THE OTHER SIDE OF LOVE- mads,hellraiser

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"Stop it!!!"she chided him playfully....she laughed.....so did he.....there was silence except for their soft laughter and their heavy breathing......cool breeze ruffled their hair....perhaps the shed door was open......but they didnt care.....they were lost in their own world."It coudnt have been better,"she thought,her hands lost in his curls.....He pulled her closer and closer until they were locked in a breath-taking kiss that seemed to go on forever.......the smell of his aftershave was too mesmerizing.....she wanted to be in his arms forever........

"CLANG!!"she heard something fall and the sound of feet hurriedly scraping away.....she pulled away instantly.....But he didnt seem to have noticed anything.....

"Hey Ashi....what happened sweetheart?Am I such a bad kisser?"he grinned at her....

"Yuvi....I think we are being followed.....I ignored it before thinking it was my imagiation....but this time I swear Yuvi I heard something....no in fact I heard someone.....Yuvi....there is someone out there......"she said desperately.

He just smiled at her lovingly and looked at her panic-filled eyes......He coudnt imagine how anyone could be so wild and crazy at one instant and yet still so sweet and innocent at the other instant.....that was what he loved the best about her.....She was so unpredictable!

"Come on Ashi....you are tensed about the exams......yeah that's it....there's no one out there but your imagination.....the tension's building up.....I mean the tension of studies of course.....not of...."He winked at her and smiled at her playfully.....

"Duh-huh Yuvi!! This is not a joke.....Be serious....."

"But I am serious....."He kissed her forehead and her nose in quick succession....."But not about wat you are talking...."he leaned forward to kiss her again.....

Tensed though she was....she knew it was just simply impossible to resist herself when she was so close to Yuvi....There was just no point in arguing further.....she sighed and gave up.....and was locked in his arms again.......

He stood outside the shed watching everything......it caused his heart to bleed with pain......Anger swelled up inside him like a volcano erupts.....he wanted nothing more than to smash and rip apart that creep Yuvi....But no.....he knew that would have to wait.....first he had to gain her confidence....she was an year older to him......But he would have her......He just had to have her....."ASHI.......YOU ARE MINE!!"he said out loud and stared and stared at the pic of ashi on his cell.......

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Posted: 19 years ago
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good story but is this a mary sue kind of fan fic
an imaginary character pout in the story
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Well actually Lalit....its just that i've imagined that all of them are in their next year and the guy is in 11th std.....a year junior to all of them.....
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Posted: 19 years ago
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"Stop it!!!"she chided him playfully....she laughed.....so did he.....there was silence except for their soft laughter and their heavy breathing......cool breeze ruffled their hair....perhaps the shed door was open......but they didnt care.....they were lost in their own world."It coudnt have been better,"she thought,her hands lost in his curls.....He pulled her closer and closer until they were locked in a breath-taking kiss that seemed to go on forever.......the smell of his aftershave was too mesmerizing.....she wanted to be in his arms forever........

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thats great

wish we could see this in remix yaar

Edited by lalit1982 - 19 years ago
lalit1 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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oh ok
this is one of those silent love hate stories
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Posted: 19 years ago
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this is gr8 fanfic,love the story,do continue
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome mads 👏 👏 👏 👏......and Lalit I totally agree with u........I am dying to see something like this betwn the 2 of them in remix
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome 👏 👏 👏 continue..........
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Posted: 19 years ago
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gr8 fan fic mads....please continue
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Posted: 19 years ago
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nice going mads 👏 👏 ...but is this DAAR kinds?...looks like this other guy is pretty psycho

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