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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow nice update... story is picking up the pace...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow Kush kar ditta. love the way he called her Mrs.Modi
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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏 brilliant. That was a wonderful update. Ahem is for once working on the relationship. It was good to know that he would not take his mothers help. Kudos to Baa. Please update soon. I am eagerly waiting😍...Thanks for this beautiful story we can only hope the CV's do something like this and make the show a million times better...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 7

Holi arrived n when aham came to pick up gopi he was mesmerised by her she wore the white sari with red border similar to last year but this year she looked hotter her hair was undone, her makeup out of this world , Gopi looked at aham happy holi Ahamji, Tejas came Aham bhai how can this be its holi a time to celebrate let me tell you u have to have some color, Aham looks at Gopi i want gopi to be the first one to put color on me Gopi smiled, so she did then he put color on Gopi then tejas put color on both n they to him.
jigar comes in Bhai jai shree krishna bhabi are you ready to go? jai shree krishna devar ji, ji lets go. Tejas looks at goham with a big grin yes lets go he gives the keys to goham to lock up whilst he ran out the door following jigar, Gopi started to giggle Aham watched he loved it he also started to laugh.
At mm everyone was in the full swing the party had started the dj was playing n everyone was throwing color around it n dancing. firstly Goham went to baa who hugged n kissed Gopi n gave her blessings then they went over to kokila n parag but before gopi could touch her feet kokila grabbed her n kissed her on the forehead n then hugged her how could you leave us like that Gopi vahu i did not want you to seperate from Aham i wanted both of you together i wanted you to realise how much you two meant to each i am sorry i caused you so much heart ache, maji you dont have to say sorry, parag blessed n kissed her then goham went ot chirag n hetal who gave them blessings n kisses.
Rashi was standing in the corner as jigar was not talking to her speaking to her mom, mom jigarji hates me he has told me to leave as he wants nothing to do with me what shall i do? plead to gopi but mummy why should i plead to gopi, because jigar will listen to his bhabi but what urshi did not know that their conversation was being listen to by tejas who was there keeping n eye on gopi the only reason he came was to give her support n make her smile he did not want anything to go wrong.
Rashi went over to gopi so does tejas,Gopi you came? ji rashiben n gopi smiled, gopi i am sorry, tejas smiles at gopi oh this is your sister rashi gopi ben, she says sorry you forgive her, help her n then she does something again n we repeat the same pattern its time to stop gopi ben, Rashi looks at him who are you n why are you interferring with my sister n me, rashi you forget me so easily wasnt it you that tore my sari n blamed it on gopi but i gave it to gopi as a present, gopi looked at tejas he looks back. Gopi looks at rashi so rashi what is it now is it jigar ji not talking to you or have you been thrown out the house or that you have done something n you need my help well Rashiben its your problem not mine sort it out yourself .
Gopi then goes over to Aham who is standing there talking to his friends he puts his hand round gopis back n introduces gopi as his wife. Then the music changes n the dhol is on Tejas starts to dance n then he pulls jigar n a few others all of the do a fantastic dance gopi is laughing n clapping her hands Aham grabs gopi n also dances with her both are dancing laughing Aham whispers something in gopis ear n n she laughs n smiles. Rashi stoold there watching in jealousy.
The party was over now was clean up time Gopi stayed to help once she was done Baa tells gopi to go n bathe n change her sari,Aham follows her to their bedroom once in gopi looks round nothing has changed she said, Aham locked the door no its not then he puts his hands round her waist n nuzzles her neck i want you back gopi i want you back here where you belong. Gopi closed her eyes i want to come back i miss you all. Then Aham says stay, Gopi is enjoying the moment then aham turns her around n kisses her on the lips then he picks her up n carries her to the bed where they finally make love, not once but twice gopi fell asleep afterwards.
Everyone was eating dinner when kokila says to meethi to send gopi n aham there dinner up, Baa looks at her n says no meethi they will come down if they are hungry leave them be its the first time in a long time i have seen Aham this happy i dont want anything to change.

Edited by suk19 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
wow suk this is nice finally gopi agreed to come back to MM her home...and holi nice...👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
wonderful update suk...loved tejas looking out for gopi...holi...with ahem and gopi dancing😍...loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
So beautiful , wonderfully written ,lovely touch of romance but I loved her telling rashie off.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
beautifully written FF!!are you gonna continue...please do...look forward to reading!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
Great Stuff Suk, I've read 2 chapters, part 3 next.

Kokila realises that she was wrong, Aham has found Gopi, leaving in a two room apartment above Tejas's workshop.

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