THE OTHER SIDE OF LOVE- mads,hellraiser - Page 15

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rikzik thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
first of all hi mads.long time.read ur 3 parts now.
well now wt do i comment?i promised u i will look for words from the dic but basically i didn't.
so.......again the same word.good!
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Posted: 19 years ago
its been so long
pls continue soon
mads thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
Yup i will....actually...i thought the topic had been closed...u know...i cudnt find it in ne of the pgs...but will try to post up soon...maybe tonight itself....
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey mads....this is really getting interesting now...so krish loves sam then....n doesnt know abt it???
rikzik thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: mads

Yup i will....actually...i thought the topic had been closed...u know...i cudnt find it in ne of the pgs...but will try to post up soon...maybe tonight itself....

u actually thought ur topic is closed and didn't bother to tell us???

mads....now now don't be sorry😆u know wt i am talking abt😉

continue soon..i thought u were busy and that's y wasn't continuing so didn't bother to ask

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Posted: 19 years ago
one piece of advice to all fan fic writers please save your fan fics first page as favorites in Internet Explorer
so that u can locate them easily
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Posted: 19 years ago
thanx lalit..good idea...and mads write fast i am bored of waitin...
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: rikzik

u actually thought ur topic is closed and didn't bother to tell us???

mads....now now don't be sorry😆u know wt i am talking abt😉

continue soon..i thought u were busy and that's y wasn't continuing so didn't bother to ask

Well Rikz I wont say..............u know wat....😆But seriously...i thought the mods had closed the topic...so didnt bother to continue it😆......actually i searched abt 20 pgs and cudnt find it....but i'll do wat lalit says...thanx Lalit....

And i'll post the continuation.....

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Posted: 19 years ago

Ok guys....just a quick recap....as its been a long time....actually i need the recap😆

This story is in their 12th std....Ashi-Yuvi r in a wonderful relationship.....There's a boy named Krish who's madly,crazily in love wid Ashi...or so he thinks.....he comes to Maurya to basically 'hav her' as he always says.....Ashi-Yuvi hav no clue as yet abt ne of this......there's something which Ashi is hidng from Yuvi......and he thinks its her feelings and dat she needs a break....so he breaks up wid her....so dat she gets time to think abt the relationship...

Meanwhile Krish is elated to know abt the break-up....his best friend Sam who's come from London has joined him at Maurya.....she's apparently come to help him.....but needless to say....a beautiful London girl...and all the maurya guys r falling hard for her......especially the 12th std 'dudes' Krish hears therm talking rubbish abt her and gets angry like nething.....

So...dat was the Recap....and here's the next part....

CCD.....

"Hey!!"said Sam brightly."Lovely day isnt it?"

"Yeah right....of course its gonna be lovely...wen u hav dozens of guys drooling over you!!"said Krish with clenched teeth.

"What??Krish??Guys r drooling over you.....u say???"she said laughing and pointing her finger at him."Dont tell me Krish....u r not dat bad looking....dat u cant hav girls drooling over u.....actually no...u're not so sweet.....but--"

"I'M TALKING ABT YOU!!!!!"he shouted so suddenly and so fast dat he coughed for abt 15 min.after dat.

Sam cudnt control her laughter."Oh Krish...i love to see you like this.....u look so cute wen u get angry...."she said tears of laughter gushing down her face.

"Shut up!!"he said finally controling his tone."Wat sort of trick did u play???Some magic u've done??Do u hav ne idea wat they were talking abt U???"he asked angrily.

"No...."she replied unperturbed.

"FINE!!"he yelled"Hav it ur way...and GET LOST!!!"

"Ok...."she replied coolly and started to leve the place.

"No Sam....WAIT!!i---i didnt mean dat....i mean--i meant---"he replied suddenly feeling extremely guilty and grasping her hand.

"Krish wat the matter?"she asked in a worried tone."U never speak like dat....wats wrong wid u?"

Wats wrong wid me???he thought to himself.Wats wrong???he asked himself again and again.....but cudnt come up wid ne answer.

"So....hows Ashi?"she asked tentatively.

At the name of Ashi....Krish seemed to forget his momentary feelings abt Sam.....

"Oh gr8!!!"he replied enthusiastically."I mean...did i tell u she had a break-up???Now....now...i'm gonna hav her....."he said with an unusual glint in his eyes.

"Krish...wats wrong???"she asked again."I've never seen u this way b4....u've really changed.....u're no longer the boy I knew...."and wid dat she left him alone....to ponder over wat she had said.....

Meanwhile....outside CCD....Sid and Vrinda desperately seraching for a medium to reunite Ashi and Yuvi had been listening to every word after they had heard the word 'Ashi' being spoken inside......

Now.....they just looked at each other.....both of them thinking on the same lines.....

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Posted: 19 years ago
nice one mads......
and ya lalit it is a good idea...

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