the goham separation short ff part 7 pg 7

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it was nearly a week gopi avoiding Aham, it was beginning to irritate him, he felt as he was missing something special, he missed her being there the one who took out his clothes mom did that these days what was going on with Gopi, he needed to know. Bhai whats wrong? jigar asked, nothing jigar Bhai i have been in your office for 5 minutes you have been staring at the wall, Bhai is everything alright between you n Bhabi. Aham looks at jigar, i dont know jigar i feel as if Gopi is avoiding me she barely speaks to me, when i do come near her she leaves the room saying that she has some work to do, yesterday she did the same she went to the terrace saying she had some clothes up there i followed her, when i got there she was standing there staring i was sure she had been crying when i said gopi she turned her face wiped her tears then said that meethi must have collected the clothes she ran from there. I went after her but then you came with the proposal. Bhai is Bhabi upset about anything? i dont know jigar i just dont know. Bhai valentines is coming up you are such a romantic why dont you send her some flowers, Aham looks at him she will say flowers look good in the garden, then bhai buy something like what you brought for rashi those kangan, Aham gets flashback yes jigar you are right i will give her the kangan.
Aham came home from work, he went upstairs to his wardrobe, he takes out the kangan mom dont want these so i will give them to Gopi, he waited for her to come with his green tea but no meethi came he was disappointed, he asked meethi where gopi was ? Bhai she was in the kitchen cooking the dinner, meethi can you ask her to come upstairs i cant find my file i left it on the table this morning, ji bhai meethi goes down.
Aham is standing up looking towards the wall the door opens, Aham what file were you looking for? it was kokila i have put all the files in the cabinet did you not look for them, Aham looks at kokila shocked not know what to say he then tries to hide the kangan, kokila asks Aham those are the kangan you brought for me nah? Ji mom let me see them Aham she opens them smiling, dikra you should'nt have they are beautiful but your mind should be on work i know i was angry with you but leave it now. I love these kangan its as if you know what type of jewellery i like, Aham looks at her mom Gopi chose them then kokila looks at him hmm n walks off.
Aham starts to think why did gopi not come i asked her why does mom come all the time, meethi comes bhai dinner is ready, meethi where is gopi? bhai she is making the rotis do you need her? No meethi i dont need her now he is getting angry why is she not coming when i call her why is she avoiding me. During dinner Gopi never came out the kitchen she was making rotis whilst rashi was sitting with eating meethi was serving, Baa asked where gopi was ? kokila says Baa gopi vahu has work to do unlike some looking over to rashi, who puts her face down.
Chirag tells Aham he would like to go over some details over the agreement between mr Desai, then jigar says yes bhai also before i leave for my business trip i also need to discuss some matters with you. Aham says yes n they all leave n get their files n laptops to discuss. Aham then looks over at the table Gopi with her pallu on, she was clearing the table she looked tired but not once did she look over to Aham, he then continued with his meeting not realizing that gopi had already gone upstairs once she finished. After the meeting with chirag n jigar Aham ran upstairs and went into his room he looks round to see where Gopi is? he then heads towards the bathroom she must be in there i shall wait for her, after 10 minutes he knocks at the bathroom door, Gopi are you in there? Aham then turns the handle n opens the door, he goes in No Gopi where is she? she is suppose to be sleeping. He goes back out n kokila is coming upstairs with some water, Mom where is Gopi? kokila replies Gopi vahu went to sleep in the guest room, Aham looks at kokila confused but why mom? kokila looks at him gopi vahu does not want to distract you from your work as you are busy these days with the new projects . Aham looks at kokila mom she has not distracted me, Aham dikra Gopi vahu needs to rest she is also disturbed when u work durin the night since the accident it has taken a toll on, Aham says mom she should have told me i would have worked in the study. kokila looks at him n says jai shree krishna leaving Aham confused.
The next day was the same but when Aham went into their wardrobe all of gopis clothes were gone, then he looked at her dressing table her sindoor her makeup her chooria all of it gone, Aham had tears why gopi why..
Gopi did the puja once finished she asked kokila to give blessing to everyone kokila does, Aham looks at Gopi who is looking down then when kokila gives him the blessing he looks up to see Gopi gone, he looks round for her where did she go? Aham are you looking for someone, kokila asks nahi mom. breakfast will be ready go eat and then get ready for the office.
At the office Aham was pacing up and down, jigar comes in Bhai did you speak to bhabi, nahi jigar Gopi has moved into the guest bedroom, i dont see her i dont speak to her i dont know whats going on? i need to smell her touch her i miss speaking to her, bhai this business trip i was going to why dont you go? whilst your gone bhabi will start to miss you? bahi you know what they say absent makes the heart grow fonder, the aham has a flashback of what chirag said he takes hetal kaki with him to give them a break from all this housework etc, jigar great Aham hugs jigar, jigar i will not be going alone i am going to take gopi with me book tickets for me and Gopi.
The tickets are sent to the house, on the envelope its says mr and Mrs modi, kokila opens the envelope, jigar comes home ahh kaki ji the tickets are here pack quickly as there is no time we have to get to the airport quickly aham bhai will be here any minute now he will be going to the meeting instead of me, kokila looks at the other ticket my son how much my son cares for me, he has booked a ticket for me and him, kokila goes upstairs and packs. gopi helps her n kokila tells her what to do whilst she is away, she tells her to give parag his medicine n keep an eye on baa n to do all her duties, Gopi says ji maji ji maji like a robot.
Aham comes running in Gopi are my bag packed as she is walking downstairs, Gopi puts the pallu on her head ji Aham says what about yours n kokila shouts Aham i have packed my bag i have got my passport lets go Aham is shocked, he looks at Gopi who is now heading towards the mandir, mom before aham could say anything Aham gopi vahu puja thali now we are late, jigar comes n looks at kokila but kaki, Aham looks at jigar n shakes his head as if to say dont bother.
Aham n jigar both were quite in the car, kokila says Aham where are we staying, mom we are staying at the same resort we stayed at in switzerland, kokila smiles, At the airport jigar hugs Aham n kokila then wishes them good luck n bye.
Aham finalized the deal and came back a day earlier no one was expecting them hetals eyes were puffed up, Baa was crying, parag was saying what shall i tell aham n kokila. kokila comes in tell me what? Everyone was shocked that they were back early, Aham walks in smiling he had missed gopi so much all he could think about was her even at meetings he would see her sitting there, he shouts Gopi can you make me some green tea. Parag goes up to kokila Gopi vahu has left us, kokila looks at him shocked Aham who is standing there shocked not been able to move, jigar walks in with chirag he also had puffy eyes it seems they had been up most of the night.
Aham was in shock he runs upstairs first straight into the guest room gopi clothes were still there what his family had given to her but the ones that her maikar had given were all gone the jewellery was still there, Aham shouts GOPIII jigar walks in bhai bhabi left this for you a letter, Aham opens it and starts to read it.
Dear Aham ji
I am sorry but you will be happier also maji will be happier i do not want to be the reason you are angry at each other, Aham reads the first sentence again what does she mean by that? Then Gopi tells him she knows he did not want to marry her and is sorry for causing all the problems in his life, and as her friend she hopes he can forgive her (Aham now angry as her friend) your dost Gopi.
kokila comes into the room Aham gives her the letter and says hope she is happy, Jigar says bhabi was fine she was quite after you left she even said it was good for you to go with kaki ji as both of you needed to be with each other, bhai i did not tell her that the ticket was for her not for kaki, kokila looks up jigar the ticket was for gopi...

