THE OTHER SIDE OF LOVE- mads,hellraiser - Page 14

Originally posted by: anvesha rulz

awesome mads......so hopefully things r going to fall in place soon

Dont be so sure Ashita....😉

In the Common Room:

"Hey Maate...kya tum mujhe bataogi...tum mujhe yahaan kyun rokna chahti ho?"

"Uhh---vo---actually Ashi...haan...maine kitne dinose tumhare saath kuch share nahi kiya...come on...lets spend some time together....its been so long na...."

"How sweet....."said Ashi smiling and sitting down immediately."Come on lets talk..."

"Haan....sure..."said Vrinda sitting down too.

Just then Sid entered the room....

"Hi Vrinda!Hi Ashi!"

"Uh-huh....so yeh tumhara talk hai huh?"she teased Vrinda.

"No Ashi....yeh toh...Sid tum yahaan?"she tried to act surprised and asked him if he had called Yuvi.

(Ok ppl...please imagine here...Vrinda making signs and Sid assuring her...)

Just then Ashi's phone rang..

"Excuse me.."she said and went to recieve the call.

Sid and Vrinda conversing in low voices.

"Kya hua?Is he coming..."

"Haan...maine use bataa toh diya hai..."

"Gr8....."

"I just hope ki vo band ka reason kaafi ho...."

"What?kiska reason?"

"Band ka...u know dat was the only reason ki vo yahaan aata...maine use kahaan ki Ashi ne band practise rakhi hai...."

"Wow Sid...tum kitne intelligent ho!"said Vrinda sarcastically.

"Thanx..."said Sid smiling.

"IDIOT!!"she said hitting his arm hard.

"Ouch!!TUMHE---"

"Shhhhh!!"

"Ok oK...I mean...tumhe kya ho gaya hai?"

"Sid....cudnt u think of a better reason...ab vo Tia and Ranveer ko bhi saath leke aayega..."

"Oh....haan..."Sid said comprehension drawing on his stupid but sweet face.

"What oh haan....??"

"Believe me Vrinda maine iske baare mein bilkul socha hi nahi tha..."

"Yes I'm sure...kyunki ek kaam karne ko diya....vo bhi nahi kar sake...."she said angrily.

"Ab kya karein?"said Sid apologetically.

"Ab kya....lets pray ki--"

"Hey guys....uhh...sorry Vrinda...I gotta go...urgent kaam hai....main tumse kal baat karoongi ok?Cya Sid...."

"Ashi--"Before either of them cud stop her she had left.

"Thank God!!"said Sid.

"Wat Thank God!!look behind you..."

Ranveer,Tia and Yuvi were entering common room cheerfully.

"Hey guys!!"said Ranveer cheerfully."Banaa...Ashi kahaan hai?"he asked Sid.

"Uh--vo---pata nahi...."

"Pata nahi matlab wat Sid??Huh??Tumne kaha ki usne practise rakhee hai...."

"Haan....lekin use urgent kaam yaad aa gaya..."Vrinda to the rescue.

"Kya?"asked Yuvi automatically but then suddenly remembering dat she wasnt his G.F. anymore "I mean...itna urgent kya hai....ki use band practise abandon karni padi...aur vo bhi...jo usne khud rakhee...."

"U know wat...Tia totally agrees.....yeh Ashi bhi kitni irresponsible hai....ab Tia kya karegi....usne beauty parlour ki appt cancel kar di....ab itni jaldi Tia ko dusri appt kaise milegi....aur phir Tia ko hair-dresser ke paas--"she stopped all of a sudden as if someone had freezed her as she sensed dat all the four heads in the common room were looking at her wid an expression resembling-JUST-SHUT-UP!!

"Hume lagta hai...band practise kal karenge...."said Ranveer b4 ne1 cud say nething offensive to Tia.

"Haan dude..."and Yuvi slapped Sid on the back and went off with a brief "Cya Sid!"

"Bye...."said Sid and looked at Vrinda cautiously as if expecting her to explode.....

She still looked angry but to his gr8 surprise "I'm sorry Sid....mujhe tumse aise rudely baat nahi karni chahiya thi...."

U r right!!he thought but out loud "No its ok Vrinda....main vo deserve karta tha....I goofed it all up..."

"No Sid....Vaise bhi Ashi chalee gayee.....so...."

"Haan...ab hume kuch aur sochna hoga....."

