OS: Us - Page 4

Originally posted by: vaasanthi

wow nice idea to make ahem remember holi afternoon

Originally posted by: munnihyderabad

Awww Swasthi, that was such a an awesome one shot👏⭐️

the sequence with which he worked towards triggering his memory is very clinically done 👏

and finally he remembered it and he is recreating the same joyous moments and magic with her again...beautiful...

Gopi will one day surely see such beautiful and blissful day when Ahem remembers and expresses his joy of sharing those moments with her😳

Thank you swasthi for this beautiful OS on a Sunday Morning...😃

Originally posted by: Xarina

Wonderful OS Swasthi. I held my breathe at certain moments. This was beautiful the way he slowly remembered and the action replay of the fall onto the bed was first class. Thank you for a lovely read.

Originally posted by: angl143

Fabulously written Romantic OS! 👏👏 I loved u linked each picture to each memory that was forgotten by him and how each picture joined has now become a 'Complete Picture.'

Each emotion that he was experiencing now makes true sense to him that they were real, they just needed to be confirmed. The final moment when he collapses on the bed with Gopi was just the 'cherry on top' to say u were always mine and will be forever.

Originally posted by: angelirebelli

Super OS Swasthi.. ⭐️

You managed to capture Ahem's restlessness beautifully. I loved the way how it all came back to him.. and way it ended.. simple, subtle and beautiful.. 👍🏼

Please write more often, you do have an amazing talent of reading into scenes and presenting them...😊

Originally posted by: vibz88

Really beautiful!!!!! Ahem was very intelligent:-)

Originally posted by: feviewer

Want more😊

Originally posted by: varshu27

absolutely brilliant OS swasthi...it was perfection...loved it...

Originally posted by: amalaziz

awesome OS!!!!! 👏⭐️

Originally posted by: Dhabu89

👏Darn Swasthi, I thought this was one of your analysis of a scene. I was so elated until I realized I was reading a OS. Beautiful OS and wonderfully written. This was just too romantic and something we all want Ahem to do. Use his brain and start to add up 2+2...

Thank you Swasthi, I really needed this today. You are the best 😃