hope you enjoyed the first chapter

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Posted: 13 years ago
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yayyy me first

awesome OS suk...👏
aww poor gopi... she left...

please update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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fantastic start suk...i can feel ahems impatience and his pain...i know u always wanted gopi to leave and be independent in sns...its wonderful that ur getting ur wish through ur fiction...hope koki realises the mistake she made...cant beleive koki went on the trip with ahem...then again i can lol...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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love this FF suk.. very interesting.. hope everything will turn out good for goham.. wondering what will happen next.. please continue soon! 😃
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Suk this is lovely! 😃

Please continue, Can't wait to read more!😛
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part 2

Gopi started to work for Tejas the designer, she also asked him not to tell anyone who she was, he asked her why? she told him that she needed to be independant she wanted to find her self she wanted to just to be gopi not vahu not jethani not sister not niece not dil not nobody just Gopi. He was fine with that, Gopi also asked if he could help her find accomodiation as she was homeless Tejas gladly agreed he told her she could stay upstairs there were two rooms with a kitchen one can be a bedroom as it already had a bathroom in there and the other as her living room, he told her he will charge her 1500 ruppees gopi looks at him bhai can you take it off my wages, Tejas says but gopi i will be paying you 2000 you will not be left with much, Gopi smiles 500 ruppees will be more than enough. Gopi got to work straight away she worked hard she designed, she did embroidery Tejas was impressed for the first month wages he gave her 3000 ruppes as gopi worked a lot of hours and did not go out, yes it was a month Gopi would go straight from work upstairs she never ventured out only during the night when she would go on the roof top n see the stars it was her solace her comfort each night she would say jai shree krishna to aham n maji.
Aham no longer spoke to his mother, he would walk passed her n not look at her, parag was the one who spoke to aham if he had any luck in finding Gopi, every day it was the same, Aham went to work in the morning n worked late in the evening so he would not have to see his mother, he hated her, kinjal was right she was right about mom, he was blind. kokila sat on her bed thinking what could she do to make this better, how can she get Gopi vahu back, then she thinks about what happened that night, she found out the ticket to switzerland was for gopi not for her, if only she knew she would have gladly sent gopi with aham n then she thinks what aham said to her that if she had sent gopi with aham she would have punished him again when they came back maybe this time he would become a dobee n then a cook so what else would he have to do with his mother. He told the whole family what happened how kokila was angry that he n gopi helped raji get back to gether, mom was not plsed she was angry so she stopped me from going to work n that day i did all the ironing. so mom why was gopi avoiding me did you tell her to stop talking to me kokila pleaded that she did not tell gopi vahu to do anything but gopi vahu came to her and promised that she would not get you involved in house hold matters, Aham looks at her house hold matters mom i was involved with my family if some one gets hurt then who do they call the neighbours because their family is too busy making deals, mom explained to me that, gopi taught me that, my brother needed me yes i brought the kangan for rashi this shocks rashi but we wanted raji together yes rashi did all those things so are we going to throw her out of the house like a peice of garbage. Jigar looks at rashi who is in tears.
kokila tried to explain that she was trying to make them see that they need to look at their relationship before thinking of others but now its all a mess and its all because of her, Gopi vahu where are you?

