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Posted: 14 years ago
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Friends...thx a lot 4 such overwhelming comments.Such kind of detailed comments r truly encouraging..

Do u want me 2 pm u all or u'll just find out whether d update is on or not?

Till eternity Part 3

Ramesh goes near Ragini.
Ram:Bhabhi!
R:What's the matter Ramesh?
Ram:I can come to you only if there is any matter?
R:I did'nt mean that.
Ram:I know that you are upset.Priya finds us inferior to us.And Maya...she misunderstood you and left the house.
R:I'm not bothered about that as Priya and Maya are young and kiddish.
Ram:But you are very upset about them.Right?
R:No..nothing like that.
Ram:Mama is writing a letter to Anmol bhaiyya to come back.We both will run a book stall.You will be very happy if he is with you.Right?
She smiles.

Maya visits Jeev.
M:I came back.But you did'nt bother to visit me.You did'nt even feel like buying kaajal for me?
J:I'm sorry.I heard that you are in a bad mood.That's why i did'nt come to you.What if you shout at me..?Why did you fight with your poor sister Ragini didi?
She gets irritated:Don't try to supoort her.She hurt me a lot.I can't forgive her.
He feels bad.Seeing her anger,he tries to cool her.
J:Shall we go out?
She is excited:Really?
J:Ya.
They go out.They stand near a river.
M:I can't believe this.First time you took me out.I dreamt a lot about this moment.
He smiles.His eyes fall on her modern dress.
J:Hey...now only i noticed onething.You started wearing western clothes.
M:Yes.You may not have liked it.But i don't care.
He smiles.

J:You look very cute and angelic in this white attire.
She is surprised:Really?
He smiles.

Ragini to Leela:Mummiji..can i go home?I really feel like seeing everyone especially Maya.I'm sure that she can't be angry with me for too long.
L:No need of asking my permission.You can go.Ramesh and Priya are going for shopping.They will drop you.
Priya comes hearing this.
P:Sorry,we can't.Because we cancelled our shopping.Actually we were planning to buy a saree for you.But it's all dropped.
R:It's ok.I will go alone.
L:But Ramesh can drop you there.
P:If he drives so long like this his health will go.You may not be wanting your son to stay fit.But i want my husband to be healthy.
Priya goes.Her words hurt Leela's heart and tears dwell in her eyes.
R:Don't be upset mummiji.She is very kiddish.That's why she talked like this.

Ragini goes home.Priya goes to Ramesh:Come on..get ready.We will go for shopping.
Ram:You only told me that the shopping is cancelled.
P:But now i have decided to go.
Ram:Did you ask mama what saree she wants?
P:That can be asked later.Now we are going to shop for ourselves.We will buy saree for her later.
He becomes dull.
Ram:Anyways we will take Ragini bhabhi with us.We will buy a saree for her.
P:But she has gone home.
He is shocked.He thinks:Bhabhi went without informing me?

Priya takes Ramesh to a beautiful restaurant.
Ram:You said shopping.But you brought me here?
P:You did'nt like this place?Very beautiful.Right?
He smiles:Yes.
They sit.Beautiful instrumental music is placed.They offer them red wine.She takes a glass of wine.
Ram:NO thanks.I don't drink wine.
P:Ramesh..i always wanted to get you alone in a romantic place like this.Now i'm so happy.
They both smile.


Ragini reaches home.She goes to Maya's room.
Maya is angry:Why did you come?To patch up with me?I'm not interested.
Ragini is upset.
R:I'm sorry.
Savitri:Why should you apologize?Maya only did mistake.
M:Yes,i did the mistake.But she should'nt have insulted me in front of Priyaji.She should have talked to me personally and corrected me.
Bal:Ragini di tried to correct you.But you did'nt listen to her.That's the truth.Right?
Maya keeps silent.
R:Please tell me that you are not angry with me.I will hurt you again.
M:Sure?
R:Sure.
M:Ok,then i'm willing for a patch up.
Ragini is relieved.
R:So now everything is alright between us?
Slowly Maya smiles:Yes.
They both hug each other with a smile.

Ragini reaches back.
Leela:You look very happy.All is well between you and Maya?
Ragini smiles:Ya..now she is very friendly with me.
Leela goes inside.Ramesh comes:Bhabhi!I told you before marriage itself that i will not change after marriage.But you can't believe it?I can't tolearate this.
R:I can't understand anything.Why are you talking like this?
Ram:Then why did you go home without informing me?
R:You were busy with Priya.So i decided not to desturb you.
Ram:Will your presense be a desturbance for me?You have the right to talk to me at any time.
R:Do you think i will misunderstand you?
Ram:I'm sorry bhabhi.Nobody has understood me like you understand me.
He wipes his wet eyes.She smiles with tears in her eyes.

