U,Me and Woh AYfic continued page 9 - Page 2

Created

Last reply

Replies

64

Views

9.2k

Users

10

Likes

2

Frequent Posters

usharafuddin thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#11
O M G!!! O M G!!!!! O M G!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMGGGGGGGGGG MOGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!! OMGGGGG OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!! maann lemme first controll saaying OMGs!!!!!!!!! OMGGGGGGGGGG OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!! OMGGGGGGGG OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
gungun!!! maaaaaannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn u donno how manny jumbo sized butterfies bumping inside tummy!!!!!! OMGGGG OMGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!! awwww man jus adooooooorable aww awwwwwwwww full of pranps n choooooooooooo cute passion awwwww awwwwwwwww............... lmaaaoooooo "Yuvi ka Brain Holiday par hai
Aur Ghas charne gaya hai"!!!!!!!!!! 🤣 n esp dat part "no uv, yes ashi, no uv, yes ashi.... lolz awwwwww.......... ☺️ keep cont soon hun! lub ya.............. 🤗 🤗
Edited by usharafuddin - 17 years ago
gungun thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#12
Thanks guys for your comments I will contine very soon and wont keep you w8ing
Edited by gungun - 17 years ago
FollowYourHeart thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#13

gungunnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn what is thissssssssss??☺️☺️☺️ oh my oh my myyyyyyyyyy gun{can i call you gun?}...this is soooooooooo amazing soooooooooooo sooooooooooooo romantic ☺️☺️☺️ and i must say your writing style rooooooocks👏👏👏 hats off to you gun its a perfect mixture of every essance of ay ☺️☺️

am sowiee gun my exams ar eon and i haven't had much time so thats why i didn't read it before but just now i read all the parts together and i seriously got knocked ouuuuuuut its soooooooooooo soooooooooo soo awesmeeee☺️☺️

gooooooooooosh ashi in a black sareeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee☺️😍😍even the image is like sooooooooooooooo 😍😍😍 am sure yuvi would have had a jolt of electryfying current on seieng herrrrrrrr☺️☺️ but what i like the moooooost was what you said ki it doesnt matter if u are looking beautyful or nol i would still lovee yooou the way you areeeeeeeeeeeeeee☺️☺️ how so very very veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy trueeeeeeeeee theirs is the only love where appearances have no importance what so ever☺️☺️ becoz perhaps they belive in loving the soul not the body☺️☺️..and aaaaah apna psychoo in black shervaaaaaaani....😍😍😍..what an image they would be makingggg😍😍😍...totaly picture perfect one look at them and u wld be glued trsnfixed on the spot becoz u wld hav never sene such a sheer blindingly joyful sight...☺️☺️..a sight which says love really is magiiiiic provied if you have the right one the one oyu are meant to be with☺️☺️

and haha i loooved that lineee...tia ko pata hota ki ashi usse bhi zada sunder lagne wali toh she wld hav never asked her ot wear a saree😆🤣...how cannon🤣🤣...but it was shooo cute of ashi to wear saree for tia's sake😳 you have showed a cute relaitonship of ashi-tia and i must say thats one of the very first attempts on that direction😆😉

and the third paaaaaaaaaart wassssss🤣oh my gooooooooood gunnnnnnnn it was awesmeeeeeeeeeee🤣🤣🤣oh god i wish i cld see that pic of yuviiiiiiiiiiii and his faceeeeeeee🤣what an awesme thought yuvi ka brian hollidya pe gaya hai ghas charneee🤣oh shucks it cna only be sheeeeeeee who can dare to antogonize him to such an extent🤣🤣and i know exactly what his expression would have beeen seeing it🤣🤣🤣somewhat like that one where she made his cartoon in the love staiton sooong🤣...hey bhaggu they rooooooock maaan🤣🤣🤣...

and guuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuun that part rooooooooocked oh my god i loooved this lineeeeeeeeee...how could she be hurt when yuvi was there??☺️☺️...how so very veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy trueeeeeeeeeeee she can never be hurt in his arms coz he will stand by her foreverrrrrrrrrr and kiss away the pain coz hes is her HERO☺️☺️...and i loooved that line toooo when yuvi says i loved it coz it brought you in my armssssssssssss☺️☺️☺️...awwwwwwwww...☺️☺️...yeeeeeeee anything that brings her to him would be the world's bestets thing for himmmmmmmmmm☺️☺️☺️......and awwwww even that expression rocked guun when ahsi says she oculd see in his eyes what he wanteeeeeed☺️☺️☺️...awwww what an awesme way to put his feelings am sure that intens craving to hold her would hav bene so translucent that if not fullfilled it wld have the power to bring about havoc..☺️☺️

guuuun all i can say is hats offfffffff seriously hats offfffffff👏👍🏼 am definitly looking forward to moreeeeeeeee guuuuun please do continue sooon😳cant contain my excitementttttt☺️☺️ and gun am again apologizing for the delay was really tied up with my papers but i am glad i read it and i seriously adoooooored it you write very very welll👏 and am definitly looking forward to loads more form youuuuuuu😃 thankoo for giving us all ay fans such a beautyful treat guuuuuun🤗🤗

