Sam - Good song choice first of all... different, but good.. I think if you would have taken this song on a higher note, maybe we could get more of the tune out?? But I know that's hard, cos some of the notes do go high already, so it would be tougher if you went even higher.. youve got the higher notes nicely, but do work on the sur in the lower notes, it wouldve also been nice if we could hear some of the harkateins more clearly in the song as well.. but you had fantastic energy, love how you finished some of the phrases, felt like singing along myself!!😳😆 Nice job yaar👏👏
Kiti ji - I really like this song as well...! When you go lower, and when you go higher as well, the tone gets really quite nasal, im not sure if that's something you can control, but it's really prominent and does affect the feel of the song... sometimes your voice vibrate when it doesnt need to as well. Overall i enjoyed the energy of the song, there were a few places where the sur went off, so make sure you keep those in mind, the "sa re" part started off very nicely but make sure you maintain the sur there consistently, and throughout the whole song.. nicely done👏
Mala ji - First of all, I really like song, it's so pretty.. "aisa na ki jo", in the end, you went off sur there.. in the beginning, when you finish off the phrasing, make sure you maintain the sur throughout the entire phrase otherwise we lose the feel of the song.. this is a tough song, and you did put yourself upto a challenge.. Major part for me was that almost all of the harkats at the end of the lines were not in sur, or faltered at the end.. and if that happens, I lose the entire feeling in that line😳 some parts of the song were really nice, but just work on maintaining the sur throughout the entire song, otherwise we cant enjoy it fully..
Lavanya ji - so nice to hear your voice again!!😳 I just love this song too.. agghh, there was this buzzing sound there the whole time, i was trying hard to ignore it, but I couldnt😕 Actually, I dont think I can listen to the song.. when i put the volume up to hear your voice, the buzzing sound overpowers it and all I can hear is that, and barely your voice😕 Whatever I heard was really nice, but it was only abt 30 seconds or so.. if this is fixable or something, then that would be great, otherwise I cant enjoy the song, this buzzing thing is really bothering me, sorry😳 i really wanted to hear you sing!
Evilseye ji - I just love this song, first of all, one of my favourites!!😳 Agar there is a buzzing sound here, but thank God it doesnt overpower your voice, so i can still hear you... Wow, great effort from you especially in the tough parts, not all of the endings of the phrases ended on sur, but i really appreciate the effort you had.. overall, the song was nice, but I didnt get much feeling out of it, which is essential here...😳 and oh no, it was so short, only 2 minutes! 😔😳 nicely done!👏
Rock&roll ji - Oh wow, with power you started the song, I didnt realise how high my volume was, it gave me such a fright😳😆 but very nice energy throughout the song! In this song, there are a lot of leaps between the high and low notes, you did well with them.. there were some places where it went off sur, especially when you go lower.. I think overall, if there was more control in your voice, then the song would have even been better.. but nice job!👏
Minzrulz ji - Oohhh, i get to hear this song again😳 I like how you took this song and interpreted it in your own way.. everytime though, the "sona" loses its feel, and it's not always on sur.. so do keep that in mind.. I wish there was more feel in this song.. it's only there sometimes, and not throughout the entire song... just make sure the sur is consistent with every line, but you did very nicely overall👏
Coollama ji - I think your name is Nikhil ji, but im not sure, I'm so so sorry😳 First of all, what a fantastic song you've picked, one of my favourites of Rahet Fateh Ali Khan's... i love the feel in this song, i can feel what youre singing.. when you went down to the "naina" part, make sure that remains in sur as well, I know it's a really low note, but if you can do that, it would be even better.. the "zeher nasheela", that entire part after that, went off sur.. aahhh, everything before was sounding nice, would have even better if you maintained the sur there!😳 I wish you had kept up the sur throughout the entire song, I wouldve enjoyed it even more.. there were some really god parts, but they didnt stay consistent.. good job overall, though!
Phewwwwwwwwww, finally done!! If there is some way I can hear Lavanya ji's song, that would be great, I dunno if everyone else is experiencing the same problems as I am, but if that could be fixed... nicely done everyone, cant wait to hear the next round's songs!!👏
I hope I wasn't too mean, I'm so sorry if I was😳 just tried to be as frank as I could be.. hopefully, my feedback will help someone! :P
Edited by ammmu - 17 years ago