji!
A:You are tired and bored.So i thought i will visit you even more you call me by closing your eyes.
She smiles.
R:Good thing that you came.I was really bored.
Anmol sees a glass of milk on the table.
A:This milk is for you no?
R:Ya.Mama kept it here for me.I did'nt get time to drink it since i was busy.
A:I'm happy to see you engaged.But you should not sacrifice your health for your work.You drink this milk and take care of your health.

She smiles:Ok,i will drink it now.Don't worry about my health.
She drinks the milk.
R:Happy?
He smiles.
Edited by jasminerahul - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
@jasmine...nice part...
starts with a very bad news about anmol.he is paralysed...😭
hope he is back in good shape soon with the help of sweta's family...
good connection you made here sweta and jeev...
maya is blinded by richness .. sweta-jeev hope is there for them to know about anmol whereabouts and his health..
very touchy scene of anmol-ragini..he is always there for her when she needs him...made me teary-eyed their scene.so much love.
you doing great jasmine and do continue as its really interesting..
keep it up...👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome update Jasmine.👏

Please make Anmol normal soon😔,it hurts to see him paralysed.😭

Loved Angini scene .❤️

Continue soon .👏⭐️
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very nice part !!👍🏼

Sweta is a fashion designer and she wants to meet Jeev..
Maya seemed nic eto her untill she asked for a dress to be designed and Jeev saying no 😆

But loks liek tehy wil be godo friends
So Sweta will go to live in Ragini's mom';s house maybe that way she will link who is Anmol and who are his family'I think its turing interesting
and Aww Anmol kay yaad mai Ragini
I am sure Sweta wil help Ragini get to ANmol

Loved it you keep teh stiory going great !!

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