SanDhir Drabble: The Ghost of a Smile - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Reminiscence

Riddhi, this is beautiful. Its bucket down here in Kolkata and I sure did feel every word you've written there. Whoa. :')

Magical!


It was raining while I was writing as well :)
Thank you! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: -pearlblu-

Haaayeee...aww!!! Mera randhir😆

Loved his monologue...totally apt for the precap,...hope something like this is shown onscreen too😃


I think I've written way to many monologues now XD
Thank you! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal

Awww...That was so beautiful and so well written...With every word, you have created magic...!!!

The only thing I hate about your writing is that you write way too less and way to short for my liking... I hope that someday, it will change...😊
P.s...I still have a smile on my face because of what I have just read...Beautiful...!!! 😳


Thank you so much! :D
I do, don't I? I guess I just don't like to drag it out too much, I usually stop writing at one scene. I'll try to write something longer though :)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: gujjupari

I have no words for how ethereal this OS is!!

It's SO enchanting in it's own way! I love the quote that you have used at the starting of the OS! It worked SO perfectly with the content of this one shot!!!

I love this Ri! I have no words for the beauty and charm with you have written this!!

Take a bow mi lady!

Love,
Pari😳


Thanks! :D *bows low*
It's a song actually - anyone who is/was (myself the latter) in love with The Vampire Diaries will know that. I love that song! ❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Na1na

Perfection.
That's what this is. So damn perfect!
Thank you! :)

" Never had he imagined a day where he would come to love it.

Then again, never had he imagined a day where he would come to love her. "

These lines are so amazing! I am sending you virtual hugs and kisses right now! *squints at the screen* Oh! There they are! XXX

" She was the one solid thing he knew in the universe of uncertainties. "

This particular sentence... i cant even. This is awesome, okay?! Hope you understand the meaning behind this simple word. It applies to lots of things, and it applies to Randhir about Sanyukta - it seemed apt somehow. I read a lot, so I don't know if I picked it up somewhere, or that I've written it by myself :)

I love this! Totally, absolutely! *happy dance*

One of my faves from you... I have said that about ten times before... only now i mean it more than ever! I do the same thing as well! But you know what that means, don't you? I've written ten/probably more One Shots! :O
Love the quote in the beginning! It's a song - Bloodstream by Stateless. I love that! You should listen to it sometime!

PS: I cant copy paste things from this tab... so i memorized my fave lines and quoted them! Never done that before! Need a special thankyou for that! :P You commented via your tab? ;) Thank you, milady! :P

But really, Thanks a lot! :)





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Posted: 11 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: sushie166

Wow! this was one more lovely OS I read on the rain scene..

So nicely written..
I loved it...
Keep writing
Love
-Sush 😳


Thank you so much! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: crazy_sweeto

Hey Riddhi. It was just amazing, it was short but I cannot explain how splendid it was. It touched my heart and the lines

Never had he imagined a day where he would come to love it.

Then again, never had he imagined a day where he would come to love her.

they just blew me off.


Hey Aparna! :D
Thank you so much! I love those as well :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: enrique

This was beautiful

I really loved reading it

Keep up d gud work


Thank you! :D

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