THE OTHER SIDE OF LOVE- mads,hellraiser - Page 13

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Posted: 20 years ago

Ashi's Room:

"Ashi.....tum thik to ho na.....aur itni subah-subah kahaan chali gayee thi?"asked Vrinda anxiously.

"CCD...."

"Itni subah....."

"Haan....Yuvi ne bulaaya...."

"Lagta hai kal raat ko tum uski dreams mein aayi thi...."said Vrinda giggling.M.P. smiled.

Ashi however remained motionless.

"Tumko kya hua....?asked M.P.looking at Ashi.

"We broke off....."replied Ashi expressionlessly.

There was 2 min.of silence b4 M.P. and Vrinda could sink in the news.

"WHAT????"they both cried together.

"Haan...."replied Ashi finally looking at them.

"Par Ashi kyun....."

"Haan Ashi....achanak yeh sab kyun.....did he give reasons...."asked M.P. anxiously but Vrinda nudged her and they both looked at Ashi.She seemed to be in a deep thought....sure she seemed upset ....they had to be with her....but they knew her too well....at such times she wanted to be left alone.....

"Uhhh Ashi....Vrindeshwari aur mereko kuch kaam hai...."

"Huh--"said Ashi coming back to reality."Of course M.P....you guys carry on....(and then wen Vrinda looked hesistant)...main thik hoon Vrinde.....seriously...now go on...."she replied with a faint smile.

As they left the room....she felt a surge of affection for her two best friends.....she knew they had no work watsoever....but they had understood her needs just then....she didnt need her friends'consoling right now....she needed to think...

She didnt know what......but she knew something was seriously wrong with the way Yuvi was behaving.....I mean she was the one who's supposed to be unpredictable....but it was happening the other way round....'Hey Bhaggu!'tumne sab kuch itna complicated kyun banaaya....Sure she had felt bad wen he broke up with her.....sure she had felt angry.....but not anymore....she knew Yuvi....he just woudnt hurt her like dat....no....there must be reason....but wat.....suddenly she felt annoyed with Yuvi...You psycho!why dont you talk with me once....sab kuch solve ho jaayega.....

She called his cell....but he was either ignoring her call....or most of the times his cell was simply switched off....She tried yet again....

Yuvi's Room:

"Yuvi pick up the phone man....kitni der se baj raha hai....."said Sid irritably.

"Nahi sid.....abhi nahi....I cant talk to her now...."

"Shut up ok....aur dufus ki tarah baat mat karo......kab tak yeh karte rahoge.....aise toh...u'll lose her dude....toh stupid mat bano...and PICK IT UP!!"Sid literally screamed the last 3 words.

"JUST SHUT UP SID!!"said Yuvi louder than Sid."Main jaanta hoon main kya kar raha hoon....alright?"and he left the room leaving his cell ringing.

Sid shaking his head picked up the phone.

"Duh-huh Yuvi"she sounded relieved."Kitni der lagaai....now listen main tumse abhi--"

"Ashi...."

"I dont want to hear anything....tum abhi aa rahe ho common room mein....and remember I love--"

"Ashi..."said Sid again urgently.

"Oh!!Sid....mujhe laga ki Yuvi....vo...I'm sorry..."she finished apologetically.

"Its ok Ashi....Yuvi's gone out..."

"I guessed that...anyways bye...."

"Bye...."

Yuvi....man....yeh sab kyun kar rahe ho.....main feelings aur relationships ke baare mein jyaada kuch nahi jaanta....par yeh sab kuch wrong ho raha hai......that's all I know....

Suddenly a bright idea occured to him....'Common Room'....he remembered wat Ashi had said and went to search Yuvi.

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Posted: 20 years ago
great continuation make sid the uniter please
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Posted: 20 years ago
😆 don't mind but sid getting ideas!!!
i read ur two parts just now...........
keep marching ahead while i follow!nice.....
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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: rikzik

😆 don't mind but sid getting ideas!!!

Yup...😆initially...wen i thought abt it...even i found it funny...but then i thought....y not...every one grows a lil bit in an yr....and it was time i gave him some role....if yuvi's acting dumb in my fic....

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Posted: 20 years ago
well I am falling short of words mads.......all I can say is plz continue soon
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Posted: 20 years ago

On his way...Sid bumped into Vrinda...

"Oh Hi...."said Sid embarassed a little....he still hadnt gotten over his feelings for her.

"Hi Sid....kaise ho?"

"I'm fine....aur tum....?"

"Main thik hoon...."said Vrinda and then sadly."Actually nahi...Ashi ko leke worried hoon....u know she and Yuvi--"

"Yeah I know...."

"Of course....tum yuvi ke best friend ho....tumhe toh pata hoga...."

"Haan..."

"Toh batao....why did he do this all of a sudden....?

"Kyunki tumhari friend confused hai...."

"Kiske baare mein?"

"Apni feelings ko lekar....Aisa Yuvi ko lagta hai...."

"WHAT?Nahi Sid.....Yuvi ko shayad koi misunderstanding ho gayi hai....."

"Kyun....?"

"Kyunki....because....Ashi is very sure abt her feelings....infact usne Soniya aunty ko bhi toh convince kiya hai...aur agar aisi koi baat hoti...toh vo hume jaroor bataati....she doesnt hide nething from us....she loves Yuvi..."

"Toh phir use aisa kyun lagta hai?"

"Pata nahi....but main Ashi ko aise nahi dekh sakti...vo kehti hai ki she's fine...but I know she misses Yuvi...."

"Haan...aur Yuvi bhi...vo bhi Ashi ko miss karta hai.....man....ab kya karein...."

They both looked at each other for sometime and then turned shyly away....suddenly--

"Sid...are u thinking wat I'm thinking?"

"Wat r u thinking...?"

"Lets get them together...."

"Haan...I just remembered something...."said Sid and he cursed himself for forgetting wat he had come for.....his meeting with Vrinda had made him forget....

"Kya....tell fast..."

And he told her abt Ashi's telephone conversation....and his plan...

"Great idea Sid!!"she said giving him a high-five.

"Alright Vrinda....so lets meet in 10 min.again in the common room.....main Yuvi ko abhi bulaata hoon....tum ashi ko rokke rakhna....ok?"

"Ok....see ya..."she replied smiling.

Sid smiled back at her and called Yuvi.

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Posted: 20 years ago
hey mads
first things first i like krish but i looooooooveeeeeeee uv ...see the difference?and i am never ever gonna leave uv...i am not mate vrinde types i take wat is mine....

abt the story too good
but remember uv and tia is like ram n sita romeo and juliet etc etc
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Posted: 20 years ago
gr8 keep moving it fast
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Posted: 20 years ago
awesome mads......so hopefully things r going to fall in place soon
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Posted: 20 years ago
whatever u do
pls pls get ashi n yuvi togete in the end
they cant be apart even in the fan fics

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