U,Me and Woh AYfic continued page 9 - Page 4

Part-7

She was shocked to see the thing

Yuvi : How is it?

and a tear rolled down her eye, after that unwanted tears were coming out of her eyes. She didn't want to cry but somehow she was unable to control herself.

Yuvi : Kya hua babes achchi nahi lagi

Ashi : (in soft tone) Duhhuh yeh ring tumhare pass thi and u never told me. U know when i lost i i felt like losing most precious thing of my life. Aur main sabke samne yeh bhi nahi show kar sakti thi that I m depressedyeh ring tum jaise Psycho ke pass thi

Yuvi: Ashi at that time u were with Aditya and I thought u threw the ring. I can't tell u how heartbroken I was at that day i felt ke finally maine tumhe loose kar diya forever .I was like....

she put her hand on his mouth

Ashi : Duh huh ab bolte hi rahoge ya ring bhi pehnaoge

he slipeed the ring in her fingerand kissed her on cheek and whispered

Yuvi : Ashi i wanna marry u

in reaction Ashi too kissed him on his cheek and whispered

Ashi : but I don't to marry a duhhuh psycho

she ran away after saying that and he said Ashiiiiiiiii in frustated voiceand was chasing her. he nearly caught her by her arm when suddenly they fell down while turning ashi on his side and ended up Ashi above Yuvi . they shared a long eye locking momentthat the even didn't realized when they kissed their lips took possession of lips of person they love so much that the other meant life to them without whom they don't even exist.

Rest of night they spend sitting togather holding hand in hand sharing lots of eyelocking moments, talking about what they meant to eachother and also fought but e fight full of love for eachother. but as sun was going to rise it was Ashi who realised they need to go back home

At home someone was wating for them

who was he/ she

lets find out

person: Where u both had been all the night

Ashi : nowhere we were just here later we went for a walk

Person: (with suspicion in eyes) u were not here every1 was looking for u

Yuvi : (having an innocent expression) Really but hum to yahi the

Originally posted by: gungun

however i got only 1 reply for last part i ,m going to post the next part. This is the part i have been thinking for many days but was unable to format it and when finally when i had done that I can't let myself for not posting it. i dont know how will be so do give ur comments tell me if u don't like anything in it I'll try to correct it in next part
Chao
Gun 😊

gun listen to me gurl

u are an ashi yuvi fan hai na?? so dont post things coz of others i mean tu janty hai ki tery fic rocking hai and u love it and u r sharing this beautyful thing cozu know it is awesome

how does it matter if u get one reply or ten what matters is if the one reply u got was it real and sincere or nor?

don't care about others gun don't care about what i or any one else has to say for your fic you know it is good and thats it thats the end of story

write for yourself for ay and those whoa re missing out on this welll trust me its their loss not yours

i for one adore this fic theres romance emotions fights comedy everything its a complete package its written in such a simple tone yet it touches hearts

and if i have to say for others like hiba sur priya sid everyone loooves thhis ficcy gun i know them i know they adoree it its just that sometimes u don't get the time to post your comments and appreciate it

don't lose haart and hope gun is wear it these guys would come and see what you have written in here and they would be cursing themselves for missing out on such a beautyful thing

please don't ever say u won't post coz of others it really hurts me a lot...we r devils gun we live only for ourselves at our terms and conditions not by what others have to say....😳🤗

gunnii d part is sooooooooooo passionatee........ loved it......... 😛 cont furter!! 😛 who's d person!! 😆

Originally posted by: smritisashi

[gun listen to me gurl

u are an ashi yuvi fan hai na?? so dont post things coz of others i mean tu janty hai ki tery fic rocking hai and u love it and u r sharing this beautyful thing cozu know it is awesome

how does it matter if u get one reply or ten what matters is if the one reply u got was it real and sincere or nor?

don't care about others gun don't care about what i or any one else has to say for your fic you know it is good and thats it thats the end of story

write for yourself for ay and those whoa re missing out on this welll trust me its their loss not yours

i for one adore this fic theres romance emotions fights comedy everything its a complete package its written in such a simple tone yet it touches hearts

and if i have to say for others like hiba sur priya sid everyone loooves thhis ficcy gun i know them i know they adoree it its just that sometimes u don't get the time to post your comments and appreciate it

don't lose haart and hope gun is wear it these guys would come and see what you have written in here and they would be cursing themselves for missing out on such a beautyful thing

please don't ever say u won't post coz of others it really hurts me a lot...we r devils gun we live only for ourselves at our terms and conditions not by what others have to say....😳🤗

hey thanks smriti I'll keep it in my mind next time akhir main ashi Yuvi ki fan hun i should learn something for them. I must say I really felt dishearted when no1 replies but for next time Im going to write for myself

hey thanks again fo suggestion

OH MY GOD !!!!!!1 OH MY GOD !!!!! gunnu !!!!1 wat do i say ..... wat do i say ..... i mean afta readin dees 2 parts m feelin soooo mushy mushy sumthins happnin 2 me goddddd gunnu dis has made me swing m closin ma eyes ryt now n all i can c is dees 2 ppl held sooo close 2 each other dat no1 can part dem omggggggg it was amazing seriously yaar m totally fida ovr dees 2 parts

Originally posted by: gungun

thanks Hiba but no one else is reading may be I'm a very bad writer I am totaly confused weather Ishould continue it or not coz if no one reads it i shouldn't torture people I feel very sad when no one replies 😭 😭

first of all scoldings is therez in store for u. i mean how cud u say u r not a gud writer or u shudn't continue ur fic... i mean u r confused??? 😡😡being a devil u r confused??? m so angry wid u...😡😡😡 u know the more u b selfish smarter u'll b. i had gone all thru these feelings. .if u'll take urself to b less dan otherz they'll make u least. so try n live for urself n for those who really loves n care for u. u do ur task but don't wait for its' result. u shud b thankful m not having my sanskrit book wid me oterwise i wud hav provided u wid its' shloks. heheeee n then u wud hav thot m inspired by navjot singh siddhu. 😆😆😆lolz....n m really sorry for missing out this fic.

