SanDhir Drabble: The Ghost of a Smile

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

This was beautiful

I really loved reading it

Keep up d gud work

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: BoxedIn
Aww. I was waiting for someone to write about that...that...awesometastic promo, and you did! This is so perfect! Everything I wanted Randhir to feel and be in that moment, really. Since this one moment of bliss is truly his. I loved reading this, girl. Cannot tell you how much. And the fact that you chose to highlight 'that ghost of a smile...'. That smile has been breaking and unbreaking my heart every time I watch that promo.:)

Thank you! :)

To me, that scene was all Randhir. Sanyukta was there, but you could practically see his thoughts reflected on his face. I couldn't not write on that!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar
Ah! You stole my heart with just this one OS! Beautiful. Short, but it is one of the sweetest and most stomach clenching stories! :D
Thanks for sharing this, Azure! 👍🏼

Annie

It's Riddhi, actually - but you can call me Ri :)

Thank you so much! :D

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: tanda
wow...thats no nice..m sure rain would be lovely when you have moments like that in the rain..rain would remind you the feelings and situations all perfectly

Thanks! :)

It would, wouldn't it?

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: winchesters
This is soo beautiful..<3
This one has just got me even more excited for tuesday!

Thank you sooo much! :D

That scene was amazing!

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Honey-FLAB
Wow...
This was such a lovely OS
So beautiful and refreshing...
I guess it was one of the best OS I've ever read...
Keep up the good work...

Loads Of Love
Anu

Thank you so much, Anu! :D

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: anki08
This is paradise!!!! <3...👏

You have so amazingly captured the essence in these lines...The whorlwind of emotions seething him,,the gush of feelings pacing him back and forth,,all seem so perfectly interwoven and spell casting!!!And the smile,,its content soaking him..You have just nurtured his zest so well through the elixir of your words..My god,,its stupendously gorgeous!!!!

The rush outside stood in a stark contrast to the calmness in his demeanor!!!Rustling through the plethora of emotions,,he has found a still!!
Its absolutely proportionate to the enthralling smile tugging at the corners of lips of Randhir!!!!!!

Stay blessed<3...