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Posted: 13 years ago
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Teja is gay...👏 so no problem for ahem...nice update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderful update suk...was nice to see ahem a little bit jealous...so ahems going to ask baa for advice...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Superb update ,enjoyed it immensely .loved tejas playing cupid , very well written chapter ,well done suk.
Don't know how chika /jabeen gonna react to u making her guy gay . Maybe u have to take cover but I loved the fact that he is gay ,that's unique compared to other ff ,os,ss.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
Nice update Suks. But Chika Jabeen might get mad😆 She has been his number one fan. But you hit things on the head with Gopi not wanting to move forward until Koki approves. Poor Gopi.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks to all i am sure janbeen will take it all in good spirit
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
Very nice Update Suk
Ahem Try better !
Cant wait to read the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
This FF is really good. You seem to a writing machine. You have written a lot of good stuff and updated quite soon. Love the story...plz update to the earliest of your convenience.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 6

Aham goes to see baa n tells her what happened, the only way gopi will be with him is if mom approves of our relationship, i am sure that if i take mom with me Gopi will be happy, parag n kokila are both listening, kokila ji baa if i go i will explain to gopi vahu n i am sure she will come back as well. Baa looks at kokila nahi kokila vahu bikul nahi, Aham this is your fight to win your wife back not kokilas if kokila goes now yes it will be easier. Gopi won your heart over with hard work proved herself to you, so are you ready for the fight of your life your love. Baa goes over to Aham dikra whe you want to do a business deal n the competitor is just as good as you so how will you win the deal.. But baa there is no competitor i thought there was but hes n then aham stops baa looks at him you have no competitor everyone is a competitor your mom your dad the boy next door, the many suitors who would gladly have gopi for a vahu because of how she is. Dikra dont make it into a business deal if you love her as you say you do then i suggest you fight for her, win her trust, make her feel like the only woman in the world for you like your dada did, Aham smiles. ji baa
Aham thinks of what nani said he looks at gopis photo picks it up, Gopi i dont know if you know this but let me tell without you i cant think straight my life is upside down i want you back for me i want you also to come back because you love me my family will be second in you life i will be first.
Aham calls gopi on her phone, Mrs modi will you come to lunch with me tomorrow, Aham ji but you asked me to cook, i did but i want to take you somewhere with me i have orgainsed the food just you n me, plse take the afternoon off.
Aham asked kaki to make all of gopis favorite foods n some mithai, kokila watched n asked mota bhabi if she needed any help, kokila if we do it toghether then it will be done faster, so they did, Aham got ready n went to pick up gopi. She was waiting for him, she said bye to Tejas who was looking confused, Aham went over to him its my fight to win her over i will do this alone just need your support, Tejas smiled n understood.
Aham took gopi to the park where he took her when she told him about her parents he took the rug out of the car n put it on the grass then told gopi he also had a pillow to make it more comfortable for her then he took out the food they both had lunch Gopi enjoyed it. After lunch Aham yawn he put his head on gopis lap which made gopi confused she was taken back abit, Gopi how did you meet Tejas again? Gopi tells him how she met Tejas then Aham says he is gay, Gopi smiled yes he is gay n he has a crush on my bhai jigar, gopi starts to laugh Aham too then gopi starts to tell Aham how she has to keep a straight face especially when tejas starts to eye up the men, Aham listen to her her funny experiences in this short seperation they had, she was quite the chatterbox once she got going he love it, Aham lifted his head n put it on the pillow gopi also put her head on the pillow then aham turned towards her n watched her close her eyes he also closed his eyes when the got up it was almost 5 oclock they packed everything away, they chatted they laughed n when aham got gopi home she was relaxed n comfortable he asked if he could kiss her she nodded her head shyly he lifted her hand n kissed her there. Gopi felt a tingle going down her spine she was beetroot red n in love.. This was just the start, Aham took her to fairs, forts they even had dinner with Tejas n his latest boyfriend which was amazing. Aham was winning over gopi.
Holi was coming Aham asked gopi if she would like to join him n his family in the festival, he told her Baa has asked Gopi smiled n said she would love to but he does not enjoy holi Aham smiles i do now.


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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
Wonderful chapter , I adore ur ahem and his style in courting gopi , it makes the heart feel so good especially after all the crap we getting onscreen. Gopi is more confidant and is enjoying the attention of her husband . Can't wait for ur next chapter
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
loved the update...it was very good

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