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Posted: 15 years ago
first of all welcome riddu to this thread
glad to see another scene writer
and riddu dear read ur prevous 2scenes
they were really cute and different
loved it sweety, now will read the scene u posted
thanks for writing dear
love,
afreen🤗

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Posted: 15 years ago
riddhu dear sorry to hear about ur nani
may her soul rest in peace
and may allah give u courage to forget things and move on

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Posted: 15 years ago
wow riddhu kia scene tha
awesome simply loved it dear

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Posted: 15 years ago
Ok guys i am back with another AmBo scene

Amrit is going out for 2 days, Bebo is doing his packing ... Bebo asks Amrit when he will come back, Amrit says bebo I can't really stay away from u, i feel like not going but this meetings. arghhhhhhhhhhhhh, hearing this Bebo says, Amrit I just asked u when u will be back, then amrit says Jnu I will come back as soon as possible, as its hard or i should say Its IMPOSSIBLE for me to stay away from u for even a single second.... Bebo says Amrit its hard for me to stay away from u too, but sometimes we have to, and we cannot get everything at the same time. and most importantly work is worship so we should not be lazy doing our works. Then amrit get busy getting ready and while doing amrits packing, bebo gives amrit strict instructions, she says

Bebo: Amrit aap apna ache se khayaal rakhiyega..

Amrit: haan ji

Bebo: aap time pe khana khaaiyega

Amrit: haan ji'

Bebo: aur haan zeyadah raat tak kaam nahi kijeyega, jaldi jakar so jaaiyega....

Amrit stop doing what he was doing and start staring at Bebo and listen bebo's instructions very carefully....suddenly bebo sees amrit staring and smiling at her, she blush and ask why he is looking at her like this....

Bebo: Amrit kia hua, aap mujhe is tarah kyun dekh rahe hai....

amrit comes closer to bebo and put his hands on her shoulder

Amrit: bebo hum aapko apni nigahoon mein kaid karke le jana chaahte hai, aapko apni dhadkan mein basana chahte hai, apni har saans ke sath aapko mehsoos karna chahte hai .... main apni itni pyari aur itna pyar karne wali biwi ko apne seene mein chupana chahta hoon ... take main jaha bhi rahoon aapko har pal apne pass mehsoos kar sakoon....after saying this amrit move more closer to bebo and then they have their most famous eye lock scene.

after a while bebo comes in her sense and say

Bebo: amrit bas 1-2din ki hi too baat hai, phir to aap wapis a hi rahe hai na

Amrit: 1-2 din....pata hai bebo ye 2 din kitneeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee lambeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee hote hai

Bebo: haan pata hai 48hrs long hote hai...

amrit comes more closer to bebo and move his arms and put it around her neck. then he says he should cancel his plan...but Bebo pushes his hands off and says no trip will be canceled...aap jaaiye aur kaam kijeye...and finish ur work fast and come back to me quickly...I WILL BE WAITING FOR U....suddenly bebo gets confused and asks herself if she has packed everything or not, did she forgot anything...she goes to check but amrit grabs her hand and pulls her close and encircle her in his arms...they r really close to each-other....then amrit leans and give a kiss on her cheek....bebo blush, amrit ask her if she can give him something, Bebo says what, amrit put his finger at his lips and ask if he can get one before he leaves.

Bebo blushes and says "NO". amrit get sad and made his face like a kid, bebo sees this and can't bear to see Amrit like this then she moves closer and placed her hand around his neck and claimed his lips on her lips, Amrit also placed his hand around bebo's neck and then their kiss become more passionate and we zoom out.

Amrit, Amrit jaldi karo flight ka time ho raha, hearing this AmBo get apart. both don't look at each-other. Bebo moves towards the bed to get his suitcase, amrit catch her and thanks her and tell her that with this lovely memory he will be able to spend two days... bebo gets his suitcase and give it to him. amrit was about to leave from the room but he stop at the door step and turns back, bebo asks him now what???? Amrit says can I ask u for one more favor. Bebo says NOW WHAT AMRIT???

Amrit: Can I please get one hug PLEASE....

Bebo: Amrit aap bhi na

Amrit: PLEASE....and he stands with arms open

Bebo is like go... he says please with a cuty face.. now this time bebo gets helpless, she goes and hugs him. Amrit says I LUV U BEBO, Bebo says I luv u too. And then Amrit leave for his business trip with HAPPY.😃

I hope u guys liked it

Feel free to comment or criticize.

love,

afreen🤗

Edited by juhuti - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

wow!the scene is awesome.👏👏loved the scene.i want any of u to post a scene where bebo n saru parjaiji are pregnant.n wen they come 2 knw bebo is pregnant they come 2 bebo's house without informing them 2 surprise their daughter n when they go 2 her room she is sleeping.

can anyone of u post a scene on this idea? if yes,pls post it.i will be waiting
Edited by riddhu123 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow Afreen thank u so much for reviving the Ambo spirit 😃
Actually I read it last night but was sooo sleepy tht i went to sleep without commenting....
It was a wonderful scene dear with all the typical Ambo chi-chus...😛
Yeh Amrit to na "kabhi bhi kahin bhi" k formula pr chalta hai...😉
And then the hug at the end was shooo cutooo...
Hmarey Ambo barey hi romantic ho gaye hain ab to ....😳... Baat baat pr passionate ho jaatey hain....
Overall the liitle details about packing n Ambo gestures was lovely....
(I terribly miss the Ambo chemistry on screen...😭 and the magical scenes they created...)
A gggrrr888 job 👏 !!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
yay! finally afee's scene. it was shooooo shweet! loved the concept. my scene is coming soon. gotta finish it. it's well long... my monthly dose you know. i havent written anything in a while soooo....
ridhu sorry bout your nani. hope she's happily watching over you nd the rest of your fam and may she be peaceful.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ganga16tr

yay! finally afee's scene. it was shooooo shweet! loved the concept. my scene is coming soon. gotta finish it. it's well long... my monthly dose you know. i havent written anything in a while soooo....

ridhu sorry bout your nani. hope she's happily watching over you nd the rest of your fam and may she be peaceful.

Grr88 !!
Then we do have something to look forward to Ganga ...😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: alja

Grr88 !!

Then we do have something to look forward to Ganga ...😊

trust me it may take a while. i'm quite busy and got a long way to go till finishing it.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: riddhu123

wow!the scene is awesome.👏👏loved the scene.i want any of u to post a scene where bebo n saru parjaiji are pregnant.n wen they come 2 knw bebo is pregnant they come 2 bebo's house without informing them 2 surprise their daughter n when they go 2 her room she is sleeping.

can anyone of u post a scene on this idea? if yes,pls post it.i will be waiting


hey riddhu thanks for ur sweet comment
glad u liked the scene

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