SanDhir Drabble: The Ghost of a Smile - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
wow. that was pretty cool n cute..
love
samyuktha😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Awww it was too good!
Loved it! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG this is such a beautiful os.
You are really one of my favourite writer.You are great in potraying a fictious character's emotion very well.
Just loved this os
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Riddhi, this is beautiful. Its bucket down here in Kolkata and I sure did feel every word you've written there. Whoa. :')
Magical!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Haaayeee...aww!!! Mera randhir😆
Loved his monologue...totally apt for the precap,...hope something like this is shown onscreen too😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww...That was so beautiful and so well written...With every word, you have created magic...!!!
The only thing I hate about your writing is that you write way too less and way to short for my liking... I hope that someday, it will change...😊
P.s...I still have a smile on my face because of what I have just read...Beautiful...!!! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I have no words for how ethereal this OS is!!
It's SO enchanting in it's own way! I love the quote that you have used at the starting of the OS! It worked SO perfectly with the content of this one shot!!!

I love this Ri! I have no words for the beauty and charm with you have written this!!

Take a bow mi lady!

Love,
Pari😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Perfection.
That's what this is. So damn perfect!

" Never had he imagined a day where he would come to love it.

Then again, never had he imagined a day where he would come to love her. "

These lines are so amazing! I am sending you virtual hugs and kisses right now!

" She was the one solid thing he knew in the universe of uncertainties. "

This particular sentence... i cant even. This is awesome, okay?! Hope you understand the meaning behind this simple word.

I love this!
Totally, absolutely!

One of my faves from you... I have said that about ten times before... only now i mean it more than ever!
Love the quote in the beginning!

PS: I cant copy paste things from this tab... so i memorized my fave lines and quoted them! Never done that before! Need a special thankyou for that! :P



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow! this was one more lovely OS I read on the rain scene..

So nicely written..
I loved it...
Keep writing
Love
-Sush 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Riddhi. It was just amazing, it was short but I cannot explain how splendid it was. It touched my heart and the lines
Never had he imagined a day where he would come to love it.

Then again, never had he imagined a day where he would come to love her.

they just blew me off.

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