U,Me and Woh AYfic continued page 9

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Posted: 17 years ago
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I my 1st try to write fanfic and thats too about my favourite AY hope you like it even if you don't plz do tell me I wont cont. futher(it has 2 leaps) .

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[ Sometime in our life hum aise mistake kar dete hai ki we lose most precious thing we posses aur hamare pass regret karne ke alava koi aur option nahi hota , par kuch lucky persons ko mistake sudharne ka moka milta hai. Ashi-Yuvi ki life mein bhi kuch aisa hua par kya unhe yeh chance milega] It had been 3 year since "REMIX" left maurya. Maurya was a memory but remix is still on.our couples were togather since then. they loved eachother from bottom of their heart even lovey dovey birds tia-ranveer were having strong relationship. the foursome were in same college . Ashi, yuvi, Tia had taken arts , ashi- yuvi had music as mainstream and tia had opted fashion desingning and ranveer has taken commerce.tia and ashi are sister now but their fights are still on.It is evening and all are assembled at yuvi's place who now lives alone means not with his baddy daddy Yashwant Dev but ashi was with him and thats all what he wanted.Tia and ranveer are going say some thing which is going to be great turning point in foursome's life.

Guess what its going to be?

Part2 Pg 1

Part3-Pg2

PArt4-Pg3

Part5-Pg3

Part6-Pg4

Part7-pg 4

Part8 - pg6

spl part - pg7
continued-pg 9
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Posted: 17 years ago
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WOOWWW gungun it's really interesting frm 1st site!! 😛 😛 plzz cont soon! don make us w8 2 long!!! cont sooooooon!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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WOOWWW gungun it's really interesting frm 1st site!! 😛 😛 plzz cont soon! don make us w8 2 long!!! cont sooooooon!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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WOOWWW gungun it's really interesting frm 1st site!! 😛 😛 plzz cont soon! don make us w8 2 long!!! cont sooooooon!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: usharafuddin

WOOWWW gungun it's really interesting frm 1st site!! 😛 😛 plzz cont soon! don make us w8 2 long!!! cont sooooooon!!!!!!

hey thanks for reading but i don't think much people liked it but i'll continue for sure just for the one who is eager to know the story.

Edited by gungun - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey gungun...the story is really interesting...do continue...eager to read more😃 and if a story is of AY...there is no way I wont like it😉 do cont. soon😳

And its not that no1 liked it...but hardly people came online today...well exams are hanging like a sword on every1's head... soo hardly get time...but i am sure they would like it when they read it😃😳

Do cont. soon with longer part pleejjj😳 Wanting to know what's this story's plot😳 So cont. soon☺️
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Posted: 17 years ago
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part-2
Tia:Tia ek important baat karna chate hai
Ashi:Sister Timblet Please mera achhe mood ko apne fashion talkings se spoil mat karna
ranveer spoke in middle to avoid thier fight
Ranveer:nahi ashi! its more important than that.Hum aap dono ko yeh bataana chahte the ki ......me & tia are getting engaged
Yuvi: Hey congrats bro!
Ashi:(showing fake anger)Timbo hum ghar mein rahte hain but you didn't told me.
Ranveer: Nahi Ashi humnein bhi aaj hi dicide kiya hai aur abhi Sonia aunty aur Sumit uncle se bhi baat karni hai
Ashi: hey thakur don't feel guilty mein to tumhari tang kheech rahi thi. So ab to tumein timbo ke saath flirt karne ka licence milne wala hai (both tia and ranveer blush)
and the day arrived when Tia-ranveer were to get engaged.the party was huge one and it has to be it was business tycoon Sumit Ahuja and top actress Sonia Ray Ahuja's daughter who was getting engaged. Tia was looking her best in traditional outfit and Ranveer was looking more handsome than he ever looked in his outfit. then enter our hero Yuvi in his black sherwani looking damn hot most of girls were looking at him but his eyes are in saerch of love of his life but whre is she?
Suddenly his eyes got fixed onn a person...... a lady wearing a transluscent black sari. He had never seen such a baeutiful woman in his life. He can't believe what he was seeing he pinched himself if he is in dream or realitybut it was real the lady came to him and asked " hey physco why are you staring me am I looking so bad"
Ya that was ashi she wore sari for Tia sake? ya for Tia she wanted her to be happy on he engagement day as she requested her to wear something traditional(but if she would have known that she was going more beautiful than her she would had never said that)
Yuvi:(coming to his senses)No sweetheart you are looking absolutely stuning even if you weren't i would loved the way you were always the only thing she said "I know that" and the hugged each other
(More twists and fun element in coming part)
Edited by gungun - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwwww man, dis is realllyy sweet aww awwww ashi in black saari!!!!! OMGGG! fainting jus by imagining!!!!!!!!!! 😍 😍 awwwwwwww....... blushh.. n uv in black sherwani!!!! aah........ 😍
cont soon!! 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part-3
They hugged(a very cute moment)
Ashi said: Yuvi mein tumhare kuch layi hoon. a very special thing
Yuvi: Really! kya?

Ashi: a gift
Yuvi: Gift!!!!!
(looking bit confused)aur tum. Tum Ashi hi ho na , pehla yeh sari and all this traditional stuff aur ab normal girlfriends(particularly tia types)ki tarah gift woh bhi ab.
Ashi: Apne physco boyfriend ke liya itna toh kar hi sakti hoon
Yuvi was puzzeled and was not convinced what Ashi had said until she actually gave him a gift wrapped in a blue paper very well. he examined it before opening and was convinced it was kind of photoframe he opened it and got angry with what he saw. The had his cartoon searching for brain and his brain was eating grass and on top of it was inscribed
Yuvi ka Brain Holiday par hai
Aur Ghas charne gaya hai

the only words that came out of yuvi's mouth were "Ashi you are dead"

Ashi had already ran from there and Yuvi was chasing her. even in sarri she was running so fast that he couldn't catch her. Suddenly Ashi's own sandel got struck in her own sarri and she was about to fall but how could she get hurt when Yuvi was there( even if a minute ago he wanted to kill her) he catched her before she fall and that very moment all the thoughts he had a min ago just vanished he was lost in ashi's beauty and innocence she had at that very moment on her face.

Ashi:(irritated)I hate wearing this traditional sarri and stuff.I feel so uncomfortable in it

Yuvi:But i love it

Ashi: WHAT?

Yuvi: Ya babes it made you fall in my arms to mera liya yeh world ki best thing hai

Ashi: Whatever

Yuvi:Tumhare itna perfect gift ke bad i think mujhe bhi tumhein kuch dena chahiya

Yuvi took her to nearby deserted corner.Yuvi was holding her and was going closer closer and more closer to her. Ashi could see what he wanted in his eyes.

Ashi: Noo Yuvi

Yuvi. yes Ashi

Ashi: NooYuvi

Yuvi: yes Ashi

And atlast they were so close that they could hear each other's heartbeat, feel each others breath. They wrer lost in eachother's eyes

( this part was for you Hiba hope you like it)

Edited by gungun - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey gungun! really gr8 going! n the last part is awwwww..... read all ur parts ek saath! n gud dat u r continuing jaldi jaldi! 😛 woderwise w8 karna is not my cuppa tea! n yeah the fic is really nice so do continue asap! 😳

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