"U r Right....come on lets go...."said Vrinda and they left the common room.

Meanwhile in CCD...

"Toh....tumhare admissions confirm ho gaye Sam?"

"Yup....kal se I'll be officially joining Maurya High....tumhare class mein....isnt dat gr8?"

"U bet dat is!!"said Krish giving her a smile which she returned.

Hey guys.....I've posted part 20 above....plz read it and giv ur valuable comments...😛

Btw Aditya...I didnt mean to be rude or nething....but if u want 2 start a fic...u can start 1 in a new topic.....ppl will post their comments there....if u continue ur fic here....there'll be confusion as mine is totally a Yuvi-Ashi fic whereas urs is a Tia-Ranveer fic...k?Plz understand....😊

i have moved the aditya fan fic into a new post called Aditya_8A Fan fic https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/remix/95045/aditya-8a-fan-fic

Edited by lalit1

on request of mads

good part mads.....I was stupid to expect too much out of sid.....anyways hope they come together soon 😛

Originally posted by: mads

i have moved the aditya fan fic into a new post called Aditya_8A Fan fic https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/remix/95045/aditya-8a-fan-fic

Edited by lalit1

on request of mads

Hey thanx Lalit....I didnt mean to be rude to him...but neways...shud be posting the nxt part today.....😊

Next Day in CCD....

All the seniors as in the 12th std class guys were sitting around the table discussing.....

"Tumha pata hai....class 11 mein ek nayee chick aayi hai....kya naam hai uska--"

"Wow cool dude....tumhe kaise pata?"

"Arre....I saw her....Man!!She's too good yaar!!"said one of them wid the typical expression on his face wen a guy's talking abt some hot girl....

"Guys....woh chick nahi hai.....she's totally diferrent man......aur uski eyes.....they're too good....."

"Kya hum bhi jaan sakte hai yeh kiski baate ho rahi hai?"Meher,Pri,Vrinda,M.P came upto them.

"Sure babes.....11th std mein ek nayee ladki hain....."

"Kaun Sam?"asked Meher casually.

"KYA????"said all the guys together in a loud voice and in a manner dat if someone passed by them they wud think some disaster has happened....

"Kya naam hai?Meher...rewind fast!!"

"Samantha....Sam...par mujhe nahi lagta ki vo tum logon ko koi bhaav degi....she's from London u know....."said Meher.

"Toh kya hua....hum bhi kuch kam nahi hai...."said one of them and evryone agreed in unison.

"Hey..btw...Nakul ko kahin dekha?"Meher now asked them.

"Nahi.....par shayad gaya hoga uske peeche....after all he's Na-kool...."he laughed and gave high five to the guy nxt to him.

"Very funny...."said Meher sarcastically."Well....agar voh aaye.....toh tell him dat I was looking for him...."

"Yeah sure....."

"Hey Vrinda....ruko na...."said one of the guys to her as she was abt to leave wid the rest of them.

"Kya hai..."

"Look Vrinda...please....tum uska intro karo na......u know evryone yaar...."

"Par I dont know her....maine usse abhi tak koi baat bhi nahi ki hai...."

"Please Vrinda...."

"Haan plz....plz...."pleaded evryone and Vrinda being the sugar-hearted agreed.

"Alright!!"they said and Vrinda left.

Meanwhile they were still discussing abt her.

"Wow man.....k guys....who wants to bet ki pehli date pe main uske saath jaoonga??"

"In ur dreams Buddy.....first date toh mere saath hogi...."

"No mere saath....hey btw......Sam.....kitna funny naam hai na?"

"Haan Funny....aur sexy...."(I'm not sure if I'm allowed to use such words on the forum....if its not allowed then mods plz hide it....)

"SHUT UP!!"suddenly someone roared angrily from behind them.

"Its Samantha.....NOT Sam....and she's not ur private property alright?So Get lost all of you!!!"

It was Krish....he was shaking with anger like he'd never been in his whole life.....How dare they......he thought.......how dare they talk abt Sam like dat.....they hav no right....NO right at all......and the glass he was carrying in his hand cracked with a loud noise.....

Originally posted by: fate

but mads wats this aditya fan fic thing????

Are....Aditya is new to the forum and he read my fic....and maybe wanted to start one.....so he continued it here itself....but u know....i thought readers cud get confused as his was a Tia-Ranveer fic.....so i requested him to open up a new post....which i think lalit did.....thats it....😊