SanDhir Drabble: The Ghost of a Smile

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CoffeeandInk

@CoffeeandInk

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Saffi Sanam

@ilovepyaar

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

OMG that was beautiful.

You are so talented. Your description is amazing. I love how everything seemed so real, as if I was watching it happen right in front of my eyes.

"She was the one solid thing he knew in the universe of uncertainties. "

You will kill me. Enough said. That was amazing.

The ending was just as beautiful as the entire thing because it left you with a feeling of hope... he already loves her, that was clear, but her smile at him leaves the question: does she love him too? I love how you incorporated that. I love everything about this.

You made the bike ride seem so magical and you described Randhir's feelings really well! <3

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BoxedIn

@BoxedIn

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

Aww. I was waiting for someone to write about that...that...awesometastic promo, and you did! This is so perfect! Everything I wanted Randhir to feel and be in that moment, really. Since this one moment of bliss is truly his. I loved reading this, girl. Cannot tell you how much. And the fact that you chose to highlight 'that ghost of a smile...'. That smile has been breaking and unbreaking my heart every time I watch that promo.:)

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PhoenixRadar

@PhoenixRadar

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

Ah! You stole my heart with just this one OS! Beautiful. Short, but it is one of the sweetest and most stomach clenching stories! :D

Thanks for sharing this, Azure! 👍🏼

Annie

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tanda

@tanda

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

wow...thats no nice..m sure rain would be lovely when you have moments like that in the rain..rain would remind you the feelings and situations all perfectly

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winchesters

@winchesters

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

This is soo beautiful..<3

This one has just got me even more excited for tuesday!

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Anmol

@SexySince1999

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Wow...
This was such a lovely OS
So beautiful and refreshing...
I guess it was one of the best OS I've ever read...
Keep up the good work...

Loads Of Love
Anu

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Himani Aggarwal

@anki08

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Posted: 11 years ago

This is paradise!!!! <3...👏

You have so amazingly captured the essence in these lines...The whorlwind of emotions seething him,,the gush of feelings pacing him back and forth,,all seem so perfectly interwoven and spell casting!!!And the smile,,its content soaking him..You have just nurtured his zest so well through the elixir of your words..My god,,its stupendously gorgeous!!!!

The rush outside stood in a stark contrast to the calmness in his demeanor!!!Rustling through the plethora of emotions,,he has found a still!!

Its absolutely proportionate to the enthralling smile tugging at the corners of lips of Randhir!!!!!!

Stay blessed<3...