Months pass...

Leela feels physically uncomfortable.She feels breathing trouble.
Ragini comes:Mummiji..i'm going to buy vegetables.
Leela does'nt express her discomfort.Ragini goes to buy vegetables.When she comes back she sees a crowd at home.
She is shocked.She runs inside.She is shocked to see Leela's lifeless body.
She screams:Mummiji!
Vegetable cover fall down from her cover.She cries loudly.
Ramesh tries to comfort Ragini.
R:How did this happen?You did'nt have any problem when i left home.
P:After you left mummiji's asthma increased and...

Their neighbour Aprek takes Ramesh to a side.
A:Don't worry.It happend in everybody's life.
Ramesh wipes his tears.
A:I called you to tell another thing.I called to Anmol's office.But i did'nt get him.But i informed his colleague.Anmil lost his job.
Ramesh is shocked:What?
A:He says that Anmol lost his job quit long ago.After that he has'nt seen him.
R:Long ago?I'm shocked.Anmol bhaiyya did'nt inform us.Did he get any other job?
A:He did'nt say anything about it.He is quite close to Anmol.So he will inform Anmol and he will come.
But Anmol does'nt reach.So Ramesh alone does the funeral rites.Ragini feels upset about Anmol's absense on this occasion.
Her lips move:
Anmolji..where are you?Your mother breathed last without seeing.Her soul need you the most now.But you did'nt come..Why?
Her face is wet due to tears.

Ragini sends a lot of letters to Anmol.But there is no single reply from him.
One day..the postman brings a letter for Ragini.
R:This must be Anmolji's.
She reads the letter with a lot of hopes.
Edited by jasminerahul - 14 years ago
shanaya28 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12
@jasmine..you just put "updated "date and which part on the post we will definitely know its a new chapter..😊
read this part must say an emotional one..
ragini though being the elder one goes to patch up with maya who seems very rude be it with ragini and jeev.
priya is being mean day by day with ragini and MIL..
romesh so respectful towards his bhabhi ragini as she is the one to always understand him..
the sad part the death of ragini's MIL..the bad news anmol lost his job and is nowhere to be found..
ragini is helpless and feeling bad anmol did not come home for the funeral..
where is anmol and wat the letter will unfold..its real suspense..
do continue soon..great job and do keep it up.👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13
Nice update !!
ragini is been piled with difficulties, Firstly her sister is annoyed with her and tehnteh demise of her mother in law and Anmol has'nt been reachable... I hope he is alright since he lost his job and not able to reach him

Maya I hope she changes her attitude a little, and Priya I hope she dose'nt show cold towards Ragini..
Looks like ramehs is teh only one who understands ragini

Ragini is missing Anmol I hope he is back soon..The letter hope

Thanks please continue soon !
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Posted: 14 years ago
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beautiful update its awesome thank you
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Posted: 14 years ago
#15
awwwww.....very nice part... and ragini and maya are friends again i am happy about it. next anmol is missing.. hope he will be back soon. Continue it soon my dear.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice part dear👏
Firstly Mayaand Jeev patching up, He is surprised she has started to dress differently..
I just want Maya and Ragini to get closer afterall she is her sister and I still feel that friction is unnecessary, and for Ragini she needs her support atleast since Anmol is not around😭

Priya shoudl also mend her ways and see that her jhethani is all along and be like sisters, But I still like this friction between them atleast later Priya will realize Ragini's love..
Ramesh is daam sweet I love his fonding towards Ragini...😊

How unfortunate for Anmol , he could'nt be there when his mom passed away..😭
And no communication between him aww thats sad , I hope he is alright Ragini is so worried... Please Anmol come back.. You and Ramesh can start your own business

Next part please show us Anmol's situation !😭

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Posted: 14 years ago
#17

Till eternity Part 4

Ragini's face becomes dull.Priya notices it.
She smiles:That was not Anmol bhaiyya's letter.Right?
R:It was from my own house to know whether i got any information about Anmolji's whereabouts.
Ragini is very upset.
P:I knew that it can't be Anmol bhaiyya's letter.If i tell you the rruth don't get hurt.Don't expect any information about Anmol bhaiyya.
R:Priya!
P:You just think..even when mummiji died he did'nt come.From that what we can understand?It shows that he is not alive.
It breaks Ragini's heart:What are you saying?
P:Do you think if he was alive he would have ignored his family?
Ragini burts into tears.She runs to her room.Ramesh comes seeing it.
Ram:What happened?Why is bhabhi crying?
P:She got a letter.It's from Dubai..from Anmol bhaiyya's friend.After mummiji..Anmol bhaiyya also went.
Ramesh is shocked.
He bursts into tears.
Ram:How will bhabhi tolerate this?

