THE OTHER SIDE OF LOVE- mads,hellraiser - Page 11

now mads seems lik you have decided to kill me.........with suspense i mean 😉

👏 👏 now i am trying to go inside ur mind to find wt u r thinking but to no avail...so pls continue fast!

I agree with priyanka....ur fic is really good.....but plz out with suspense now......cant seem to bear it any longer

Nope....not so easily Ashita....'Patience is the best Virtue....'😉

totally agree with priyankan ashita ,u r killing us with suspense 😉

that is a fntastic fan fic totally different but very interseting
though i think i have guessed what u r trying to write
good story it will make

awwesum story
keep writin 👏

wow....the story is going really nicely...loved reading the last three parts...sorry havent been able to read them before...going a bit crazy with studies....but keep writting...i absolutely love reading ur fan fic 👏

Originally posted by: lalit1982

that is a fntastic fan fic totally different but very interseting
though i think i have guessed what u r trying to write
good story it will make

Oh No Lalit.....tumse to kuch bhi nahi chhup sakta....😆Can u plz PM me and tell me wat is it dat u know.....or u feel....maybe ur idea's better than mine.....plz.....i really need ideas....i'm running out of them.....

In CCD....

"Didnt you hear wat I said???" he roared his patience getting the better of him "I said DONT USE THOSE LINES!!"

"Oh Yeah!!And who are you to tell me that??"she flared up in equal though mock anger.

Yuvi's room:

"Dude....tum yeh kya keh rahe ho???Have you gone nuts......"asked Sid with a look of disbelief on his face."Tum ekdum crazy ho gaye ho......"

"Sid please....."

"Ok Dude....I'm sorry...."said Sid apologetically."Par achanak....yeh sab kyun....."

"Kyunki use waqt chahiye....apni feelings ko jaanne ke liye.....samajhne ke liye.....because Sid....main uspe koi bhi pressure nahi daalna chahta...."

"Kya usne tumse yeh kaha...."

"No Sid.....but wat does that matter......Look....if you love someone truly....then tumhe uski feelings samajhni chahiye.....aur main Ashi ko jaanta hoon.....vo khud yeh baat mujhse kabhi nahi kehti....."he replied with emotion.

"Par Yuvi....tumhe nahi lagta ki tum jaldbaazi har rahe ho....."

"Noways Sid.....noways....I'm sure about this decision.....and maybe Sid.....maybe....wen we come together again.....we'll be more close than ever.....aur uske liye....if I've to sacrifice a little....then I'm ready to do that for her............." "kya hua?"he added to Sid who was staring at him.

"Dude tum badal gaye ho....you've changed......."

"Say something different Sid.....tum yeh line mujhe 1000 times suna chuke ho...."said Yuvi laughing."Tum nahi samjhoge Sid....wen You'll fall in love........then you'll know......"he said smiling at Ashi's thought.

In CCD.....

"Who am I you ask.....Well let me remind you....I'm ur best friend of 10 yrs.........remember??Ya abhi bhi memory loss hain??"

"Ok Ok Mr.Romeo!!!Lagta hai tum usse bahut pyaar karte ho....."she replied laughing."Mujhe nahi pata tha that meri itnisi baat tumhe buri lagegi......"

"Yeh itnisi baat nahi hai......"

"Ok now cheer up......."

"Fine...but this is the last time I'm telling you---"

"---dont even try to think of being like her......"she said imitating his voice.

"Right.....keep that in mind........"he replied still looking surly.

"Aye Aye Boss!!!"she replied laughing and saluting him

Krish had to laugh.....he just couldnt get angry on her....just couldnt get angry on Samantha.....

"Wat??"she said snapping her fingers in front of him as he was staring in horizon.....

"Nothing....just wanted to say.....Thanx a lot Sam......"he replied with a warm smile."You are here for me wen I need you the most....."

"Well........."she replied with a naughty expression in her black eyes."Who said I came back to India for you......"

"KRISH!!!!"yelled his boss angrily before he could reply."Pehle customers....ab friends.....kal kise laoge.....come here and get to work...."

"Yeah right boss.....coming......Ok Sam....gotta go....."

"Yup.....Cya....."she replied smiling.

"Ashi.....we should break off for sometime....."

"Ashi.....we should--"

"Ashi......break off---"

She could remember nothing......nothing except two Words....Ashi....break off......why.....kaise.......wat went wrong.....a 1000 qestions erupted in her mind......Kyun yuvi......aisa kya ho gaya......

"Ashi...I know you need time to understand your feelings...."

Wat feelings Yuvi.....dodo....in fact I was the first one to realise my feelings for you.....I'm so sure about my feelings for you.....ki maine mamma ko bhi hamare relationship ke baare mein convince kar liya......agar main sure nahi hoti.....toh main yeh kaise kar paati.....and you are saying.....ki main confused hoon......confused main nahi.....confused tum ho......you didnt know wat you were saying......

She tried to call his cell......but it was off......

Everywhere in CCD people were having a gala time.

"Hey tumne suna kya.....vo Laila hai na--"

"Ya....I know how sweet na......U bet--"

"Par Tia ne toh us cream ke baare mein magazine mein--"

"Dude tumne vo hot chick dekhi....I tell u man---"

She couldnt bear any more.....fresh tears had started to fall from her eyes again....she got up from her table and left the place.....

well heap of misunderstandings u have created.......will wait and watch how u erode them......... 😉
good 👏 👏 👏