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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: alja

Wow Afreen thank u so much for reviving the Ambo spirit 😃

Actually I read it last night but was sooo sleepy tht i went to sleep without commenting....
It was a wonderful scene dear with all the typical Ambo chi-chus...😛
Yeh Amrit to na "kabhi bhi kahin bhi" k formula pr chalta hai...😉
And then the hug at the end was shooo cutooo...
Hmarey Ambo barey hi romantic ho gaye hain ab to ....😳... Baat baat pr passionate ho jaatey hain....
Overall the liitle details about packing n Ambo gestures was lovely....
(I terribly miss the Ambo chemistry on screen...😭 and the magical scenes they created...)
A gggrrr888 job 👏 !!!!


you welcome sweety
dear read & write comments when u have time,
there is no need to hurry
thanks for reading and for such a lovely comments
glad u liked the scene, haan ur right now amrit is like "kabhi bhi kahin bhi"
uffffffffffff he is sooo romantic now, ye sab in sard hawawoon ka asar hai dear

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ganga16tr

yay! finally afee's scene. it was shooooo shweet! loved the concept. my scene is coming soon. gotta finish it. it's well long... my monthly dose you know. i havent written anything in a while soooo....

ridhu sorry bout your nani. hope she's happily watching over you nd the rest of your fam and may she be peaceful.


hey ganga thanks for reading and thanks for lovely comment dear
glad u liked the scene
and i am still waiting for ur scene, i don't care how long is it
if its amrit-bebo then i don't mind reading longesttttttttttttttttttttttttt scenes
u better hurry up.................
will be waitingggggggggggggggggg
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Posted: 15 years ago
trust me it will be veryyyy long. nd it's gonna have a sequal.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ganga16tr

trust me it will be veryyyy long. nd it's gonna have a sequal.


hehe ganga I trust u
well i told u if its Ambo then i can read longesttttttttttttt parts
now i seriously can't wait
do post soon sweety
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: juhuti


hehe ganga I trust u
well i told u if its Ambo then i can read longesttttttttttttt parts
now i seriously can't wait
do post soon sweety

huh??? did i tell you its not about AmBo. its about a new couple i've made up. bebo and anurag.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
i am very sorry to say but i had 2 correct you in 1 word of english.in these scenes some have used a word called putted.there is no word called putted. past tense of put is put.dnt feel bad abt it.if u have felt bad m sry.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Here is another AmBo scene
well its not a new one
i wrote this scene for AmBo competition scene
but no one really took part there
it was only me😆
anyway i had posted this scene in competition time thread
so i thought to post this scene here too
try to ENJOY!!!😆
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Narang family and Malhotra family everyone at Malhotra Nivas. Rano got expose in front of everybody, she gets arrested and sent to jail for the rest of her life.

Everybody greets bebo and welcome her with lots of happiness and ask for the forgiveness. Bebo hug everyone and she said she is not angry with anyone of them. Everyone is really happy to get her Laadli back, after a while Suman & Geet call everyone to have dinner. Suman goes to amrit room to call him but she couldn't find him there, then she search the whole house but still no clue about Amrit.

On the dining table everyone was waiting for amrit, then Mataji tell Geet to go and call Amrit, Geet was about to get up but suman comes and tell that Amrit Praji is not at home. Everyone get shocked, mataji ask her if she have looked everywhere. Suman tell that she have searched the whole house. Bebo gets really worried and everyone else too. Everyone tries calling his cell but no response, bebo also try to call him but no response. Bebo is really worried now. Then she remember something

*Flashback*
Amrit tell bebo: pareshani mein mujeh tanhaai chaaiye hoti hai, woh jalia wala baag hai na uske peeche wala jo jagaha hai jahan door-door tak zameen hai aur upar khula asmaan aur akeela pan, woh jagah mujeh bahut pasand hai, aur jab main pareshaan hota hoon to bas wahi chala jata hoon main.
*Flashback ends*
suddenly bebo gets up from the dining table and go out from the house, everyone call her and ask her where she is going, but she doesn't reply and run from there.

