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Alja

@Ambofan

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#651

Originally posted by: ganga16tr

i agree with alja. my personal comment is that you will get even better with time and practise. you should see my old scenes, their horrid. i hate them myself.

Hahaha Ganga , ur old scenes are not at all horrid , but haan yeh zror hai that gradually we learnt to be more mature in writing... And yes i think we have learned n picked ideas from each other's scenes as well..😊

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Tanzeela

@ganga16tr

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#652

Originally posted by: alja
Hahaha Ganga , ur old scenes are not at all horrid , but haan yeh zror hai that gradually we learnt to be more mature in writing... And yes i think we have learned n picked ideas from each other's scenes as well..😊

so true. i learnt a lot from some of dunia's scenes. how to make the romance nice and clear and then you learnt the phrase " the are then transported behind the curtains" from me!😆

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rayaloveland

@rayaloveland

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#653

while writing these 2 scenes i was crying a lot as i was missing someone who was very close 2 my heart n i was her laadli.

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Alja

@Ambofan

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#654

Originally posted by: riddhu123
while writing these 2 scenes i was crying a lot as i was missing someone who was very close 2 my heart n i was her laadli.

Aaaww sweety dont cry becoz if we are gud at heart , we definitely find people on the way of life who make us their laadli !!! 😃

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rayaloveland

@rayaloveland

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#655

bt whom i am talking about is my nani n she will not come back.she passed away during my CBSE 10th std board xams.n I accepted this truth tht my nani is not there with me after 5th april.she passed away just before my science theory exams.but i am happy tht she has got rid of all the pain n sufferings.next month is her bday n i will miss her a lot.😭

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rayaloveland

@rayaloveland

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#656

now i am trying to forget all those things. now i can be actively online only till my college reopen.after tht it will be difficult 4 me 2 cum online due 2 my studies n classes.

i am glad tht u all loved my previous scenes.

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rayaloveland

@rayaloveland

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#657

Bebo is waiting for amrit n its 9pm amrit hasnt returned.everyone had dinner bt bebo said tht she will have dinner when amrit comes back.n she goes 2 her room lies down on bed.other are still in living room n having dinner n talking abt bebo.tht she is looking so sad.

suman:mummyji!mujhe lagta hai bebo parjaiji ko bahaut bhook lag rahi hai par vo amrit praji k liye ruki hai mataji:haan! hame unhe dekar aana chahiye khana suman:me dekar aati hu n she goes with food n tells bebo 2 have dinner.bt she refuses. suman:parjaiji!aap nae khaoge toh me aap se baat nae karungi. n she eats n waits 4 amrit.everyone has gone 2 sleep its 11pm n she tries 2 call bt she doesnt get it she sits in the living room n she sits on the sofa n waits 4 him n he comes amrit:aap ab tak jagi ho? bebo:haan amrit

amrit:itni late kyu?

bebo: aapke liye.aap fresh ho jaiye or me aap khana kha lijiye

n he comes after getting fresh n he has his dinner n bebo is sitting on the chair keeping her rest on the table n falls asleep.amrit keeps the plate in the kitchen n takes bebo in her arm and take her to the room n makes her lie on the bed.n he switches off the light n kisses her on her forehead n they sleep.

hope u liked it

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Alja

@Ambofan

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#658

Originally posted by: riddhu123
bt whom i am talking about is my nani n she will not come back.she passed away during my CBSE 10th std board xams.n I accepted this truth tht my nani is not there with me after 5th april.she passed away just before my science theory exams.but i am happy tht she has got rid of all the pain n sufferings.next month is her bday n i will miss her a lot.😭

I hope her soul rests in peace and you are able to move on sweety.

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Alja

@Ambofan

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#659

Nice scene dear Riddhu...👏

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Afreen

@-Afeelicious-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#660

alja just read ur scene
sorry for being soo late
anyway, the scene was really cute
ufff is amrit ko akkal hi nahi hai,
he should have been happy ke amrit-bebo in small room😉😳
haila ye gursheel bhi na hamesha wrong time pe entry marti hai
thori der baad ya phir thori der pehle nahi a sakti thi😡
hamesha rang mein bhang daalti hai ye gursheel
overall it was such a cute scene dear, really enjoyed
will post my scene soon almost done

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