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doc4ever

@doc4ever

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Fabulously written Romantic OS! 👏👏 I loved u linked each picture to each memory that was forgotten by him and how each picture joined has now become a 'Complete Picture.'

Each emotion that he was experiencing now makes true sense to him that they were real, they just needed to be confirmed. The final moment when he collapses on the bed with Gopi was just the 'cherry on top' to say u were always mine and will be forever.

Edited by angl143 - 13 years ago

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angelirebelli

@angelirebelli

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Super OS Swasthi.. ⭐️

You managed to capture Ahem's restlessness beautifully. I loved the way how it all came back to him.. and way it ended.. simple, subtle and beautiful.. 👍🏼

Please write more often, you do have an amazing talent of reading into scenes and presenting them...😊

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-Eris-

@-Eris-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Really beautiful!!!!! Ahem was very intelligent:-)

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swasthi

@swasthi

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: sbp1971
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Fantastic OS Swasthi.

You have captured Ahem wanting to remember, his restlessness and return of his memory very well. I can imagine Ahem in his office thinking about this very thing following the aarti scene. I would love for him to remember just like this and make her happy by letting her know that it was indeed a wonderful experience for him too.

Loved it.

Thanks so much Shilpa.

I am glad you enjoyed this. Yes, just as it is necessary for Ahem to remember so too it is reassuring for Gopi to know that their moment was enjoyable.

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varshu27

@varshu27

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

absolutely brilliant OS swasthi...it was perfection...loved it...

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Amal Aziz

@-AmalAziz-

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

awesome OS!!!!! 👏⭐️

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Dhabu89

@Dhabu89

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

👏Darn Swasthi, I thought this was one of your analysis of a scene. I was so elated until I realized I was reading a OS. Beautiful OS and wonderfully written. This was just too romantic and something we all want Ahem to do. Use his brain and start to add up 2+2...

Thank you Swasthi, I really needed this today. You are the best 😃

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taniks

@taniks

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Now that was wondeful swasthi , I will be very disappointed if we don't get a scene tomm of ahem in his office lost in thought especially afta where they left him in the ME. Your os actually feels like wot will happen , its very believable. Love ur depiction and the actions that got him remembering. I can hardly wait for the day the built is so promising and now ur os has reaffirmed that the memory returning episode is one be a humdinger . Thank u swasthi , well written.

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swasthi

@swasthi

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: abbay
nice os dear!!!

Ankita, I am so glad you enjoyed this read.

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swasthi

@swasthi

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Justlikethat1
Aww. . Swasthi..That was the most awesome piece and the way Aham remembered everything.. He is going to give her the same joy, the same way.. One memory in place of another.. Superb👏⭐️⭐️
Hats off.

I loved it.. It would surely make Gopi's life a lot more joyous.😳 And he remembered with all the passion and love he has for her.. Thank you so much.. The events that triggered his memory are so natural.. That is a brilliantly executed OS😃

Harini, my pleasure.

There is an opportunity for Ahem to talk to Jigar about the photos. Hope he does this as this can offset his memory bank.