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On the other hand, Amrit is sitting at the edge (of the place he was telling bebo), he was really sad. bebo reaches there and find amrit sitting there. Bebo go to him, put her hand on his shoulder he turns and see Bebo, she sits down next to him. Bebo ask him what is this, why did u left from house like this. U know how worried I was, the whole family was. U didn't even think for me or for the family before u leave from there. Amrit tell me who gave u right to play with our emotions, because of that rano we have already suffered a lottt, and now why u giving us lots of pain.

Amrit tell her that it's really hard for him to forgive himself, he have done a big SIN by not recognizing his wife at first and not believing her. I cannot forgive myself bebo, I am not suitable for u anymore. cos of that rano i have lost ur trust. I don't deserve such a good person like u. I am bad really bad. Then he breaks down and cries a lottttttttttttttt. Bebo tell him no he shouldn't talk like this, it's not his fault, it was all rano and times fault. Amrit stops her and says he should die.....he didn't even finish bebo puts her finger on his lips and tell him to stop saying all this. Its hurts her. She tell him to stop accusing himself, and she have forgotten everything, amrit only for u I fought with rano, and agar aap hi mere paas nahi hoonge to meri zindagi adhoori hai, aapke sath meri zindagi puri hai. I am incomplete without you. amrit aap agar mujhe is tarah choor kar phir kabhi gaye to mai mar jawoungi. And then she tells him if he ever again leave her like this and go then she will go from his life forever and ever. Hearing this Amrit puts his hand on bebo mouth and stop her from finishing her sentense, he says no bebo, never, I can't live without u. now u don't need to say anything. Bebo i am really very sorry for today, main aaj ke baad aapko akela chor kar kabhi nahi jawounga. I am really sorry, really sorry. Then bebo hugs him and he also hug her back, they sit there for a while and after a while they go for home.

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On the way back home bebo saw a mandir and tell amrit to stop the car, he ask why, bebo doesn't say anything . Amrit stops the car bebo gets out of the car and go to amrit side and open the door and hold his hand, tell him to come in the mandir. They both go in the mandir, they go to the Idol do the pooja. and after doing the pooja she take the sindoor thali. Amrit ask what is this, bebo tell him that she have got everything back, but yet she haven't got the most important things of her life, bebo says i haven't got the sindoor and mangalsutra back, and then she ask him to put the sindoor on her forhead. amrit take some sindoor and puts on bebo's forehead, he cupped her face bring her face closer to him and he kisses her forehead. then she take out mangalsutra and tell him to put it on. amrit takes the mangalsutra from her hand and place it in her neck. and then bebo tell him now i got everything now i am COMPLETE. Amrit hugs her and give a kiss on her forhead.

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They reach house and have dinner with everyone else. Narang family give lots of blessing to amBo and take leave. After that everyone goes to sleep.

AmBo r sleeping peacefully, until bebo suddenly screams calling out Amrit and literally jumps out of the bed...........

amrit get concerned and woke up quickly turn on the light...bebo looks at him thru her moist eyes and clings to him.....
Amrit ask bebo whats wrong, Bebo with her broken words says aa..a..amrit woh..woh..woh rano hamari zindagi mein phirse a gaye hai, woh phirse aapko mujhse cheen legi,
woh mujhe phirse aapse door kar degi, amrit main aapse door hokar ab nahi reh pawoungi...main mar jawoungi aapke bagair...........Amrit tell her nothing is gonna happen like that as rano have sent to jail, and he tell her u might have had a bad dream. then bebo ask him, Amrit aap mujhe choor ke kahi nahi jayenge na, aap mere sath hi rahayenge, she ask sooo innocently....amrit tell her he won't leave her, he won't go anywhere...........Then amrit hugs her tightly............expressing his love...Bebo cries pathetically...and amrit lets her to ease her...Amrit moves a little away and makes her drink water to sedate her......
Amrit: aao...main sula deta hoon...pareshaan mat ho,
She looks at him innocently...., Amrit puts her head on his hand and lies beside her...stroking her hair...She puts her hand on his chest unknowingly and sleeps....Amrit looks at her and smiles as she's sleeps....

I hope u guys liked my scene

Afreen


Edited by juhuti - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow!!its a nice scene...i loved it...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: riddhu123

wow!!its a nice scene...i loved it...


glad u liked it dear
and why don't u write more ambo scene
i am waiting to read
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Posted: 15 years ago
come on guys
kkoi to new ambo scene post karo
plzzzzzzzzzzzz i am dying to read one

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