Aditya_8A Fan fic

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Cool one. But i expected more creativity. Listen to mine now-


Ranveer is leaving for Sanganer. Summet Ahuja has told him to go away. Ranveer's plan of revenge was ruined by Arjun. Tia's home. Tia and Sumeet Ahuja are talking-

Tia-(Crying) Pappa, aap ne aisa kyun kiya. Aap...aap jante hain ki main Ranveer ke bina nahi reh sakti, phir kyun pappa....kyun?

Sumeet- Tia! Tum Ranveer se abhi bhi pyaar karte ho. (Comprehension dawning on his face) Ab samjha kyun Ranveer chupchap chala gaya. Main jab uske saath baat karne gaya tha tab woh mujhko mara nahi ya phir koi hamla nahin kiya. Tia....... Ranveer ne tumhare saath pyaar ka natak nahi kiya tha. Sab sach tha Tia....sab sach tha

Tia- Ab main kya karu....pappa, pappa... mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai. Kya hoga Ranveer ko. Pappa, kuch bolo na.

Sumeet- (Suddenly) Tia, jao.
Tia- Kya?
Sumeet- Ha Tia. Jaldi airport jao. Ranveer ab bhi waha hoga. Jaldi jao varna tum use zindagi bhar ke liye kho baethoge. Main ab manta hoon ki Ranveer se zyada tumhe aur koi itna pyaar nahi kar sakta. Jao, Tia....jao.

Tia leaves in rush. Goes to the airport
Scene 2- Inside the plane.

A line is coming up. Within them is Ranveer.

Hostess- Sabhi yatrio ko yeh suchana di jati hai ki jaldi apne apne seat par baeth jaye. Take-off kuch hi samay ke baad hoga.

Ranveer is going to take his seat when-

Tia- RANVEER!

Ranveer- Tia! Aap yaha kya kar rahe ho.

Tia- Ranveer. Please ranveer mat jao. Maurya High ka kya hoga, Remix ka kya hoga...... meri kya hogi.

Ranveer- Tia, aap ne to mujhse kabhi pyaar karti bhi nahi thi. Aap ke dil mein to mere liye koi jagah nahi hai.

Tia- Nahi...nahi, Ranveer, bilkul nahi. Maine aaj tak sirf tumse pyaar kiya hai...aur kisise bhi nahi.

Ranveer-(Breaks down) Jhoot. Aap.....jhoot. Nahi Tia. Mujhko Sanganer wapas jana hoga. Ab yahan mera koi jagah nahi hain.

Tia- Ranveer. Pyaar kiya maine sirf tumse. Mat jao.

Ranveer- Aap ka pappa to mujhe Mumbai mein nahin rehne denge.

Tia- Nahi Ranveer, woh to tumko wapas chahta hai. Please Ranveer. Mat Jao.

Hostess- Flight ki ab sirf 10 minute baki hain. Sab yatri apne seat belt bandh le.

Tia- Ranveer...Ranveer please. Mat jao. Tia ke liye, Tia ke pyaar ke liye.

Ranveer- Tia! (Comes very close) Tia, main bhi tumse bahut pyaar karta hoon. (Crying, he holds her tight, never to let go)


Thank u. I would appreciate all my viewers opinions on it.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aditya_8A

Cool one. But i expected more creativity. Listen to mine now-


Ranveer is leaving for Sanganer. Summet Ahuja has told him to go away. Ranveer's plan of revenge was ruined by Arjun. Tia's home. Tia and Sumeet Ahuja are talking-

Tia-(Crying) Pappa, aap ne aisa kyun kiya. Aap...aap jante hain ki main Ranveer ke bina nahi reh sakti, phir kyun pappa....kyun?

Sumeet- Tia! Tum Ranveer se abhi bhi pyaar karte ho. (Comprehension dawning on his face) Ab samjha kyun Ranveer chupchap chala gaya. Main jab uske saath baat karne gaya tha tab woh mujhko mara nahi ya phir koi hamla nahin kiya. Tia....... Ranveer ne tumhare saath pyaar ka natak nahi kiya tha. Sab sach tha Tia....sab sach tha

Tia- Ab main kya karu....pappa, pappa... mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai. Kya hoga Ranveer ko. Pappa, kuch bolo na.

Sumeet- (Suddenly) Tia, jao.
Tia- Kya?
Sumeet- Ha Tia. Jaldi airport jao. Ranveer ab bhi waha hoga. Jaldi jao varna tum use zindagi bhar ke liye kho baethoge. Main ab manta hoon ki Ranveer se zyada tumhe aur koi itna pyaar nahi kar sakta. Jao, Tia....jao.

Tia leaves in rush. Goes to the airport
Scene 2- Inside the plane.

A line is coming up. Within them is Ranveer.

Hostess- Sabhi yatrio ko yeh suchana di jati hai ki jaldi apne apne seat par baeth jaye. Take-off kuch hi samay ke baad hoga.

Ranveer is going to take his seat when-

Tia- RANVEER!

Ranveer- Tia! Aap yaha kya kar rahe ho.

Tia- Ranveer. Please ranveer mat jao. Maurya High ka kya hoga, Remix ka kya hoga...... meri kya hogi.

Ranveer- Tia, aap ne to mujhse kabhi pyaar karti bhi nahi thi. Aap ke dil mein to mere liye koi jagah nahi hai.

Tia- Nahi...nahi, Ranveer, bilkul nahi. Maine aaj tak sirf tumse pyaar kiya hai...aur kisise bhi nahi.

Ranveer-(Breaks down) Jhoot. Aap.....jhoot. Nahi Tia. Mujhko Sanganer wapas jana hoga. Ab yahan mera koi jagah nahi hain.

Tia- Ranveer. Pyaar kiya maine sirf tumse. Mat jao.

Ranveer- Aap ka pappa to mujhe Mumbai mein nahin rehne denge.

Tia- Nahi Ranveer, woh to tumko wapas chahta hai. Please Ranveer. Mat Jao.

Hostess- Flight ki ab sirf 10 minute baki hain. Sab yatri apne seat belt bandh le.

Tia- Ranveer...Ranveer please. Mat jao. Tia ke liye, Tia ke pyaar ke liye.

Ranveer- Tia! (Comes very close) Tia, main bhi tumse bahut pyaar karta hoon. (Crying, he holds her tight, never to let go)


Thank u. I would appreciate all my viewers opinions on it.

Hey Aditya....I dont want to be selfish or nething but this is my post and can u plz start ur fic on a new topic....dont mind plz....but its just dat....suddenly in a Yuvi-Ashi fic...u cant hav a Tia-Ranveer fic...the readers will get confused yaar....😕

Plz...I hope u didnt mind....btw...the part u wrote was good...😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
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And welcum to the forum...😊

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