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Posted: 15 years ago

AMBO SCENE

Bebo gets up and feels tht she has fever.
Bebo is thinking:mujhe toh bahaut tez bukhar hai aur weakness bhi lag rahi hai.kya karu?Amrit ko bolu.nahi mujhe Amrit ko nahi batana chahiye vo bahaut pareshan ho jayenge.
Then she goes for shower and when she comes out she sees Amrit still sleeping.She combs her hair n wakes him up n goes down to make breakfast.Then after sometime Amrit comes down.
Amrit:Bebo!! naashta
Bebo:laa rahi hu Amrit
Just then Amrit sees her he asks
Amrit:kya hua Bebo?aap bahaut weak dikh rahi ho.
Bebo:nahi Amrit!kuch nahi hua
bebo faints and Amrit catches her
Amrit:Bebo!
and he touches his hand n says to mummyji
Amrit:mummyji bebo ko bahaut tez bukhar hai
n he takes her to their room n decides tht he will nt go to office today n he calls the doctor.doctor gives him medicine n goes.after sometime bebo ko hosh aata hai
Bebo:Amrit! aap office nai gaye?
Amrit:nahi bebo.main nahi jaa raa.par aap batao aapko itna tez bukhar kab se hai?pehle ye medicine lijiye or phir bataiye.
Amrit helps her to get up n she takes the medicine.
Amrit:ab aap bataiye kab se hai bukhar?
Bebo:rehne dijiye amrit.
Amrit:nahi bebo. aapko batana hi hoga
Bebo:lekin
Amrit:koi lekin nahi aapko batana hi hoga
Bebo:jab se me uthi hu
Amrit:jab se aap uthe ho?
Bebo:haan Amrit
Amrit:toh aapne mujhe bataya kyu nai?
Bebo:main ne socha aap aise hi pareshan ho jayenge
Amrit:bebo ab aapko mujhse vaada karna hoga jab bhi aapki tabiyat theek nai to aap mujhe batayenge
bebo:theek hai me aapse vaada vada karti hu
amrit:aapko or kuch nahi ho raha na?
bebo:nahi amrit!bas thoda sa sar dukh raha hai
amrit:kya?ye lijiye davai or let jaiye me aapka sar dabata hu
n amrit presses her head n she sleeps
n after all eat they all go to their room n amrit asks
Amrit:bebo!aapki tabiyat theek hai abhi?
bebo:haan amrit!ab me theek hu
n den she goes 2 lie down
amrit n bebo r very close 2 each other n he kisses her n they sleep.
hope u liked the scene.i knw it cant be compared 2 the scenes wich u all have posted.but its a try frm my side.n if u want u can make changes 2.pls comment
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Posted: 15 years ago
Well Done Riddhu 👏 !!!
So now we can expect more scenes from you...
It was a nicey cute scene !!😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
awww riddu thanks for the scene. it was sooo lovely of you.
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Posted: 15 years ago
I am glad tht u all liked my scene. so i will post more scenes.thanks.😊😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