loads of looove

smriti

evilseye thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#14
Hey gungun!!Amaaaaazinnnggggggggg fic yaar!!!awwww...that was really awesome!!!specially the no uv yes ashi part...sooo sweeettt!!! 😳 😳 Makes me wanna get remix back all over again!!!Thanx a lot 4 riting dis fic yaar....ek dum dhansu tha....of course ay fic hain toh..yeh toh hona hi tha!!!ta ra ra ra ra...(If u don get it i broke out into a song..... 😆 😳 )Cont soon!!!!!
p_rox thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#15
ooooooo gungun wat do i say??????????????? omggggggg omgggggggg ive fallen flaaaaaaaat afta readin dis☺️its outstaaaaaaaandingggggggggg🤗i really lykd it rite frm da 1st part 👏 n ashiyuvi in blackkkkkk outfitssssssss 😍i mean black sherwani n black saariiii😍omgggggggggg i jst cant describe ma feelingsssssssss but i must tell u dat m already lost in der wrld😍n yuvi catchin ashi☺️


Yuvi:But i love it
Ashi: WHAT?
Yuvi: Ya babes it made you fall in my arms to mera liya yeh world ki best thing hai
Ashi: Whatever
Yuvi:Tumhare itna perfect gift ke bad i think mujhe bhi tumhein kuch dena chahiya
Yuvi took her to nearby deserted corner.Yuvi was holding her and was going closer closer and more closer to her. Ashi could see what he wanted in his eyes.


😍
m cumpletely cumpletely speechlesssss i dunna wat 2 say every moment dat u hav described luks soooooooooo real😍plzzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont very very veryyyyyyyy fastttttttttt coz i luuuuuuuuuv readinnnnnnnnnn i really luuuuuuuuv it n i cant wait 4 da nxt chap sooooooooo u hav 2 b really reallyyyyy fasttttttt 😳 luuuuuuuuv uuuuuuuu gungun 😳
Edited by priyachaku_18 - 17 years ago
gungun thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#16
thanks for appretiating guys it really means alot to me
gungun thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#17

here is the
PART-4

Ashi and Yuvi were so close, there was no void b/w the two bodies or i must say b/w the souls of two. Yuvi was about to kiss Ashi but as soon as she realized that Yuvi's grip is loosened she escaped from there.

Ashi: you can't catch me Yuvraj Dev

Yuvi was left alonebut he was happy . he had a really really really cute smile on his face becoz he knew she was his only. he was l;ost in memories when they were in maurya. he was thanking bhaggu and above him Maurya becoz of which he met his soulmate .

Just then he felt a hand on his shoulder, he turned back to see who he was but he was the last person in the whole world he would like to see at this moment his father YASHWANT Dev. HE HATED him more than he did when he was in maurya. He was responsible for his mother's death. he knew it was an accident 2 yrs ago but he was the raeson for her death. she wanted to fet rid of his slavary and she...................gained it .The only one who lost was Yuvi

Yashwant: Yuvraj beta! main tumse kuch baat karna chahta hoon.

Yuvi: Sorry to correct you main apka beta nahi hoon Mr. Y-A-S-H-W-A-N-T Dev. beta main sirf MERRA Dev ka tha. aur main apne family function mein busy hoon to main aap se baat nahi kar sakta.

and he goes away from there. he said his family functin coz REMIX is his family nowmoreover he was dating Ashi so he was very close to Ahujas.

Scene-2

Ashi was running very fast thinking Yuvi must be following herand she collided with a man . She never expected to see him again in her life. For a sec she was numb but the she recollected herself and just moved on.Even that man didn't utter a word. Yuvi who had seen all this and this increased his anger. He was thinking "Why the hell the two person he hate the most in this world are here."

This is it for part 4 i know it is quite depressinng but next two parts are going to be ultra romantic so i'll try to update asap.

Edited by gungun - 17 years ago
FollowYourHeart thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#18
oh gunnnnnnnnnnnnn i hope it snot adityaaa 😡 i hate him or yd the ficcy was gng sooooooo cutelyyyyyyyyyyy and romanticallyyy i wish yeh bad angle nahi ata but its okiee ay wld get through this as wellll 😳 😳 awesmee part gunnn i love the way u write re and hehe i can feel yuvi's cute smile till hereeee his smile was always at its best wen it had come form watching ahsi or anything related to her and thats becoz she is his happyiest memory his happyiest accomplishment his happyiest achievment and rather his happyness itself 😳 😳 😳 continue soon gun loove youuuu
usharafuddin thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#19
maan!! excited gungun, cont soon!! 😛
p_rox thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#20
ohhhhhhhhhh gungunnnnn 😳 😳 😳 dis part was very veryyyy veryyyy brilliantly ritten 😳 😳 but it was really very sad 😭 plzzzzzzz cont fast 😳 eager 2 kno bout da nxt part 😳 😳 luuuuuuv uuuu gungun 😳 😳 😳

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".