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shruti aggarwal

@shruts18

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Hi Swasthi,😊

I read it just now. I had seen it but bookmarked it to read it later.

It was too good and perfect way how it could happen in the show and it would be best if it did happen.

You have brought back the same moments of Holi at the same place just the way CVs made Ahem remember his first flashback in the temple. So what place let their culmination in Holi should now be a witness again to his remembrance and his being able to put everything together.

But I feel it was not love that they made, I still have hopes on it for they just can't ruin their first moments together like that.

Your writing style is very captivating and very effluent. I always enjoy whatever you write. Thank you very much.

Shruti.

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_Precious_

@_Precious_

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

woww Swasthi. An excellent piece of work. Liked the way Ahem tried to investigate what happd on Holi day and ended up repeating the sequence on bed. Well done!

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Yuks

@-Yuks-

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Wonderful OS Swasthi!
Can I say that I laughed at the moment Ahem tripped? It was such a filmy scene.
I loved how he brought everything back. It needs to come out in the show too.
[And Im personally hoping they didnt make love while he was intoxicated]

Yuks

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Tahira

@tamzin43

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

aye yay yay major drooling here wish it happens like this 😍

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yhm_craze

@yhm_craze

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

loved it!👏wish we get to see something like this on the show!

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ashu

@white.band

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

just loved it...swasthi...⭐️

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Nazma

@NazmaJ

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Absolutely loved this OS Swasthi!!

It's been a while since we've had something to read from you!! I really enjoyed it!!

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swasthi

@swasthi

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: taniks
Now that was wondeful swasthi , I will be very disappointed if we don't get a scene tomm of ahem in his office lost in thought especially afta where they left him in the ME. Your os actually feels like wot will happen , its very believable. Love ur depiction and the actions that got him remembering. I can hardly wait for the day the built is so promising and now ur os has reaffirmed that the memory returning episode is one be a humdinger . Thank u swasthi , well written.

You are welcome.

Glad you enjoyed reading it.