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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part-5

He was thinking "why the two persons he hate the most in world are hereand that aditya woh yahan kya kar raha hai"

Yes it was Aditya. He had became one of well known photographer by then. Since Sumit was unaware of hi deeds he appointed him as photographer for Tia's angagement.

Ashi didn't wanted to spoil her mood so she moved on with the fun she was having and then Sumit called everybody to witness tai and Ranveer exchanging rings.

Tia: Ranveer Tia ne specially tumhare liya ring choose ki hai. I know tumhe bohot pasand aayegi

Ranveer : Tia humein aapki har cheez pasand aati hai aur woh to humare angagement ring hyai kaise pasand nahi ayegi

Tai : Oh Ranveer Tia loves you.

Ranveer: Hum bhi apse bohot pyar karte hain

and someone bring the rings in a plate decorated with rosepetals Tia takes the box Without looking at it shows it to ranveer .

Tia : How is it Ranveer

Ranveer gives wierd expression and when Tia gave a glance she just threw the box And gave expression of being horrified .

Tia : Ewwww! Sssspiderrrrrr Chi Yeh kahan se aaya .Ranveer puhlese save Tia yeh Tia ko bite bhi kar Sakta tha .Ranveer Tai To yeh Soch ke hi darr rahi hai . Ranveer Tia faint ho rahi hai . hold Tia Ranveer

But she realised it was her engagement so she came back to her senses to cuse the one who did that and above it every1 in party was laughing except her, Ranveer, Soniya Even Sumit was laughing and then the devil arrived

Ashi: So Behna how was the surprise( Ashi will always be ashi aur jahan ashi ho wahan excitement ki kami ho hi nahi sakti)

Tia: Oh! Tia ko pehla hi samjh jana chahiya tha aise stupid dirty panks tum jaise punk ke hi ho sakte hain.

Ashi :oh To hai par uske liya brains hone chahiya jo tumhare pass nahi hai

Tia: You.... You punk tia tumhe...

Ashi : Ok!Ok!Ok! I'm sorry(in tia's style)Ashi Ne Socha ki Ashi ki angle sis ki engagement hai to Ashi ko kuch ashi style karna chahiye naa (in ranveer's style) to isse achche tareka humein nahin mila apko surprise kane ka

Yuvi: Aur hum dono ne yeh plan banaya

Ashi : Cyco yeh mera plan tha

Yuvi : Nahi yeh hum dono ka Plan tha

Ashi: Cyco tum mera plan ka Credit kyun le raha ho

Ranveer: Please jiska bhi plan tha ab aap dono ladiye mat aur humari rings kahan hai yeh batiye

Ashi:Kyun Thakur bohoy jaldi hai Tia naam ki pareshani jhelne ki. Main to tumhara hi benefit soch rahi thi .Neways yeh lo Timbo

And They Exchange rings and all clap

Edited by gungun - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwee gunnu dis is lolzz awsom!! 😆 ashi kaa prank was lmao!! 😆 cont soon!! 😛

Edited by usharafuddin - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#23
thanks Hiba but no one else is reading may be I'm a very bad writer I am totaly confused weather Ishould continue it or not coz if no one reads it i shouldn't torture people I feel very sad when no one replies 😭 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
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no hun most ppl'v become really inactive these days!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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duhhhhhhhhh gunnnnnnnnnnnn dnt u dare say u wnt ocntinue ur ficcy or that u r a bad writer trust me u r a mindblowing writerrrrrrrr and i just looove this ficcyyyyyyy

i was busy wid my bro's wedding as u already know thats y i cldnt read it

anywyas i did read it now abhi abhi and oh my god both yd and addy r ther ein the party 😡 😡 but chahe koi kuch bhi kar le this itme their bond is just way too storng to be tethered by such meager people's presance 😳

and hehe that prank which ashi played on timbo thakur was soooooooooooo sooo ashi sortsssssssssss 😳 😳 bilkul shai kaha tuneeeeeee gunnn where theres ashi there definatly cant be any any sign of boredme 😳 and heheeeeeeeee loooooved the cute little ay fight in the end they soo soo wld hav reacted in exactly the same mannerrrrrrrrr 😳 😳

good one gunnnnnnnn and continue wid this one soon and khaberdaar if u again say u dnt write well coz u write aweshmelyyyyyyyyyy 😳 😳

huggyyyyyyyyyyyyy

ps...hope the next one is all romanticcccccccc 😳 😳 oh i can never hav enough of them maaaaaaan 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hayyyyyyyyy gungun 😳 😳 dis part was hillarious i mean 2 say ashi wala part 😆 😆 da prank dat she playd on her behna was 2222 funny 😆 😆 😆 luks lyk she luuuuvsv spiderssss 😆 😆 reqallly eager 4 da nxt part sooooo plzzzzzzz cont veryyyy veryyyyy soooooooon 😳 😳 😳 ahhhhh i luuuuv readin fan ficsssssss😍😍😍
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Posted: 17 years ago
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part-6