ok i havn't read the fic ryt now. after seeing this post of urz i lost my temper. n seedha m here to scold u. n m really sorry coz my sitting on computer is prohibited. so i cum ol only for a limited time. n at ne moment my dad must b cuming. so i'll leave my comments tomorrow. hope u understand. {{{{this is the reason y m not able to read ur fic all these dayz}}} but m promise u i'll be here 2morrow. till then tadaaaaaaaaa... love uuuuu...

n yep don't u dare to call this fic of urz a torture to ppl. otherwise whenever u'll open ur ghar ka darwaza na i'll b standing there n will land my motawala danda on ur head. so b careful i hav warned u b4 hands.😉

Originally posted by: devilz_here

first of all scoldings is therez in store for u. i mean how cud u say u r not a gud writer or u shudn't continue ur fic... i mean u r confused??? 😡😡being a devil u r confused??? m so angry wid u...😡😡😡 u know the more u b selfish smarter u'll b. i had gone all thru these feelings. .if u'll take urself to b less dan otherz they'll make u least. so try n live for urself n for those who really loves n care for u. u do ur task but don't wait for its' result. u shud b thankful m not having my sanskrit book wid me oterwise i wud hav provided u wid its' shloks. heheeee n then u wud hav thot m inspired by navjot singh siddhu. 😆😆😆lolz....n m really sorry for missing out this fic.

ok i havn't read the fic ryt now. after seeing this post of urz i lost my temper. n seedha m here to scold u. n m really sorry coz my sitting on computer is prohibited. so i cum ol only for a limited time. n at ne moment my dad must b cuming. so i'll leave my comments tomorrow. hope u understand. {{{{this is the reason y m not able to read ur fic all these dayz}}} but m promise u i'll be here 2morrow. till then tadaaaaaaaaa... love uuuuu...

n yep don't u dare to call this fic of urz a torture to ppl. otherwise whenever u'll open ur ghar ka darwaza na i'll b standing there n will land my motawala danda on ur head. so b careful i hav warned u b4 hands.😉

ab sab log daant daant kar bacchi ki jaan loge Kya😳

U know what Im loving it coz 😉this had shown that u people are so concerned about me.Pehla smriti and now u . and im very happy that I have made such a nice and True friends here in short span of time and its just AY ka Magic.guys i cant tell how lucky Im .God has given me best of his heart to love me offline and online coz my parent, my realatives, my cousins and above them my friends( which is rare as people say however i find so untrue) have true feelings for me and now when I have started something online I got such a great friend even here so Thanks a ton guys

And i m very sorry for not believing in my self and above that, u guys coz I knew u are there for me to encourage

Now I have understood that Im writing this fic for myself and for my love for AY so next time Im not going to give u guys any chance to scold me

Chao

Gun😃

Gunnnn...u are dodo... well even I had been at ur place once...regarding my mixes... but now I dont even care... I just make it for myself and loons...because she always tells me honest reviews...and that's what I wanna tell u... dont care about ppl... write for yourself and who reads and gives their honest views😳 And its not only u who have been through this...its everyone of us... me, loons, shellzie...everyone!

Sometimes I have just got 4 replies for my mixes...but who cares anyways now... yaa it feels good to see ppl commenting on it... but we cannot force them... because then i think it wont be their *honest* reply! And I am happy that now u r gonna write for yourself...and AY!😳

And forgive me if i dont reply this month... am having exams in like 15 days! And tests and so much to finish...but I do read ur fics during lunch😳😳 and trust me I love it... your ficcy is soo unique and soo cuteeeeeeeeeeeee!! I adore it...and it just rocks!😳😳 Totally AY style😳 And i love that propose... u know I always wanted yuvi to gift that ring back to ashi😳😳 and imagine that expression of joy in her eyes... and I am soo happy I saw it in here...that too while proposing...i loved that idea!😳😳 And also that beach sceneee and all😳😳 and the best part is...this all happens at night time😳 I love it!😳 that silent waves and those while background😳😳 and AY in black...ohhhhhhhhh just perfect!!😍 Gunn u rock...and i am wating for u to cont. itttttttt..please do it soon!!😳😳 dying to read moreeeeeeeee😳😳

GUNGUN!!!! Hey bhaggu!!!! CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm having a freaking seizure man! You write so damn well!!! This beats my FF any day! Darna Mana Hai to the trash! U, Me and Woh all the way! WHOOOOOOO!!!! Duh-uh! Where'd you learn to write like that??? Awsome man! Totally rocking! Continue soon!!!


Komz

gunnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn sorry dearrrrr for breaking the promise. u know achanak se plzn bana n we went to our aunt's home in lucknow... n there waz no net... evry now n then i used to think ur fic 😳 😳 😳
ok n m really glad u got wat we all wanted... write for ur own n offcourse our AY 😳


ok read ur fic... n its damn awesum. the scene which u describe was beautifullllllllllll... full moon... white curtains on white pillars...... all white n twosome in black sitting their looking deeply into each otherz eyesssssss..... oh godddddddd.... ashi must hav melted by that all... n the ring scene was too gud... n the propsal was totally ay style... n aashi is too much... but afterall yuvi knows she belongs to him only... 😳
n whose dat kabab mein haddi person??? destroying their perfect mood? plz gungun jaldi se continue kar do... n plz for bhaggu's sake ab tum smrito mat bannnaaaaa...
love uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu