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Tanzeela

@ganga16tr

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+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#681

My sister is working on hers.

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rayaloveland

@rayaloveland

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#682

will soon post a scene...got an idea...will soon post it...i am sry i cudnt do it b4 coz i had a test in my keyboard class n then i had search 4 tuitions 4 my 11th std...by auust my classes may begin or by end of august...

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Alja

@Ambofan

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#683

Hey Afee... Although mein ne competition thread mein yeh parha tha but its soooo sweet n touching that i read all of it again...

Really loved it, the whole concept n sequence of events was beautiful...⭐️

Amrit putting sindoor in the temple n the dialogues btw Ambo , it was all very nice !!!

Reading it makes me remember r Ambo sooo much....

Thanks for the scene sweety

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Afreen

@-Afeelicious-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#684

Originally posted by: riddhu123
will soon post a scene...got an idea...will soon post it...i am sry i cudnt do it b4 coz i had a test in my keyboard class n then i had search 4 tuitions 4 my 11th std...by auust my classes may begin or by end of august...

do post it soon dear will be waiting

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Afreen

@-Afeelicious-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#685

Originally posted by: alja
Hey Afee... Although mein ne competition thread mein yeh parha tha but its soooo sweet n touching that i read all of it again...
Really loved it, the whole concept n sequence of events was beautiful...⭐️

Amrit putting sindoor in the temple n the dialogues btw Ambo , it was all very nice !!!

Reading it makes me remember r Ambo sooo much....

Thanks for the scene sweety

🤗

i know u have read it before
but still i wanted this to be here so i thought of posting here
thanks for reading it again
glad u liked it
i am working on another one, will post it as soon as it get done

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Tanzeela

@ganga16tr

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#686

yay another scene. cant wait. i havent finished mine yet, need a bit more time. i will post it when i finish it.

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Afreen

@-Afeelicious-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#687

Originally posted by: ganga16tr
yay another scene. cant wait. i havent finished mine yet, need a bit more time. i will post it when i finish it.

yes dear working on another scene
akhiri mein akar atak gaye hoon
will try to work on it tomorrow inshallah
and dear tum bhi apna scene jaldi se post karo
will be waiting

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rayaloveland

@rayaloveland

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#688

In my last scene I had mentioned abt bebi being pregnant again n nw she is pregnant n nw anytime the delivery should happen.amrit goes 2 office n tells bebo 2 take care oh herself.bebo is sitting in her room n suddenly her stomach starts paining n its time.she tries 2 shout mummyji bt she can't shout loudly.her mob was wid her.she calls up amrit.amrit picks the fone

bebo(pain):amrit! amrit(concerned):kya hua bebo? bebo:mera stomach dukh raha hai zor se. amrit:i am coming home nw.who is thr wid u in the room? bebo:no one.i tried calling but no1 is able 2 hear me amrit:m coming ome n he calls on the landline n suman takes the phone suman:hello! amrit:tum jaldi se bebo k kamre me jao.me abhi ghar aa raha hu. suman:kya hua praji? amrit:tum jaldi jao bebo ko bahaut dard ho raha hai n she keeps the phone n runs upstairs n sees bebo in pain n then mummyji also comes n tells nt 2 wry amrit is coming we will take u nw n amrit comes.he picks up bebo n mummyji goes wid them 2 the hosp n she is taken inside.then he calls bebos dad n they cum.n after sometime doc comes n tells tht its a baby boy n every1 r happy. every1 go inside n c amrit n bebos child.

after a few hours bebo n ambo's son get discharged

all go 2 malhotra house n then bebo,amrit,naina n their son come in their car

they welcome their grnd son n after sometime all go.

i hope u all liked it...

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rayaloveland

@rayaloveland

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#689

Now Aahan is 3yrs old... n their daughter naina is in 3rd std...she has gone 2 skul...aahan is at home.he is very naughty.he knws wen her sis comes home.so he had a plan 2 scare his sister wen she comes home.n bebo din knw anythin abt it...he was hiding behind the door n bebo was working in the kitchen...he saw her coming... n wen she entered the house he screamed n caught her legs...naina screamed...all got scared n came out...saw aahan running n naina running behind him 2 beat... bebo:ye kya ho raha hai? no one listening n then she had a plan... bebo:suman!ek kam karte hai me aahan ke peeche jati hu or tum naina ke peeche jao or phir pakad ke rakhna suman:theek hai parjaiji n they start running behind them... its half an hour they r running n r nt able 2 catch them...n aahan n naina stopn they catch them...n bring them 2 the living room

bebo:naina!ye kya ho raha tha?

naina:mummyji!me aram se skul se ayi or aahan ne mujhe itni zor se daraya.me chodungi nae usko

n she tries 2 run bt suman has caught her very tightly

bebo:achcha to yeh baat hai.aahan tumne aisa kyu kiya?

aahan:mummyji!vo me mazak kar raha tha

bebo:mujhe tum dono se koi shikayat nae hai par aise jhagra mat kiya karo...naina idhar aao

suman leaves her n she goes 2 her mom.she makes both of them 2 shake their hand...

naina takes her bag n goes 2 her room.she is upset.bebo notices it

bebo:ab tumhe apni behen ko khush karna hoga.

aahan:theek hai mummyji.par kaise karu?

bebo:tum use apne hatho se khana khilao?me bhi chalti hu.theek hai

aahan:theek hai mummyji

aahan n bebo go 2 sunaina's room n see her sitting on the window.bebo n aahan go 2 her after keeping the plate on the table

bebo goes 1st n c her crying

bebo:naina!ye kya?

naina:mummyji!😭

aahan:mujhe maaf kar do...sorry...didi

naina gets emotional hearing this n hug her bro n he makes her eat n she 2 makes her eat n bebo goes n tells tht they have become frnds again...ever1 is happy 2 hear this

after sometime bebo goes 2 see what they br doing n she sees both of them sleeping...n she slowly wakes up naina n tells her come n do ur hw...n naina gets up n puts the bedsheet on aahan...washes her face n takes her books n go 2 the living room 2 do her hw

after finishing her hw she tells her mom 2 wake up aahan.i want 2 play with him.

bebo:k!i have 2 give both of u milk nw

she goes n wakes him up.he gets up n takes him 2 wash his face...n give them milk...both of them drink milk...n play.n then naina has an idea...she tells her bro

naina:aahan!abhi jab papaji ayenge toh hum unko darate hai

aahan:theek hai didi

n their dad cum he saw them hiding thr n went as if he doesnt knw n they scare him

amrit:me toh dar gaya...

n starts laughing...n every1 hear the noise in the living room n see amrit there n both his children in his lap

n he puts them down n tell tht they were trying 2 scare me...he goes 2 his room 2 change n bebo goes up with his ba he had 4gt 2 take with hom up...

n after dinner he plays with his children n then bebo comes n tells tht they shud sleep nw...n bebo picks aahan n amrit naina n take them 2 their room n bebo sings the lori n both of them sleep...n they go in their room n amrit n bebo switch off the light n go 2 sleep n bebo tld amrit what happened between their kids in the mrning n amrit started laughing n both of them sleep...

i hope u all liked the scene.

will post more scenes...