Ranveer and tia exchanged their rings and everyone clapped and suddenly the lights went off . Before any1 could reactthey heard thew most awaited voices of evening

Aaye hum jhoom ke yahaan

Masti ka bandna sama

Jayenga rang hum jama

Pehla hum aur baad mein jahan

it was Ashi and yuvi in their black western outfits and they were looking as awesome as always. they started Remix performance and were later joined by ranveer and tia and after that they left the stage for engaged couple . For rest of the evening they were nowhere to be seen

Scene-2

after the baad mein jahan performance

Yuvi: Aashi! ( holding her)lets go I wanna take u somewhere

Ashi: Yuvi ! where ? hey listen.....

and he took her to a beach anmd thatb beach was really beautiful specially coz it was full moon night and it seemed that moon is ther to enlighten that beach with several star twinkling by more over there was no1 except two people deeply in love with each other

this wasn't a suprise for ashi she had somewhat guessed that he wil take her to beach but such a nice beach that was suprising for her and above it completely white setting he had done for her.

four white pillars with white curtains and a small stool table and with just a candle and two white round cushions wher they wre supposed to sit.

ashi never liked romantic setting but this was jut she always wanted to have with yuvi. simple and nice and above it her life Yuvi had done this just for her.

He took her there

just imagine yaar ashi - yuvi in their Indian black outfits sitting in completely white setting under enligtend full moom night .

Yuvi: Ashi mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai

Ashi: Kya?

Yuvi: woh actyally woh

Ashi: duh huh kya whole night woh woh bol kar spend karni hai

Yuvi : Nahi ashi woh mein

Ashi : Again woh woh . Bolo Psycho baat kya hai

Yuvi:( hesitating he gives her something)Ashi mein tumhe yeh dena chahta hoon

Ashi: Kya woh poster gift ka revenge lena chahta ho

and she is shocked to see the thing

Edited by gungun - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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oh my god oh my god oh my gooooooooooooood😍kya part haiiiiiiiiiiii😍oh my god oh my god oh my gooooooooooood😍just imagineeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ay in their stintalating black outfits and that pure white setting😍shucksssssssss this is sooooooooooooooooo perfect gunnnnnnnnnn😍😍😍and beech pe thandi thandi hawa chal ri hogy ashi ki sary ka anchal toh ud hi raha hoga but her hairs would be going hey weir and usse dekh ke yuvi ka dil would go on phislofyingggggggggg😍😍😍shucks gunnnnnnn kyaaaaaaaaaa romantic setting create ki hai yaaaaaaaar seriously am getting the mushy wala wibes all over me☺️☺️☺️\

and what does he gives her gunnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn telll telllllllll telllllllll oh my god does by anyyyyyyyy chance he gave her a ringggggggg as a symbol of his proposal to spend the rest of his life with herrrrrrrrr??☺️☺️😍

i hopeeeeeeee yehi ho what a sweeeeeeeeeeet and simpleeeeeeeeeee proposal and jis honesty ke saath he would propose that would be more than enough for ashi she does not not need nay exquisite setting around her coz her life itself is all about simplicity☺️☺️

am just loving the direciton this fic is taking and i hopeeeeeee theres no woh in between this beautyful pair i wont be able to bear it but teri ficcy ka title only has a woh which always scares me ki kab achanak it owuld take a sad turn..

but continue soon gunnnnnnnnnn dying to know what yuvi actually gave her..😃..and i ofcorse don't need to say that its superbly written😃..coz by now the hwole world knows what a fantastic writer you are👏👏

continue sooooooooon😃

huggyyyyyyyy

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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks smriti for elaborating the idea and for replying😊 and i to agree with u that Im a really good writer thats why no1 is reading the fic😕 but never mind i thougt of posting next part today but i think now i m going to post it later may be after 2-3 days or a week coz i know i m not keeping any1 waiting and as far as u r concerned u kept us waiting for months so itna to hume bhi right hai tumhe pareshan karne ka 😉 😉 😉
Edited by gungun - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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however i got only 1 reply for last part i ,m going to post the next part. This is the part i have been thinking for many days but was unable to format it and when finally when i had done that I can't let myself for not posting it. i dont know how will be so do give ur comments tell me if u don't like anything in it I'll try to correct it in next part
Chao
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