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swasthi

@swasthi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: kaka.lg

very nice...very well written Swasthi...thumb up

Thanks so much Monyka ... glad you have enjoyed this.

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swasthi

@swasthi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: vijayarvi
nice os swasthi..!i loved it..!👏👏

My pleasure Vijay.

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llSerenityll

@llSerenityll

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Wow ! That was so beautiful..Very well-written.👏👏..I wish this could happen in the show. 😍

Edited by GohamHungry - 13 years ago

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Jammona

@Jammona

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

nice os wished it was longer. thanks for the pm

Edited by kamjal - 13 years ago

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navyab

@navyab

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Lovely OS Swasthi...enjoyed every bit of it...Nothing about Gopi misses Ahem & he is trying hard to understand what was troubling her...he has placed 2+2 to realise that it had to do with him on Holi day that she is hurt !!! And Ahem being a business man, got immd to work to see what is it that he was missing 😉 !!!

You got the characters so exactly, only Gopi can get Ahem excited about anything & he finding out about one missing link made him so & he wanted to share it with her !!!

The end was too good...Im sure the day Ahem realises, he will just let his actions & passionate words show her how much he loves her & Gopi would just hug her Ahemji & show him how much she loves him in return 😛 !!!

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swasthi

@swasthi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: ever
It is a lovely os if that happend for real with goham

Much appreciated Ever.

Yes, it would be incredible to have just one part similar to the actual in the coming episodes.

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swasthi

@swasthi

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: sns_addict
hey swasthi, beautiful one..
loved it.. very typical of GoHem in the show.. wish it happens this way & also quickly.. as u have mentioned..

Thanks Veena.

I tried to keep it close to the original however chances are that it will not happen quickly as this.

Glad to know that you enjoyed the story.