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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazin suk loved it verey well writtten keep it up...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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just read your OS...it was fabulous!!loved the happy ending!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 3

Aham asked Gopi to come home with him, she looked at him, n she shook her head saying no, Aham ji i am sorry but that cannot happen, my dream in life was to have a loving family as my parents were dead i wanted a mother in law who loved me as her own, i thought i did, i wanted a husband to love me but even that was a struggle until now, i am sorry but i dont want to fall into that trap again where i can never come out, i have lost my trust in everyone, i work here but i am wary of everyone there intentions the only person who is completely honest with me is Tejas bhai he could have easily manipulated me but he didnt instead he won over my trust as much as i love you i have to trust you and your family, but gopi i did nothing wrong it was all a misunderstanding you were suppose to go with me to switzerland not mom she got it wrong, Gopi looks at him its not that Aham ji what happens if maji gets upset again because i said the wrong thing like helping family out, Aham listens Aham ji you did not want to marry me i know that now its not your fault but neither is it mine i know that kinjal told the truth about your relationship with anita n you wanted to marry her but at that time i was a gawar you said it yourself n i agree with you i realized when you left i read a letter which was sent to me before the wedding, she reads the letter, Aham looks at her i did not send the letter, no Ahamji you did not but for me the letter was read like this, we have not spoken but i do want to marry you. The person that read it to me was my own sister n mami but why should i say anything against them, everyone who has been in my life has abused me either verbally or physically i have feelings i hurt when u pinch me, no more i am now on y own to feet i have confidence which i never had before. aham ji i dont want to be anyones punching bag or excuse to blame their problems on me because that was done not only by you but your family my family everyone who knew that i could be blamed because i was a easy target, Aham listened to what gopi said, Ahamji i will not be coming back. Aham was shocked he understood because he not only abused her verbally but he also physically abused he remembered the slap he gave her n how he abused her by hurting her.
Jigar comes back, Aham is quiet for once he was not confident he was not in charrge all of a sudden he felt lost how can he let gopi stay here he needed her he wanted her back in his life. Gopi bhabi come home with us, gopi replies devar ji i am sorry but i will not be coming with you. But bhabi jigar says n gopi says devar ji you i have told aham ji plse dont ask me again, Aham looks at her, gopi looks back at him he knew she needed to do this on her own. Gopi ok Aham says but promise me one thing you will not leave here she nodds her head n also can i come n see you, Gopi smiles ji off course.
Back at mm everyone is waiting for gopi to come with Aham, kokila has the puja thali n then jigar n aham arrive, aham looks at kokila n then parag n says gopi will not be coming back here she has refused, kokila has tears, Rashi says jiju how can that be? Aham looks at rashi, Rashi we know the kalakari you did on jigar to get married to him but why dont you tell everyone what you did to Gopi, Rashi looks at him n shakes her head i dont understand what kalakari? Aham looks at her the letter n then shows it to her what does this letter say rashi, Rashi reads it everyone is shocked, then aham says how did you read it to gopi? Rashi goes quiet then aham then Aham tells everyone, jigar looks at rashi i warned you that tell me everything you have done you told me that was it again you lied to me, oh god what a fool i have been not once but many times, kokila looks at rashi but does not say anything then Aham says but how can i blame rashi i played a big part in hurting gopi i abused her physically n mentally but not once did answer back she took the abuse mom used her as a slave a robot just like me work work work, the only persons she trust are jigar, kaki, kaka papa n baa for her the person she loves the most are the ones who betrayed her treated her like a punching bag.. i dont know how she will come back but i will get her back.
Kokila now in shock dikra can i go to meet gopi, Aham looks at her n walks off, jigar says kaki ji i will take you there tomorrow but for now lets leave it Gopi bhabi is safe n ok. Rashi says kaki ji can i come with you i need to apologise to my sister jigar just stares at her, hetal says to kokila i will go with you maybe we can convince her into coming back

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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderful update suk...glad to see gopi with a backbone...glad that the letter truth came out...how is ahem going to win gopi and bring her back to MM
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautifully written👏...I felt for Ahem when Gopi refused to come home with him...at the same time the punishment fits the crime. Ahem needs to realize how it feels to love someone and not have it there for you to lean on. I am finding it hard to forgive Koki or Rashi...but I will wait till the next update to see. Thank you for this wonderful FF. Very well written and very well thought out.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely update!!! hope u continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 4

Baa goes upstairs with parag to see Aham, Aham dikra can i come in? Baa aham smiles, Aham parag told me everything but you need not worry Gopi vahu will be here soon i know my heart is saying she will come back. Gopi is very much like myself i remember when your dada ji use to scold me i use to get scared just like gopi but i won him over i would shake when ever anyone said anything to me, n if i was lying i would get caught just like gopi, one day he came home early i was working i was scared not to get it wrong because i did not want to get scolded by my sass i was so frighten in seeing him i ran to our room crying. He walked in and said i did not even say anything to you so why are you crying, i explained i did not know how to do this job that his mother had given to me n when she comes home i will scolded by her n you, he was shocked he started to explain everything from that day i had his support i loved your grandfather soo much he was my strenght .
Dikra when a girl enters her in laws house the first relationship she is bound by is her husband because of him she is in his house not anyone else they both joined at the same time same place, then after the relationships which begin to develop after are those of dil, sil, bhabi devar, jeth etc when Gopi came into this house when you both got married she should have had your support n strength she did not get that instead she got abused by you n kokila tell me is that how you are suppose to treat someone who is a stranger to your home n family once you guided her she would have understood n learnt but you never gave her the chance until a few months ago she loved you regardless i use to watch her watching you in secret she reminded me of me n my days as a newly wed person.
Aham tell me one thing, Do you love Gopi vahu? Aham has tears with all my heart Baa, then dikra you have to win her over not your mom, not her sister not hetal just you, we will support you all the way, but Baa how? Aham i am old you are young do i really have to tell you? Baa laughs kokila vahu i know you are there come in ? kokila you will not go to see gopi vahu tomorrow Aham will, ji Baa then Baa looks at Aham remember the relationship begins with you..
that night Aham dossed n turned thinking about what Baa said he will win over Gopi n support her in what she wants to do in her life n he will work hard as well n hopefully we can support each other, Aham smiled n went to sleep..

hope you enjoyed
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Posted: 13 years ago
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suk loved bothe the updates...they were very good
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Posted: 13 years ago
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that was fabulous!!please continue...dying to find out if gohem get together!!look forward to the next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was amazing suk , absolutely beautiful . Can't wait for ur update

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