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Sayaka

@ElizaKawa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

awww swasthi, it was so beautifully made that I just want to cry of joy

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Nandita / Tina

@5cents

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

AWWW Beautiful OS👏

Abs Brilliant the way Ahem remembered the holi afternoon😳. The way you have weaved the chain of events, for him to remember the lovely afternoon is so realistic & sensual 👏. . I am positive he is going to give her the same joy, once he is able to finish the holi puzzle😍

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Simibrar

@simibrar1990

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

loved it ! Fantastic os !...👍🏼 amazing !...😃

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jazz54321

@jazz54321

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

a splendid OS Swasthi...👍🏼

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Sandy

@sandyuk

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Love the OS Swasthi! It was just perfect. I think Ahem will regain his memory bit by bit an we may even get your last scenes too!

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swasthi

@swasthi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: GohamHungry
Wow ! That was so beautiful..Very well-written.👏👏..I wish this could happen in the show. 😍

You are welcome.

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swasthi

@swasthi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Aish3003
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Thanks Aish.

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swasthi

@swasthi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: tamzin43
hhhmmm😍😍

Ah ... it sent you to la la land.

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swasthi

@swasthi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: navyab
Lovely OS Swasthi...enjoyed every bit of it...Nothing about Gopi misses Ahem & he is trying hard to understand what was troubling her...he has placed 2+2 to realise that it had to do with him on Holi day that she is hurt !!! And Ahem being a business man, got immd to work to see what is it that he was missing 😉 !!!

You got the characters so exactly, only Gopi can get Ahem excited about anything & he finding out about one missing link made him so & he wanted to share it with her !!!

The end was too good...Im sure the day Ahem realises, he will just let his actions & passionate words show her how much he loves her & Gopi would just hug her Ahemji & show him how much she loves him in return 😛 !!!