AMBO SCENE

(it might be a long scene)
Its been six yrs since their daughter Sunaina has been born.now she is in 1st std.n Ambo love their daughter very much.so its nite tym they make their daughter sleep n go to their room. amrit is sitting on the bed n bebo comes from the bathroom after wearing her nightdress n sits besides amrit n says
bebo:amrit!me aapse kuch bolu?
amrit:haan!boliy bebo
bebo:amrit!hamari beti sunaina badi ho gayi hai. or aapko to pata hai ki betiyan unke papa ke karib hoti hai or bete unki ma k karib hoti hai.
amrit:haan bebo me jaanta hoon.to aap chahte hai ki hamara ek beta bhi ho?
bebo(blushes):haan amrit
amrit:to theek hai
they switch of the light n amrit kisses her everywhere n goes on top of bebo n kisses her on her neck n chest and we zoom out.
5 WEEKS LATER
Bebo goes 2 wake up sunaina after she n amrit wakes up n have shower
bebo:sunaina!
sunaina wakes up.bebo dresses her.makes her wear her school uniform, combs her hair n holds her n takes her 2 the dining table n makes her sit n brings milk for her.n she drinks n she goes 2 bring breakfast 4 amrit n every1 including her. n then she wa jst going 2 sit but she runs upstairs to her room n every1 r shocked 2 see her running
amrit:wat has happened 2 bebo? why is she running upstairs so fast?
sunaina:papaji!me dekhkar aati hu mummyji ko kya hua?
amrit:achcha dekhkar aao
nshe goes up n sees bebo inside the bathroom n vomitting
sunaina:mummyji!aap theek ho?aap bahaut weak lag rahi ho
bebo:haan!me theek hu.to chale neeche.
sunaina:aap upar ayi kyu?plz bataiye.aapko vomitting kyu ho rahi thi?
bebo:bas thodi si ho rahi hai.chalo.aao idhar
n she picks her on her lap n both of them come down
amrit:bebo!kya hua?aap upar kyu gayi?
bebo:nahi!kuch nahi
amrit:sunaina!tum batao
sunaina:papaji!me jab upar gayi to me ne dekha mummyji bathroom me thi or unhe ulti ho rahi thi or me samaj nai payi kyu ho rahi hai
mataji:amrit!ek kam karo tum dona sunaina ko skul chodke hospital jao
amrit:theek hai ma
they go in their car n sunaina sits on bebo
they leave her n go 2 hosp.doc says she is becoming mom n they r happy n they go home n tell n all r happy
amrit goes 2 d office
afer an hour he phones bebo
amrit:bebo!i cant pick sunaina grm skul.i have a imp meeting.tum ashok praji ko bol do
bebo:theek hai amrit
then she phones ashok praji
bebo:praji!kya aap sunaina ko skul se yahan par chod denge
ashok praji:haan bebo.me chod dunga.kab chootega uska skul?
bebo:1 baje
ashok praji:theek hai
n bebo is in living room waitin 4 them. n she cums wid ashok praji n hugs her mom
bebo:praji!aapko isne pareshan toh nahi kiya?
ashok praji:nahi bebo.par tumhe kya ho gaya
bebo:praji asal me meri tabiyat theek nahi hai
ashok praji:kya hua?
bebo:praji me vapas ma banne vali hu
n he congratulates n goes
bebo takes her makes her eat food sits besides her n she dos her hw n after tht she checks n she makes her sleep
then her phone vibrates
its her papaji call
bebo:hello!papaji
papaji:bebo!mubarak ho
bebo:thank u
papaji:kal shaam ko ham aayenge tumhare yaha
bebo:theek hai papaji
n keeps her phone n goes 2 sleep wid sunaina
nits 5pm she wakes up sunaina n gives her milk n she drinks tea
sunaina:mummyji!papaji kab aayenge?
bebo:abhi 1hr me aate honge
sunaina:me bore ho rahi hu
bebo:ek kam karte hai tum doodh peelo or phir hum upar tv dekhne jate hai
n dey go
bebo takes the remote n says
bebo:naina!jab bhi tum tv on karogi toh sabse pehle news dekhna chahiye
sunaina:theek hai mummyji
after seeing new sunaina sees tv
n den her dad comes
sunaina:papji!
n he hugs him n they all eat food n go up
bebo:sunana!so jao nahi to kal tum uthogi nai
naina:ma me 10 baje so jaungi
bebo:theek hai
n after 10pm they take her 2 her room n make her sleep n they both come back n sleep
nxt day a call comes frm her skul saying tht they have 2 meet the principal n they get worried n bebo goes wid naina
bebo:kya aapne hame bulaya?
principal:haan!aapki beti bahaut hoshiyar hai.aaj humne surprise test liya GK ka or ye hi ek bachi hai jisko full marks mile.hum hairan ho gaye ki 1st std me hokar use pure ank mile.ye kaise hua?
bebo:humne ise bola hai ki jab bhi vo tv on kare sb se pehle use news dekhni chahiye or usne wahi kiya
n then they go out n bebo takes her in her lap n says
bebo:naina!tumne to kamal kar diya.mujhe tumhare papa ko bhi bolna chahiye
she phones amrit
bebo:amrit!naina ne to kamal kar diya.use gk me full marks mile or kisi ko nahi mile
amrit:kya?
bebo:haan
amrit:lekin kaise?
bebo:mene use kaha tha jab bhi vo tv on karegi use news dekhna hai or usne wahi kiya
in the evening all come n congratulate naina n eat food n tell bebo 2 take car of her n all go
hope u all liked the scene.pls comment
Edited by riddhu123 - 15 years ago
Ambofan thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thank u Riddhu for another lovely scene dear ...👏
It was a nice one with bebo n her daughter's interactions included as well...
wah bai wah sunaina is really smart in everything !!!😊
A good job !!!
⭐️
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks for another scene.
hey i used the name sunaina in a scene! too cool.
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Posted: 15 years ago
thank u. bt my scenes are nothing in front of the scenes u all have posted.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: riddhu123

thank u. bt my scenes are nothing in front of the scenes u all have posted.

Oho sweety aisey nahi kehte, u also do a grr88 job !!!⭐️
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Posted: 15 years ago

i agree with alja. my personal comment is that you will get even better with time and practise. you should see my old scenes, their horrid. i hate them myself.

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