Rashi n hetal were shopping in the mall n rashi starts to admire this sari it was beautiful rashi said wow mummy ji this sari is so beautiful, hetal looks at it Rashi it is mummyji can we go in n see it, hetal smiles ji Rashi goes in n asks for the price madam it is 90,000 rupees rashi looks at hetal who is smiling who is the designer the sales assistant says its a new designer working for tejas, rashi says i know that name then goes over to the sari n looks at the label its says tejas& Gopi, rashis eyes wide, mummy ji come here, Rashi shows her hetal is shocked, rashi calls jigar who comes down to the store we need see the designer so the sales assistant gives a address. Jigar leaves n on the way out he tells Rashi go ahead if you like it buyed it but rashi declines as she has got what she needs she doesnt need any thing else as her n jigar were still working on their relationship.
Jigar goes back to the office Bhai i think i know where Bhabi is, Aham jumps up bhai come i have a address, jigar n Aham arrive n aham says thats Tejas he is the designer, then gopi comes out smiling she gives the saris to Tejas who hugs her n lifts her chin up n says everything will be ok. Aham was red burning with jealousy Gopi with another man how could she? Jigar looks at him Bhai dont get angry just wait n see, Tejas goes into the truck n gopi goes inside then a woman comes out Aham gets out of his car, ji benji can you tell me if that is the designer tejas ji she replies and that was gopi, she replies ji how do you know Gopi she doesnt know anyone here, we know she is married but she refuses to talk about it, Aham cant help how does tejas know gopi, the lady says they work as designers Tejas says Gopi is his sister n is going through some problems with her inlaws n husband so she is here to stay for a while, she is very good at what she does. Aham looked relieved, he leaves the lady standing n knocks on the door Gopi opens the door smiling she says what have you left now? then she looks up its Aham she stares at him lalalalala music playing, jigar comes up jai shree krishna bhabi Gopi looks at him jai shree krishna devarji, Gopi looks at Aham who is still staring at her she asks them to come in n takes them upstairs to her apartment, Aham looks round, jigar says bhabi you live here ji devar ji. let me make you some tea nahi bhabiji i dont need anything, ahamji would you like some tea he shakes his head. goham stare at each other, bhai i will go back to the office Aham says yes, jigar leaves.
Gopi tells Aham to sit down he does, Aham starts to think what shall is say to her his heart was pumping hard he wanted to find the right words to say, n what comes out Gopi why did you leave me? Gopi looks at him stunned she told him i explained everything in the letter, but why leave ? why not leave after we got back? Gopi looks at him would it have made any difference you did not want to be married to me, maji did not want me to be with you so why should i have stayed? Aham looks at her because i loved you i needed you you avoided me i wanted you to go to switzerland with me but mom went instead due to a misunderstanding it should have been you with me i needed you more than any one else, Gopi says but you and maji i did not want you fighting. Aham looks at her Gopi mom and i were fine. /gopi says no maji was angry as you helped raji get back to gether instead you should have been concentrating on your work i am sorry i did not want you n maji to fight. Gopi that was not your fault how many times have i told you dont blame others problems on yourself.
Gopi has tears, aham kneels down n wipes them Gopi i love you i love your innocence i love the way you love the family not seeing wrong in anyone i love you, Gopi starts to cry, how long has she been dreaming about this finally Aham said to her i love you, she asked him to say it again he does then aham says what about you do you love me? Gopi shyly nodds her head Aham smiles n kisses her.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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RESERVED!👏

*EDITED*

Yayyy im first!

That was such a sweet,cute and adorable update!😛

I loved it, need not i mention the highlight of the update was TEJAS!😳

Hehe i loved it very much! 😃

I hope you keep posting OS's and SS's/FF's,would love to read them!🤗
Edited by CHIKA784 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great read suk! 😎

Now this is the kind of separation track I would love to see in SNS. Gope actually leaving MM and becoming independent. Experiencing life and gaining some insight into how others think, feel and behave.

Are you going to do a Part 3 suk? Maybe keep her away from MM for a long while still.
Edited by ShaunSA - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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suk loved you ff...the first part was so emotional...great work😊
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loved the os...it was very good

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