Ragini cries in the room.

Ramesh goes to the room.
He feels very upset.
Ram:Bhabhi...don't be upset..the letter we got about Anmol bhaiyya's death may be fake.
She thinks:My God!That means Priya talked like that as they had receieved a letter about Anmolji's death.
She cries again.
R:No...i won't believe that my Anmolji is no more.He will come back.
Ramesh is upset.

Rainy night.Ragini hears a voice:Ragini!
R:Anmolji!
She goes out looking for Anmolji:Anmolji..where are you?

Suddenly Anmolji holds her waist softly from back.She is surprised to see him.
R:Anmolji!I knew that you will come back.
He smiles.He sings and dances with her in the rain.
"Kuch Kam Roshan Hain Roshni
Kuch Kam Geeli Hain Baarishein
Kuch Kam Lehrati Hai Hawaa
Kuch Kam Hai Dil Mein Khwaahishein
Tham Sa Gaya Hai Ye Waqt Aise Tere Liye Hi Thehra Ho Jaise

Kuch Kam Roshan Hain Roshni
Kuch Kam Geeli Hain Baarishein
Kuch Kam Lehrati Hai Hawaa
Kuch Kam Hai Dil Mein Khwaahishein
Tham Sa Gaya Hai Ye Waqt Aise Tere Liye Hi Thehra Ho Jaise.."{Dostana}.


After a few moments she realizes that it was only a dream.She cries.
R:How beautiful was my dream!I wish it was a real.

Ramesh tries his best to make Ragini comfortable which makes Priya jealous.
She goes near Ragini:Bhabhi..people are talking nonsense.
R:What?
P:They say that you are young and pretty though you are a widow.So you will snatch mu husband.
Ragini is shocked:Priya!Ramesh is my brother.
P:I know that.I trust both of you.But i'm a wife.When a hear such things about my husband how can i tolerate?People will gossip as long as you remain here.
Ragini weeps:I will not spoil your peace of mind.I will leave after Ramesh comes back.
Priya knows that Ramesh won't allow her to go.
P:No need of waiting for Ramesh.He will be late.It will be difficult for you to travel at night.
R:But how can i go without biding bye to him?
P:That's ok.I will tell him.We will visit you.
Ragini leaves the house with the broken heart.
Priya is relieved.
Ramesh is shocked when he comes to know about Ragini's exit.
Ram:How can bhabhi go without talking to me?
P:Because she knows that you won't allow her to go.She showed love to you as you were her husband's brother.Since her husband passed away she must have thought that there is no need of valuing you.
Ram:No,bhabhi won't think like that.
P:You know what she told before going?She said with her husband's death,the relationship with this family is ruined and we are not her people.
R:You are lying.
P:I swear..Anyways one day you will realize your bhabhi's true colour.
Ramesh goes crazy:Ok..i believe you.Happy?
He leaves the room.Priya is irritated.

Ragini is always moody in her home also.Jeev visits her.
J:Ragini deedi should not always confine to the room.You are a graduate.You will get a job.You should work.
R:I'm not in a mood to work.
J:That's what you think.But when you start working your mood will be ok.If you don't like office jobs you can take tuition for kids.
R:But Jeev..
J:No excuse.I will search for a job.
Jeev goes.Maya comes with a tea.
M:Jeev went back?I simply wasted time by dressing up and making tea for him.
Bal hoots at her laughing.
Maya is irritated.Bal likes teasing Maya.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice update jasmine👏, i want to see anmol alive😊,please bring him back soon .😊

Felt so sad on ragini while she was dreaming about anmol.😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@jasmine..another emotional part...feel really sad for ragini..
she is going through so much pain..she is so lonely..
priya on her evil self.pathetic character...
ragini already in so much pain as letter was not from anmol and priya rubbing in her wound more with her bitter words..
ragini hearing anmol calling her name as he always in her thought but it shattered later as it was only her dream.😭
last strike of priya ragini out of the house and she succeeded..without meeting ramesh she went to her mother's place.
how ramesh bear this wife of his and hope soon he sees her true colors...
no anmol and suspense is really killing...
same as ragini we too missing anmol so hope he is safe and back soon..😊
do continue and great job..keep it up.👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very touching part..
Ragini cannot believe that Anmol could be dead, her heart says no and yes I hope he is safe..

Priya is so mean instead of making Ragini feel better she is accusing her and thinking evil about her relastionship with Ramaesh as what people may say How bad

I cannot see ragini sad please make her happy soon !!

Please continue soon She can feel Anmol everywhere I hope he is fine
Even Jeev saw how sad ragini was 😔

Thanks for the update !

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